The Beaeten Path

William Barnes (1801–1886) · 1844–1862

iambic tetrameter · 50 lines · from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect

The beaeten path where vo'k do meetA-comen on vrom vur an' near;How many errands had the veetThat wore en out along so clear!Where eegrass bleaedes be green in meaed,Where bennets up the leaeze be brown,An' where the timber bridge do leaedAthirt the cloty brook to town,Along the path by mile an' mile,Athirt the yield, an' brook, an' stile,

There runnen childern's hearty laughDo come an' vlee along--win' swift:The wold man's glossy-knobbed staffDo help his veet so hard to lift;The maid do bear her basket by,A-hangen at her breaethen zide;An' ceaereless young men, straight an' spry,Do whissle hwome at eventide,Along the path, a-reachen byBelow tall trees an' oben sky.

There woone do goo to jay a-head;Another's jay's behind his back.There woone his vu'st long mile do tread,An' woone the last ov all his track.An' woone mid end a hopevul road,Wi' hopeless grief a-teaeken on,As he that leaetely vrom abroadCome hwome to seek his love a-gone,Noo mwore to tread, wi' comely eaese,The beaeten path athirt the leaeze.

In tweilsome hardships, year by year,He drough the worold wander'd wide,Still bent, in mind, both vur an' nearTo come an' meaeke his love his bride.An' passen here drough evenen dewHe heaesten'd, happy, to her door,But vound the wold vo'k only two,Wi' noo mwore vootsteps on the vloor,To walk ageaen below the skies,Where beaeten paths do vall an' rise;

Vor she wer gone vrom e'thly eyesTo be a-kept in darksome sleep,Until the good ageaen do riseA-jay to souls they left to weep.The rwose wer doust that bound her brow;The moth did eat her Zunday ceaepe;Her frock wer out o' fashion now;Her shoes wer dried up out o' sheaepe--The shoes that woonce did glitter blackAlong the leaezes beaeten track.

Words in this poem

stile n.
A pin set on the face of a dial, to cast a shadow; a style. See Style. Moxon. [See Style.]
wold n.
A wood; a forest. [OE. wold, wald, AS. weald, wald, a wood, forest; akin to OFries. & OS. wald, D. woud, G. wald, Icel. völlr, a field, and probably to Gr. va a garden, inclosure.]
spry a.
Having great power of leaping or running; nimble; active. [U.S. [Cf. dial. Sw. sprygg lively, skittish, and E. sprag.]
eventide n.
The time of evening; evening. [AS. æfentid. See Tide.]
darksome a.
Dark; gloomy; obscure; shaded; cheerless.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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The Beaeten Path is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect, Project Gutenberg ebook #21785; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The Beaeten Path is 50 lines in 5 stanzas of 10 lines each. The commonest rhyme scheme is ABABCDCDEE, in 2 of the 5 stanzas; the rest vary or could not be confirmed. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 99% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.1 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 24% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCDCDEE meetA · nearB · veetA · clearB · meaedC · brownD · leaedC · townD · mileE · stileE
  2. 2 ABABCDCDCC laughA · swiftB · staffA · liftB · byC · zideD · spryC · eventideD · byC · skyC
  3. 3 ABAB-C-C-- headA · backB · treadA · trackB · road · onC · abroad · goneC · eaese · leaeze
  4. 4 ABABCDCDEE yearA · wideB · nearA · brideB · dewC · doorD · twoC · vloorD · skiesE · riseE
  5. 5 ABABCBCBDD eyesA · sleepB · riseA · weepB · browC · ceaepeB · nowC · sheaepeB · blackD · trackD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The beaeten path where vo'k do meet8········
A-comen on vrom vur an' near;8········
How many errands had the veet8·/˘/˘···
That wore en out along so clear!8····˘/··
Where eegrass bleaedes be green in meaed,8········
Where bennets up the leaeze be brown,8·/˘·····
An' where the timber bridge do leaed8···/˘···
Athirt the cloty brook to town,8········
Along the path by mile an' mile,8˘/······
Athirt the yield, an' brook, an' stile,8········
There runnen childern's hearty laugh8·····/˘·
Do come an' vlee along--win' swift:8····˘/··
The wold man's glossy-knobbed staff8···/˘·˘·
Do help his veet so hard to lift;8········
The maid do bear her basket by,8·····/˘·
A-hangen at her breaethen zide;8·/˘·····
An' ceaereless young men, straight an' spry,9·········
Do whissle hwome at eventide,8·····/˘˘
Along the path, a-reachen by8˘/······
Below tall trees an' oben sky.8········
There woone do goo to jay a-head;8········
Another's jay's behind his back.8˘/˘·····
There woone his vu'st long mile do tread,8········
An' woone the last ov all his track.8········
An' woone mid end a hopevul road,9·········
Wi' hopeless grief a-teaeken on,8·/˘·····
As he that leaetely vrom abroad9·······˘/
Come hwome to seek his love a-gone,8········
Noo mwore to tread, wi' comely eaese,8·····/˘·
The beaeten path athirt the leaeze.8········
In tweilsome hardships, year by year,8···/˘···
He drough the worold wander'd wide,8·····/˘·
Still bent, in mind, both vur an' near8········
To come an' meaeke his love his bride.8········
An' passen here drough evenen dew9·········
He heaesten'd, happy, to her door,8···/˘···
But vound the wold vo'k only two,8·····/˘·
Wi' noo mwore vootsteps on the vloor,8········
To walk ageaen below the skies,8········
Where beaeten paths do vall an' rise;8········
Vor she wer gone vrom e'thly eyes8········
To be a-kept in darksome sleep,8·····/˘·
Until the good ageaen do rise8········
A-jay to souls they left to weep.8········
The rwose wer doust that bound her brow;8········
The moth did eat her Zunday ceaepe;8········
Her frock wer out o' fashion now;8·····/˘·
Her shoes wer dried up out o' sheaepe--8········
The shoes that woonce did glitter black8·····/˘·
Along the leaezes beaeten track.8˘/······

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