Prisoner’s Evening Song
We see no more in thy pure skies,How soft, O God! the sunset dies;How every colour’d hill and woodSeems melting in the golden flood:Yet, by the precious memories wonFrom bright hours now for ever gone,Father! o’er all thy works, we know,Thou still art shedding beauty’s glow;Still touching every cloud and treeWith glory, eloquent of thee;Still feeding all thy flowers with light,Though man hath barr’d it from our sight.We know thou reign’st, the Unchanging One, the All-just!And bless thee still with free and boundless trust!
We read no more, O God! thy waysOn earth, in these wild, evil days.The red sword in the oppressor’s handIs ruler of the weeping land;Fallen are the faithful and the pure,No shrine is spared, no hearth secure.Yet, by the deep voice from the past,Which tells us these things cannot last--And by the hope which finds no arkSave in thy breast, when storms grow dark--We trust thee! As the sailor knowsThat in its place of bright reposeHis pole-star burns, though mist and cloudMay veil it with a midnight shroud,We know thou reign’st, All-holy One, All-just!And bless thee still with love’s own boundless trust.
We feel no more that aid is nigh,When our faint hearts within us die.We suffer--and we know our doomMust be one suffering till the tomb.Yet, by the anguish of thy SonWhen his last hour came darkly on;By his dread cry, the air which rentIn terror of abandonment;And by his parting word, which roseThrough faith victorious o’er all woes--We know that thou may’st wound, may’st breakThe spirit, but wilt ne’er forsake!Sad suppliants whom our brethren spurn,In our deep need to thee we turn!To whom but thee? All-merciful, All-just!In life, in death, we yield thee boundless trust!
Words in this poem
- oppressor n.
- One who oppresses; one who imposes unjust burdens on others; one who harasses others with unjust laws or unreasonable severity. [L.]
- spurn v. t.
- To drive back or away, as with the foot; to kick. [OE. spurnen to kick against, to stumble over, AS. spurnan to kick, offend; akin to spura spur, OS. & OHG. spurnan to kick, Icel. spyrna, L. spernere to despise,]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Prisoner’s Evening Song is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poems of Felicia Hemans, Project Gutenberg ebook #66785; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Felicia Hemans, Prisoner’s Evening Song, in Poems (1808–1835), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #66785, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hemans-poems/prisoner-s-evening-song.html, id L19728.
Form and metre
Prisoner’s Evening Song is 46 lines in 3 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 91% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 87%).
See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AABB--CCDDEEFF skiesA · diesA · woodB · floodB · won · gone · knowC · glowC · treeD · theeD · lightE · sightE · justF · trustF
- 2 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHH waysA · daysA · handB · landB · pureC · secureC · pastD · lastD · arkE · darkE · knowsF · reposeF · cloudG · shroudG · justH · trustH
- 3 AABB--CCDDEEFFGG nighA · dieA · doomB · tombB · son · on · rentC · abandonmentC · roseD · woesD · breakE · forsakeE · spurnF · turnF · justG · trustG
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| We see no more in thy pure skies, | 8 | ········ |
| How soft, O God! the sunset dies; | 8 | ·····/·· |
| How every colour’d hill and wood | 8 | ·/˘/˘··· |
| Seems melting in the golden flood: | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Yet, by the precious memories won | 8 | ···/˘/˘· |
| From bright hours now for ever gone, | 8 | ··/··/˘· |
| Father! o’er all thy works, we know, | 8 | /˘······ |
| Thou still art shedding beauty’s glow; | 8 | ···/˘/˘· |
| Still touching every cloud and tree | 8 | ·/˘/˘··· |
| With glory, eloquent of thee; | 8 | ·/˘/˘˘·· |
| Still feeding all thy flowers with light, | 8 | ·/˘··/·· |
| Though man hath barr’d it from our sight. | 8 | ······/· |
| We know thou reign’st, the Unchanging One, the All-just! | 12 | ·····˘/˘···· |
| And bless thee still with free and boundless trust! | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| We read no more, O God! thy ways | 8 | ········ |
| On earth, in these wild, evil days. | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| The red sword in the oppressor’s hand | 9 | ·····˘/˘· |
| Is ruler of the weeping land; | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Fallen are the faithful and the pure, | 9 | /˘··/˘··· |
| No shrine is spared, no hearth secure. | 8 | ······˘/ |
| Yet, by the deep voice from the past, | 8 | ········ |
| Which tells us these things cannot last-- | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| And by the hope which finds no ark | 8 | ········ |
| Save in thy breast, when storms grow dark-- | 8 | ········ |
| We trust thee! As the sailor knows | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| That in its place of bright repose | 8 | ······˘/ |
| His pole-star burns, though mist and cloud | 8 | ········ |
| May veil it with a midnight shroud, | 8 | ·····/·· |
| We know thou reign’st, All-holy One, All-just! | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| And bless thee still with love’s own boundless trust. | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| We feel no more that aid is nigh, | 8 | ········ |
| When our faint hearts within us die. | 8 | ·/······ |
| We suffer--and we know our doom | 8 | ·/˘···/· |
| Must be one suffering till the tomb. | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| Yet, by the anguish of thy Son | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| When his last hour came darkly on; | 8 | ···/·/˘· |
| By his dread cry, the air which rent | 8 | ········ |
| In terror of abandonment; | 8 | ·/˘·˘/˘˘ |
| And by his parting word, which rose | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| Through faith victorious o’er all woes-- | 8 | ··˘/˘··· |
| We know that thou may’st wound, may’st break | 8 | ········ |
| The spirit, but wilt ne’er forsake! | 8 | ·/˘···˘/ |
| Sad suppliants whom our brethren spurn, | 8 | ····//˘· |
| In our deep need to thee we turn! | 8 | ·/······ |
| To whom but thee? All-merciful, All-just! | 9 | ·····/˘·· |
| In life, in death, we yield thee boundless trust! | 10 | ·······/˘· |
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