The Garret

William Makepeace Thackeray (1811–1863) · 1849–1855

iambic pentameter · ABABCDCD · 40 lines · from Ballads

With pensive eyes the little room I view,Where, in my youth, I weathered it so long;With a wild mistress, a stanch friend or two,And a light heart still breaking into song:Making a mock of life, and all its cares,Rich in the glory of my rising sun,Lightly I vaulted up four pair of stairs,In the brave days when I was twenty-one.

Yes; 'tis a garret--let him know't who will--There was my bed--full hard it was and small;My table there--and I decipher stillHalf a lame couplet charcoaled on the wall.Ye joys, that Time hath swept with him away,Come to mine eyes, ye dreams of love and fun;For you I pawned my watch how many a day,In the brave days when I was twenty-one.

And see my little Jessy, first of all;She comes with pouting lips and sparkling eyes:Behold, how roguishly she pins her shawlAcross the narrow casement, curtain-wise;Now by the bed her petticoat glides down,And when did woman look the worse in none?I have heard since who paid for many a gown,In the brave days when I was twenty-one.

One jolly evening, when my friends and IMade happy music with our songs and cheers,A shout of triumph mounted up thus high,And distant cannon opened on our ears:We rise,--we join in the triumphant strain,--Napoleon conquers--Austerlitz is won--Tyrants shall never tread us down again,In the brave days when I was twenty-one.

Let us begone--the place is sad and strange--How far, far off, these happy times appear;All that I have to live I'd gladly changeFor one such month as I have wasted here--To draw long dreams of beauty, love, and power,From founts of hope that never will outrun,And drink all life's quintessence in an hour,Give me the days when I was twenty-one!

Words in this poem

weathered a.
Made sloping, so as to throw off water; as, a weathered cornice or window sill.
garret n.
A turret; a watchtower. [OE. garite, garette, watchtower, place of lookout, OF. garite, also meaning, a place of refuge, F. guérite a place of refuge, donjon, sentinel box, fr. OF. gari]
decipher v. t.
To translate from secret characters or ciphers into intelligible terms; as, to decipher a letter written in secret characters. [Pref. de- + cipher. Formed in imitation of F. déchiffrer. See Cipher.]
couplet n.
Two taken together; a pair or couple; especially two lines of verse that rhyme with each other. [F. couplet, dim. of couple. See Couple, n.]
pouting n.
Childish sullenness.
casement n.
A window sash opening on hinges affixed to the upright side of the frame into which it is fitted. (Poetically) A window. [Shortened fr. encasement. See Incase 1st Case, and cf. Incasement.]
napoleon n.
A French gold coin of twenty francs, or about $3.86. [From the Emperor Napoleon 1.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
gladly adv.
Preferably; by choice. [From Glad, a.]
outrun v. t.
To exceed, or leave behind, in running; to run faster than; to outstrip; to go beyond.
quintessence n.
The fifth or last and highest essence or power in a natural body. [F., fr. L. quinta essentia fifth essence. See Quint, and Essence.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Garret is in the public domain. This text is taken from Ballads, Project Gutenberg ebook #2732; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: William Makepeace Thackeray, The Garret, in Ballads (1849–1855), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #2732, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/thackeray-ballads/the-garret.html, id L10372.

Form and metre

The Garret is 40 lines in 5 stanzas of 8 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABABCDCD. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.9 syllables. 10% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCDCD viewA · longB · twoA · songB · caresC · sunD · stairsC · oneD
  2. 2 ABABCDCD willA · smallB · stillA · wallB · awayC · funD · dayC · oneD
  3. 3 ABABCDCD allA · eyesB · shawlA · wiseB · downC · noneD · gownC · oneD
  4. 4 ABABCDCD iA · cheersB · highA · earsB · strainC · wonD · againC · oneD
  5. 5 ABABCDCD strangeA · appearB · changeA · hereB · powerC · outrunD · hourC · oneD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
With pensive eyes the little room I view,10·/˘··/˘···
Where, in my youth, I weathered it so long;10·····/˘···
With a wild mistress, a stanch friend or two,10···/˘·····
And a light heart still breaking into song:10·····/˘···
Making a mock of life, and all its cares,10/˘········
Rich in the glory of my rising sun,10···/˘··/˘·
Lightly I vaulted up four pair of stairs,10/˘·/˘·····
In the brave days when I was twenty-one.10·······/˘·
Yes; 'tis a garret--let him know't who will--10···/˘·····
There was my bed--full hard it was and small;10··········
My table there--and I decipher still9·/˘···˘/·
Half a lame couplet charcoaled on the wall.10···/˘/····
Ye joys, that Time hath swept with him away,10········˘/
Come to mine eyes, ye dreams of love and fun;10··········
For you I pawned my watch how many a day,10·······/··
In the brave days when I was twenty-one.10·······/˘·
And see my little Jessy, first of all;10···/˘/˘···
She comes with pouting lips and sparkling eyes:10···/˘··/˘·
Behold, how roguishly she pins her shawl10˘/········
Across the narrow casement, curtain-wise;10˘/·/˘/˘/˘·
Now by the bed her petticoat glides down,10·····/˘···
And when did woman look the worse in none?10···/˘·····
I have heard since who paid for many a gown,10·······/··
In the brave days when I was twenty-one.10·······/˘·
One jolly evening, when my friends and I10·/˘/˘·····
Made happy music with our songs and cheers,10·/˘/˘·/···
A shout of triumph mounted up thus high,10···/˘/˘···
And distant cannon opened on our ears:10·/˘/˘/˘·/·
We rise,--we join in the triumphant strain,--10······˘/˘·
Napoleon conquers--Austerlitz is won--10˘/˘/˘·····
Tyrants shall never tread us down again,9/˘·/···˘/
In the brave days when I was twenty-one.10·······/˘·
Let us begone--the place is sad and strange--10··˘/······
How far, far off, these happy times appear;10·····/˘·˘/
All that I have to live I'd gladly change10·······/˘·
For one such month as I have wasted here--10·······/˘·
To draw long dreams of beauty, love, and power,10·····/˘··/
From founts of hope that never will outrun,9·····/·˘/
And drink all life's quintessence in an hour,10····˘/˘··/
Give me the days when I was twenty-one!10·······/˘·

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