Introduction
He seems to have settled permanently at Ch’ang-an in 801. This town,lying near the north-west frontier, was the political capital of theEmpire. In its situation it somewhat resembled Madrid. Lo-yang, theEastern city, owing to its milder climate and more accessible position,became, like Seville in Spain, a kind of social capital.
Since I left my home to seek official stateSeven years I have lived in Ch’ang-an.What have I gained? Only you, Yüan;So hard it is to bind friendships fast.We have roamed on horseback under the flowering trees;We have walked in the snow and warmed our hearts with wine.We have met and parted at the Western GateAnd neither of us bothered to put on Cap or Belt.We did not go up together for Examination;We were not serving in the same Department of State.The bond that joined us lay deeper than outward things;The rivers of our souls spring from the same well!
The separation was a heavy blow to Po Chü-i. In a poem called “ClimbingAlone to the Lo-yu Gardens” he says:
I look down on the Twelve City Streets:--Red dust flanked by green trees!Coaches and horsemen alone fill my eyes;I do not see whom my heart longs to see.K’ung T’an has died at Lo-yang;Yüan Chēn is banished to Ching-mēn.Of all that walk on the North-South RoadThere is not one that I care for more than the rest!
He was banished to Kiukiang (then called Hsün-yang) with the rank ofSub-Prefect. After three years he was given the Governorship ofChung-chou, a remote place in Ssech’uan. On the way up the Yangtze hemet Yüan Chēn after three years of separation. They spent a few daystogether at I-ch’ang, exploring the rock-caves of the neighbourhood.
At the palace doors the smell of meat and wine;On the road the bones of one who was frozen to death.
Words in this poem
- yang n.
- The cry of the wild goose; a honk. [Of imitative origin.]
- department n.
- Act of departing; departure. [F. département, fr. départir. See Depart, v. i.]
- governorship n.
- The office of a governor.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Introduction is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Hundred and Seventy Chinese Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #42290, the Arthur Waley translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Various, Introduction, in A Hundred and Seventy Chinese Poems (1918), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #42290, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/waley-chinese/introduction.html, id L18818.
Form and metre
Introduction is 34 lines in 6 stanzas. 86% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 12.9 syllables. 4 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 29% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABBA- townA · theB · theB · positionA · capital
- 2 ABB--CA-CA-- stateA · anB · yüanB · fast · trees · wineC · gateA · belt · examinationC · stateA · things · well
- 5 AA--- ofA · ofA · he · days · neighbourhood
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| He seems to have settled permanently at Ch’ang-an in 801. This town, | 16 | ····/˘/˘˘˘······ |
| lying near the north-west frontier, was the political capital of the | 19 | /˘····˘/··˘/˘˘/˘˘·· |
| Empire. In its situation it somewhat resembled Madrid. Lo-yang, the | 20 | /˘˘···˘/˘·//˘/˘˘/··· |
| Eastern city, owing to its milder climate and more accessible position, | 21 | /˘/˘/˘··/˘/˘··˘/˘˘˘/˘ |
| became, like Seville in Spain, a kind of social capital. | 15 | ˘/·˘/·····/˘/˘˘ |
| Since I left my home to seek official state | 11 | ·······˘/˘· |
| Seven years I have lived in Ch’ang-an. | 9 | /˘······· |
| What have I gained? Only you, Yüan; | 8 | ····/˘·· |
| So hard it is to bind friendships fast. | 9 | ······/˘· |
| We have roamed on horseback under the flowering trees; | 13 | ····/····/˘˘· |
| We have walked in the snow and warmed our hearts with wine. | 13 | ········/˘··· |
| We have met and parted at the Western Gate | 11 | ····/˘··/˘· |
| And neither of us bothered to put on Cap or Belt. | 13 | ·/˘··/˘······ |
| We did not go up together for Examination; | 14 | ·····˘/˘·˘·˘/˘ |
| We were not serving in the same Department of State. | 13 | ···/˘···˘/˘·· |
| The bond that joined us lay deeper than outward things; | 12 | ······/˘·/˘· |
| The rivers of our souls spring from the same well! | 12 | ·/˘·/˘······ |
| The separation was a heavy blow to Po Chü-i. In a poem called “Climbing | 21 | ··˘/˘··/˘·······/˘·/˘ |
| Alone to the Lo-yu Gardens” he says: | 10 | ˘/····/˘·· |
| I look down on the Twelve City Streets:-- | 9 | ······/˘· |
| Red dust flanked by green trees! | 6 | ······ |
| Coaches and horsemen alone fill my eyes; | 10 | /˘·/˘˘/··· |
| I do not see whom my heart longs to see. | 10 | ·········· |
| K’ung T’an has died at Lo-yang; | 7 | ······· |
| Yüan Chēn is banished to Ching-mēn. | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| Of all that walk on the North-South Road | 9 | ········· |
| There is not one that I care for more than the rest! | 12 | ············ |
| He was banished to Kiukiang (then called Hsün-yang) with the rank of | 15 | ··/˘··········· |
| Sub-Prefect. After three years he was given the Governorship of | 17 | ·/·······/˘·/˘˘·· |
| Chung-chou, a remote place in Ssech’uan. On the way up the Yangtze he | 17 | ···˘/·········//· |
| met Yüan Chēn after three years of separation. They spent a few days | 17 | ·········˘/˘····· |
| together at I-ch’ang, exploring the rock-caves of the neighbourhood. | 17 | ˘/˘···˘/˘········ |
| At the palace doors the smell of meat and wine; | 11 | ··/˘······· |
| On the road the bones of one who was frozen to death. | 13 | ·········/˘·· |
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