Helgakvitha Hundingsbana II: The Second Lay of Helgi Hundingsbane IV

Anonymous (about 1000), translated by Henry Adams Bellows · 1923

trochaic pentameter · unrhymed · 20 lines · from The Poetic Edda

“Who is the king | who captains the fleet,And to the land | the warriors leads?”

“Never shall Sigrun | from Sevafjoll,Hothbrodd king, | be held in thine arms;Granmar’s sons | full cold have grown,And the giant-steeds gray | on corpses gorge.”

“Maid, not fair | is all thy fortune,The Norns I blame | that this should be;This morn there fell | at FrekasteinBragi and Hogni | beneath my hand.

“At Hlebjorg fell | the sons of Hrollaug,Starkath the king | at Styrkleifar;Fighters more noble | saw I never,The body fought when | the head had fallen.

“On the ground full low | the slain are lying,Most are there | of the men of thy race;Nought hast thou won, | for thy fate it wasBrave men to bring | to the battle-field.”

“To life would I call | them who slaughtered lie,If safe on thy breast I might be.”

Words in this poem

shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
morn n.
The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Helgakvitha Hundingsbana II: The Second Lay of Helgi Hundingsbane IV is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poetic Edda, Project Gutenberg ebook #73533, the Henry Adams Bellows translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Helgakvitha Hundingsbana II: The Second Lay of Helgi Hundingsbane IV is 20 lines in 6 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is trochaic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 74%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.8 syllables. 4 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 10% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in trochaic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 6 AA lieA · beA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
“Who is the king | who captains the fleet,9·····/˘··
And to the land | the warriors leads?”9·····/˘˘·
“Never shall Sigrun | from Sevafjoll,9/˘·······
Hothbrodd king, | be held in thine arms;8········
Granmar’s sons | full cold have grown,7·······
And the giant-steeds gray | on corpses gorge.”10··/˘···/˘·
“Maid, not fair | is all thy fortune,8······/˘
The Norns I blame | that this should be;8········
This morn there fell | at Frekastein8········
Bragi and Hogni | beneath my hand.9·········
“At Hlebjorg fell | the sons of Hrollaug,9·········
Starkath the king | at Styrkleifar;8········
Fighters more noble | saw I never,9/˘·/˘··/˘
The body fought when | the head had fallen.10·/˘·····/˘
“On the ground full low | the slain are lying,10········/˘
Most are there | of the men of thy race;9·········
Nought hast thou won, | for thy fate it was9·········
Brave men to bring | to the battle-field.”9······/˘·
“To life would I call | them who slaughtered lie,10·······/˘·
If safe on thy breast I might be.”8········

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