Poem III

William Makepeace Thackeray (1811–1863) · 1849–1855

iambic tetrameter · ABAB · 24 lines · from Ballads

The sun bursts out in furious blaze,I perspirate from head to heel;I'd like to hire a one-horse chaise,How can I, without cash at Lille?

I pass in sunshine burning hotBy cafés where in beer they deal;I think how pleasant were a pot,A frothing pot of beer of Lille!

What is yon house with walls so thick,All girt around with guard and grille?O gracious gods! it makes me sick,It is the PRISON-HOUSE of Lille!

O cursed prison strong and barred,It does my very blood congeal!I tremble as I pass the guard,And quit that ugly part of Lille.

The church-door beggar whines and prays,I turn away at his appealAh, church-door beggar! go thy ways!You're not the poorest man in Lille.

My heart is weary, my peace is gone,How shall I e'er any woes reveal?I have no money, I lie in pawn,A stranger in the town of Lille.

Words in this poem

chaise n.
A two-wheeled carriage for two persons, with a calash top, and the body hung on leather straps, or thoroughbraces. It is usually drawn by one horse. [F. chaise seat, or chair, chaise or carriage, for chaire, from a peculiar Parisian pronunciation. See Chair.]
sunshine n.
The light of the sun, or the place where it shines; the direct rays of the sun, the place where they fall, or the warmth and light which they give.
frothing n.
Exaggerated declamation; rant.
girt v. t.
To gird; to encircle; to invest by means of a girdle; to measure the girth of; as, to girt a tree. [From Girt, n., cf. Girth, v.]
grille a.
A lattice or grating. [F. See Grill, v. t.]
cursed a.
Deserving a curse; execrable; hateful; detestable; abominable.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Poem III is in the public domain. This text is taken from Ballads, Project Gutenberg ebook #2732; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: William Makepeace Thackeray, Poem III, in Ballads (1849–1855), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #2732, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/thackeray-ballads/poem-iii.html, id L10411.

Form and metre

Poem III is 24 lines in 6 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 100% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.1 syllables. 8% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB blazeA · heelB · chaiseA · lilleB
  2. 2 ABAB hotA · dealB · potA · lilleB
  3. 3 ABAB thickA · grilleB · sickA · lilleB
  4. 4 ABAB barredA · congealB · guardA · lilleB
  5. 5 ABAB praysA · appealB · waysA · lilleB
  6. 6 ABAB goneA · revealB · pawnA · lilleB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The sun bursts out in furious blaze,8·····/˘·
I perspirate from head to heel;8········
I'd like to hire a one-horse chaise,8···/····
How can I, without cash at Lille?8········
I pass in sunshine burning hot8···/·/˘·
By cafés where in beer they deal;7·······
I think how pleasant were a pot,8···/˘···
A frothing pot of beer of Lille!8·/˘·····
What is yon house with walls so thick,8········
All girt around with guard and grille?8········
O gracious gods! it makes me sick,8·/˘·····
It is the PRISON-HOUSE of Lille!8···/˘···
O cursed prison strong and barred,8··˘/˘···
It does my very blood congeal!8···/˘·˘/
I tremble as I pass the guard,8·/˘·····
And quit that ugly part of Lille.8···/˘···
The church-door beggar whines and prays,8···/˘···
I turn away at his appeal8··˘/··˘/
Ah, church-door beggar! go thy ways!8···/˘···
You're not the poorest man in Lille.8···/˘···
My heart is weary, my peace is gone,9···/˘····
How shall I e'er any woes reveal?9····/˘·˘/
I have no money, I lie in pawn,9···/˘····
A stranger in the town of Lille.8·/˘·····

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