Founded on an Old French Legend

Adelaide Anne Procter (1825–1864) · 1861

iambic tetrameter · 96 lines · from Legends and Lyrics: Second Series

The fettered Spirits lingerIn purgatorial pain,With penal fires effacingTheir last faint earthly stain,Which Life's imperfect sorrowHad tried to cleanse in vain.

Yet on each feast of MaryTheir sorrow finds release,For the Great Archangel MichaelComes down and bids it cease;And the name of these brief respitesIs called "Our Lady's Peace."

Yet once--so runs the Legend--When the Archangel cameAnd all these holy spiritsRejoiced at Mary's name;One voice alone was wailing,Still wailing on the same.

And though a great Te DeumThe happy echoes woke,This one discordant wailingThrough the sweet voices broke;So when St. Michael questioned,Thus the poor spirit spoke:-

"I am not cold or thankless,Although I still complain;I prize our Lady's blessingAlthough it comes in vainTo still my bitter anguish,Or quench my ceaseless pain.

"On earth a heart that loved me,Still lives and mourns me there,And the shadow of his anguishIs more than I can bear;All the torment that I sufferIs the thought of his despair.

"The evening of my bridalDeath took my Life away;Not all Love's passionate pleadingCould gain an hour's delay.And he I left has sufferedA whole year since that day.

"If I could only see him,--If I could only goAnd speak one word of comfortAnd solace,--then, I knowHe would endure with patience,And strive against his woe."

Thus the Archangel answered:-"Your time of pain is brief,And soon the peace of HeavenWill give you full relief;Yet if his earthly comfortSo much outweighs your grief,

"Then, through a special mercyI offer you this grace,--You may seek him who mourns youAnd look upon his face,And speak to him of comfortFor one short minute's space.

"But when that time is ended,Return here, and remainA thousand years in torment,A thousand years in pain:Thus dearly must you purchaseThe comfort he will gain."

The Lime-trees' shade at eveningIs spreading broad and wide;Beneath their fragrant arches,Pace slowly, side by side,In low and tender converse,A Bridegroom and his Bride.

The night is calm and stilly,No other sound is thereExcept their happy voices:What is that cold bleak airThat passes through the Lime-treesAnd stirs the Bridegroom's hair?

While one low cry of anguish,Like the last dying wailOf some dumb, hunted creature,Is borne upon the gale:-Why does the Bridegroom shudderAnd turn so deathly pale?

Near Purgatory's entranceThe radiant Angels wait;It was the great St. MichaelWho closed that gloomy gate,When the poor wandering spiritCame back to meet her fate.

"Pass on," thus spoke the Angel:"Heaven's joy is deep and vast;Pass on, pass on, poor Spirit,For Heaven is yours at last;In that one minute's anguishYour thousand years have passed."

Words in this poem

fettered a.
Seeming as if fettered, as the feet pf certain animals which bend backward, and appear unfit for walking.
purgatorial a.
Of or pertaining to purgatory; expiatory.
archangel n.
A chief angel; one high in the celestial hierarchy. [L. archangelus, Gr. archangel, F. archange. See Arch-, pref., and Angel.]
broke v. i.
To transact business for another. Brome. [See Broker, and cf. Brook.]
spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
thankless a.
Not acknowledging favors; not expressing thankfulness; unthankful; ungrateful.
ceaseless a.
Without pause or end; incessant.
solace n.
Comfort in grief; alleviation of grief or anxiety; also, that which relieves in distress; that which cheers or consoles; relief. [OF. solas, ssoulaz, L. solacium, solatium, fr. solari to comfort, console. Cf. Console, v. t.]
bridegroom n.
A man newly married, or just about to be married. [OE. bridegome, brudgume, AS. br (akin to OS. br, D. bruidegom, bruigom, OHG. pr, MHG. briutegome, G. bräutigam); AS. br bride + guma man, akin to Goth. guma, Ic]
stilly a.
Still; quiet; calm.
deathly a.
Deadly; fatal; mortal; destructive.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Founded on an Old French Legend is in the public domain. This text is taken from Legends and Lyrics. Part 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #2304; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Founded on an Old French Legend is 96 lines in 16 stanzas of 6 lines each. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A-A linger · painA · effacing · stainA · sorrow · vainA
  2. 2 -A-A-A mary · releaseA · michael · ceaseA · respites · peaceA
  3. 3 -A-A-A legend · cameA · spirits · nameA · wailing · sameA
  4. 4 -A-A-A deum · wokeA · wailing · brokeA · questioned · spokeA
  5. 5 -A-A-A thankless · complainA · blessing · vainA · anguish · painA
  6. 6 -A-A-A me · thereA · anguish · bearA · suffer · despairA
  7. 7 -A-A-A bridal · awayA · pleading · delayA · suffered · dayA
  8. 8 -A-A-A him · goA · comfort · knowA · patience · woeA
  9. 9 -A-A-A answered · briefA · heaven · reliefA · comfort · griefA
  10. 10 -A-A-A mercy · graceA · you · faceA · comfort · spaceA
  11. 11 -A-A-A ended · remainA · torment · painA · purchase · gainA
  12. 12 -A-A-A evening · wideA · arches · sideA · converse · brideA
  13. 13 -ABABA stilly · thereA · voicesB · airA · treesB · hairA
  14. 14 -A-A-A anguish · wailA · creature · galeA · shudder · paleA
  15. 15 -A-AAA entrance · waitA · michael · gateA · spiritA · fateA
  16. 16 -A-A-A angel · vastA · spirit · lastA · anguish · passedA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The fettered Spirits linger8·/˘˘/˘/˘
In purgatorial pain,6······
With penal fires effacing8·/˘/˘˘/˘
Their last faint earthly stain,6···/˘·
Which Life's imperfect sorrow7··˘/˘/˘
Had tried to cleanse in vain.6······
Yet on each feast of Mary7·····/˘
Their sorrow finds release,6·/˘·˘/
For the Great Archangel Michael8····/˘/˘
Comes down and bids it cease;6······
And the name of these brief respites8······/˘
Is called "Our Lady's Peace."8··˘/˘/˘·
Yet once--so runs the Legend--7·····/˘
When the Archangel came6···/˘·
And all these holy spirits7···/˘/˘
Rejoiced at Mary's name;7˘/˘·/˘·
One voice alone was wailing,7··˘/·/˘
Still wailing on the same.6·/˘···
And though a great Te Deum6······
The happy echoes woke,6·/˘/˘·
This one discordant wailing7··˘/˘/˘
Through the sweet voices broke;6···/˘·
So when St. Michael questioned,8···/˘/˘˘
Thus the poor spirit spoke:-6···/˘·
"I am not cold or thankless,7·····/˘
Although I still complain;6····˘/
I prize our Lady's blessing8··/˘/˘/˘
Although it comes in vain6······
To still my bitter anguish,7···/˘/˘
Or quench my ceaseless pain.6···/˘·
"On earth a heart that loved me,8······˘·
Still lives and mourns me there,6······
And the shadow of his anguish8··/···/˘
Is more than I can bear;6······
All the torment that I suffer8··/···/˘
Is the thought of his despair.7·····˘/
"The evening of my bridal7·/˘··/˘
Death took my Life away;6····˘/
Not all Love's passionate pleading8···/˘˘/˘
Could gain an hour's delay.7···/˘˘/
And he I left has suffered8·····/˘˘
A whole year since that day.6······
"If I could only see him,--7···/˘··
If I could only go6···/˘·
And speak one word of comfort7·····/˘
And solace,--then, I know6·/˘···
He would endure with patience,7··˘/·/˘
And strive against his woe."6······
Thus the Archangel answered:-8···/˘/˘˘
"Your time of pain is brief,6······
And soon the peace of Heaven7·····/˘
Will give you full relief;6····˘/
Yet if his earthly comfort7···/˘/˘
So much outweighs your grief,6··/···
"Then, through a special mercy7···/˘/˘
I offer you this grace,--6·/˘···
You may seek him who mourns you7·······
And look upon his face,6······
And speak to him of comfort7·····/˘
For one short minute's space.6···/˘·
"But when that time is ended,7·····/˘
Return here, and remain6˘/··˘/
A thousand years in torment,7·/˘··/·
A thousand years in pain:6·/˘···
Thus dearly must you purchase7·/˘··/˘
The comfort he will gain."6·/˘···
The Lime-trees' shade at evening7·····/˘
Is spreading broad and wide;6·/˘···
Beneath their fragrant arches,7···/˘/˘
Pace slowly, side by side,6·/˘···
In low and tender converse,7···/˘/˘
A Bridegroom and his Bride.6·/····
The night is calm and stilly,7·····/˘
No other sound is there6·/˘···
Except their happy voices:7···/˘/˘
What is that cold bleak air6······
That passes through the Lime-trees7·/˘····
And stirs the Bridegroom's hair?6···/··
While one low cry of anguish,7·····/˘
Like the last dying wail6···/˘·
Of some dumb, hunted creature,7···/˘/˘
Is borne upon the gale:-6······
Why does the Bridegroom shudder7···/·/˘
And turn so deathly pale?6···/˘·
Near Purgatory's entrance7·/˘·˘/˘
The radiant Angels wait;7·/˘˘/˘·
It was the great St. Michael7·····/˘
Who closed that gloomy gate,7··˘·/˘·
When the poor wandering spirit8···/˘˘/˘
Came back to meet her fate.6······
"Pass on," thus spoke the Angel:7·····/˘
"Heaven's joy is deep and vast;7/˘·····
Pass on, pass on, poor Spirit,7·····/˘
For Heaven is yours at last;7·/˘····
In that one minute's anguish7···/˘/˘
Your thousand years have passed."7·/˘···˘

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