Shaftesbury Feaeir
When hillborne Paladore did showSo bright to me down miles below.As woonce the zun, a-rollen west,Did brighten up his hill's high breast.Wi' walls a-looken dazzlen white,Or yollow, on the grey-topp'd heightOf Paladore, as peaele day woreAway so feaeir.Oh! how I wish'd that I wer there.
The pleaece wer too vur off to spyThe liven vo'k a-passen by;The vo'k too vur vor air to bringThe words that they did speak or zing.All dum' to me wer each abode,An' empty wer the down-hill roadVrom Paladore, as peaele day woreAway so feaeir;But how I wish'd that I wer there.
But when I clomb the lofty groundWhere liven veet an' tongues did sound,At feaeir, bezide your bloomen feaece,The pertiest in all the pleaece,As you did look, wi' eyes as blueAs yonder southern hills in view,Vrom Paladore--O Polly dear,Wi' you up there,How merry then wer I at feaeir.
Since vu'st I trod thik steep hill-zideMy grieven soul 'v a-been a-triedWi' pain, an' loss o' worldly geaer,An' souls a-gone I wanted near;But you be here to goo up still,An' look to Blackmwore vrom the hillO' Paladore. Zoo, Polly dear,We'll goo up there,An' spend an hour or two at feaeir.
The wold brown meaere's a-brought vrom grass,An' rubb'd an' cwomb'd so bright as glass;An' now we'll hitch her in, an' startTo feaeir upon the new green cart,An' teaeke our little Poll betweenOur zides, as proud's a little queen,To Paladore. Aye, Poll a dear,Vor now 'tis feaeir,An' she's a longen to goo there.
While Paladore, on watch, do strainHer eyes to Blackmwore's blue-hill'd plaein,While Duncliffe is the traveller's mark,Or cloty Stour's a-rollen dark;Or while our bells do call, vor greaece,The vo'k avore their Seaevior's feaece,Mid Paladore, an' Poll a dear,Vor ever knowO' peaece an' plenty down below.
Words in this poem
- brighten v. t.
- To make bright or brighter; to make to shine; to increase the luster of; to give a brighter hue to.
- abode n.
- Act of waiting; delay. [OE. abad, abood, fr. abiden to abide. See Abide. For the change of vowel, cf. abode, imp. of abide.]
- yonder adv.
- At a distance, but within view. [OE. yonder, ýonder; cf. OD. ginder, Goth. jaindr there. Yond, adv.]
- polly n.
- A woman's name; also, a popular name for a parrot.
- wold n.
- A wood; a forest. [OE. wold, wald, AS. weald, wald, a wood, forest; akin to OFries. & OS. wald, D. woud, G. wald, Icel. völlr, a field, and probably to Gr. va a garden, inclosure.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Shaftesbury Feaeir is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect, Project Gutenberg ebook #21785; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
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Form and metre
Shaftesbury Feaeir is 54 lines in 6 stanzas of 9 lines each. It is in rhyming couplets, 67% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 86%). 99% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.6 syllables. 30% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AABBCC--- showA · belowA · westB · breastB · whiteC · heightC · wore · feaeir · there
- 2 AABBCC--- spyA · byA · bringB · zingB · abodeC · roadC · wore · feaeir · there
- 3 AABBCCDDD groundA · soundA · feaeceB · pleaeceB · blueC · viewC · dearD · thereD · feaeirD
- 4 AABCDDCBC zideA · triedA · geaerB · nearC · stillD · hillD · dearC · thereB · feaeirC
- 5 AABBCCDDD grassA · glassA · startB · cartB · betweenC · queenC · dearD · feaeirD · thereD
- 6 --AABB-CC strain · plaein · markA · darkA · greaeceB · feaeceB · dear · knowC · belowC
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| When hillborne Paladore did show | 8 | ········ |
| So bright to me down miles below. | 8 | ········ |
| As woonce the zun, a-rollen west, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Did brighten up his hill's high breast. | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Wi' walls a-looken dazzlen white, | 8 | ········ |
| Or yollow, on the grey-topp'd height | 8 | ········ |
| Of Paladore, as peaele day wore | 9 | ········· |
| Away so feaeir. | 4 | ˘/·· |
| Oh! how I wish'd that I wer there. | 8 | ········ |
| The pleaece wer too vur off to spy | 8 | ········ |
| The liven vo'k a-passen by; | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| The vo'k too vur vor air to bring | 8 | ········ |
| The words that they did speak or zing. | 8 | ········ |
| All dum' to me wer each abode, | 8 | ······˘/ |
| An' empty wer the down-hill road | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Vrom Paladore, as peaele day wore | 9 | ········· |
| Away so feaeir; | 4 | ˘/·· |
| But how I wish'd that I wer there. | 8 | ········ |
| But when I clomb the lofty ground | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Where liven veet an' tongues did sound, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| At feaeir, bezide your bloomen feaece, | 8 | ········ |
| The pertiest in all the pleaece, | 7 | ······· |
| As you did look, wi' eyes as blue | 8 | ········ |
| As yonder southern hills in view, | 8 | ·/˘/˘··· |
| Vrom Paladore--O Polly dear, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Wi' you up there, | 4 | ···· |
| How merry then wer I at feaeir. | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Since vu'st I trod thik steep hill-zide | 8 | ········ |
| My grieven soul 'v a-been a-tried | 9 | ········· |
| Wi' pain, an' loss o' worldly geaer, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| An' souls a-gone I wanted near; | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| But you be here to goo up still, | 8 | ········ |
| An' look to Blackmwore vrom the hill | 8 | ········ |
| O' Paladore. Zoo, Polly dear, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| We'll goo up there, | 4 | ···· |
| An' spend an hour or two at feaeir. | 8 | ···/···· |
| The wold brown meaere's a-brought vrom grass, | 8 | ········ |
| An' rubb'd an' cwomb'd so bright as glass; | 8 | ········ |
| An' now we'll hitch her in, an' start | 8 | ········ |
| To feaeir upon the new green cart, | 8 | ········ |
| An' teaeke our little Poll between | 8 | ··//˘··· |
| Our zides, as proud's a little queen, | 8 | /····/˘· |
| To Paladore. Aye, Poll a dear, | 8 | ········ |
| Vor now 'tis feaeir, | 4 | ···· |
| An' she's a longen to goo there. | 8 | ········ |
| While Paladore, on watch, do strain | 8 | ········ |
| Her eyes to Blackmwore's blue-hill'd plaein, | 8 | ········ |
| While Duncliffe is the traveller's mark, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Or cloty Stour's a-rollen dark; | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Or while our bells do call, vor greaece, | 8 | ··/····· |
| The vo'k avore their Seaevior's feaece, | 8 | ········ |
| Mid Paladore, an' Poll a dear, | 8 | ········ |
| Vor ever know | 4 | ·/˘· |
| O' peaece an' plenty down below. | 8 | ···/˘··· |
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