Upon Carthy's Threatening to Translate Pindar

Jonathan Swift (1667–1745) · 1710–1745

iambic tetrameter · 12 lines · from Cadenus and Vanessa, and Other Poems

You have undone Horace,--what should hinderThy Muse from falling upon Pindar?But ere you mount his fiery steed,Beware, O Bard, how you proceed:--For should you give him once the reins,High up in air he'll turn your brains;And if you should his fury check,'Tis ten to one he breaks your neck.

Carthy, you say, writes well--his genius true,You pawn your word for him--he'll vouch for you.So two poor knaves, who find their credit fail,To cheat the world, become each other's bail.

Words in this poem

undone a.
Not done or performed; neglected. [Pref. un- not + done.]
pindar n.
The peanut (Arachis hypogæa); -- so called in the West Indies. [D. piendel.]
steed n.
A horse, especially a spirited horse for state of war; -- used chiefly in poetry or stately prose. [OE. stede, AS. steda a stud-horse, war horse, fr. stod a stud of breeding steeds; akin to G. stute a mare, Icel. stedda, sto, a stud. *163. See Stud of horses.]
beware v. t.
To avoid; to take care of; to have a care for.
vouch v. t.
To call; to summon. [OE. vouchen, OF. vochier to call, fr. L. vocare to call, fr. vox, vocis, voice. See Voice, and cf. Avouch.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Upon Carthy's Threatening to Translate Pindar is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poems of Jonathan Swift, D.D., Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #13621; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Upon Carthy's Threatening to Translate Pindar is 12 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.9 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 8% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 --AABBCC hinder · pindar · steedA · proceedA · reinsB · brainsB · checkC · neckC
  2. 2 AABB trueA · youA · failB · bailB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
You have undone Horace,--what should hinder10··˘//˘··/˘
Thy Muse from falling upon Pindar?9···/˘····
But ere you mount his fiery steed,8·····/˘·
Beware, O Bard, how you proceed:--8˘/····˘/
For should you give him once the reins,8········
High up in air he'll turn your brains;8········
And if you should his fury check,8·····/˘·
'Tis ten to one he breaks your neck.8········
Carthy, you say, writes well--his genius true,10·······/˘·
You pawn your word for him--he'll vouch for you.10··········
So two poor knaves, who find their credit fail,10·······/˘·
To cheat the world, become each other's bail.10····˘/·/˘·

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