The Mind of Man II

John Collings Squire (1884–1958) · 1918

iambic tetrameter · ABABCC · 54 lines · from Poems: First Series

Upon the borders of the weald(I walk there first when I step in)Set in green wood and smiling field,The city stands, unstained of sin;White thoughts and wishes pureWalk the streets with steps demure.

In its clean groves and spacious hallsThe quiet-eyed inhabitantsHold innocent sunny festivalsAnd mingle in decorous dance;Things that destroy, distort, deface,Come never to that lovely place.

Never could evil enter thither,It could not live in that sweet air,The shadow of an ill deed must witherAnd fall away to nothing there.You would say as there you standThat all was beauty in the land.

But go you out beyond the gateway,Cleave you the woods and pass the plain,Cross you the frontier down, and straightwayThe trees will end, the grass will wane,And you will come to a wildernessOf sticks and parched barrenness.

The middle of the land is this,A tawny desert midmost set,Barren of living things it is,Saving at night some vampires flitThat nest them in the farther marishWhere all save vilest things must perish.

Here in this reedy marsh of greenAnd oily pools, swarm insects fatAnd birds of prey and beasts obscene,Things that the traveller shudders at,All cunning things that creep and flyTo suck men's blood until they die.

Rarely from hence does aught escapeInto the world of outer light,But now and then some sable shapeOutward will dash in sudden flight;And men stand stonied or distraughtTo know the loathly deed or thought.

But, ah! beyond the marsh you reachA purulent place more vile than all,A festering lake too foul for speech,Rotten and black, with coils acrawl,Where writhe with lecherous squeakings shrillHorrors that make the heart stand still.

There, 'neath a heaven diseased, it lies,The mere alive with slimy worms,With perverse terrible infamies,And murders and repulsive formsThat have no name, but slide here deep,Whilst I, their holder, silence keep.

Words in this poem

weald n.
A wood or forest; a wooded land or region; also, an open country; -- often used in place names. [AS. See Wold.]
demure v. i.
To look demurely.
sunny a.
Of or pertaining to the sun; proceeding from, or resembling the sun; hence, shining; bright; brilliant; radiant.
straightway adv.
Immediately; without loss of time; without delay.
midmost a.
Middle; middlemost. [OE. middemiste. Cf. Foremost.]
flit a.
Nimble; quick; swift. See Fleet.
marish n.
Low, wet ground; a marsh; a fen; a bog; a moor. [Cf. F. marais, LL. marascus. See Marsh.]
aught n.
Property; possession. [AS. , fr. agan to own, p. p. ahte.]
sable n.
A carnivorous animal of the Weasel family (Mustela zibellina) native of the northern latitudes of Europe, Asia, and America, -- noted for its fine, soft, and valuable fur. [OF. sable, F. zibeline sable (in sense 4), LL. sabellum; cf. D. sabel, Dan. sabel, zobel, Sw. sabel, sobel, G. zobel; all fr. Russ. sóbole.]
distraught p. p.
Torn asunder; separated. [OE. distract, distrauht. See Distract, a.]
loathly adv.
Unwillingly; reluctantly.
lecherous a.
Like a lecher; addicted to lewdness; lustful; also, lust- provoking.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Mind of Man II is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems - First Series, Project Gutenberg ebook #37860; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The Mind of Man II is 54 lines in 9 stanzas of 6 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABCC, complete in 6 of its 9 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%).

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCC wealdA · inB · fieldA · sinB · pureC · demureC
  2. 2 A-A-BB hallsA · inhabitants · festivalsA · dance · defaceB · placeB
  3. 3 ABABCC thitherA · airB · witherA · thereB · standC · landC
  4. 4 ABABCC gatewayA · plainB · straightwayA · waneB · wildernessC · barrennessC
  5. 5 ----AA this · set · is · flit · marishA · perishA
  6. 6 ABABCC greenA · fatB · obsceneA · atB · flyC · dieC
  7. 7 ABABCC escapeA · lightB · shapeA · flightB · distraughtC · thoughtC
  8. 8 ABABCC reachA · allB · speechA · acrawlB · shrillC · stillC
  9. 9 A-A-BB liesA · worms · infamiesA · forms · deepB · keepB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Upon the borders of the weald8···/˘···
(I walk there first when I step in)8········
Set in green wood and smiling field,8·····/˘·
The city stands, unstained of sin;8·/˘·˘/··
White thoughts and wishes pure6···/˘·
Walk the streets with steps demure.7·····˘/
In its clean groves and spacious halls8·····/˘·
The quiet-eyed inhabitants8·/˘·˘/˘˘
Hold innocent sunny festivals9·/˘˘/˘/˘˘
And mingle in decorous dance;8·/˘·/˘˘·
Things that destroy, distort, deface,8··˘/˘/˘/
Come never to that lovely place.8·/˘··/˘·
Never could evil enter thither,9/˘·/˘/˘/˘
It could not live in that sweet air,8········
The shadow of an ill deed must wither10·/······/˘
And fall away to nothing there.8··˘/·/˘·
You would say as there you stand7·······
That all was beauty in the land.8···/˘···
But go you out beyond the gateway,9·······/·
Cleave you the woods and pass the plain,8········
Cross you the frontier down, and straightway9···˘/··/˘
The trees will end, the grass will wane,8········
And you will come to a wilderness9······/˘˘
Of sticks and parched barrenness.8····˘/˘˘
The middle of the land is this,8·/˘·····
A tawny desert midmost set,8·/˘/˘/˘·
Barren of living things it is,8/˘·/˘···
Saving at night some vampires flit8/˘···/˘·
That nest them in the farther marish9·····/˘/˘
Where all save vilest things must perish.9·······/˘
Here in this reedy marsh of green8···/˘···
And oily pools, swarm insects fat8·/˘··/··
And birds of prey and beasts obscene,8······˘/
Things that the traveller shudders at,8···/˘/˘·
All cunning things that creep and fly8·/˘·····
To suck men's blood until they die.8········
Rarely from hence does aught escape8/˘····˘/
Into the world of outer light,8·····/˘·
But now and then some sable shape8·····/˘·
Outward will dash in sudden flight;8/˘···/˘·
And men stand stonied or distraught7·····˘/
To know the loathly deed or thought.8···/˘···
But, ah! beyond the marsh you reach8········
A purulent place more vile than all,8·/˘·····
A festering lake too foul for speech,8·/˘·····
Rotten and black, with coils acrawl,8/˘······
Where writhe with lecherous squeakings shrill8···/˘/˘·
Horrors that make the heart stand still.8/˘······
There, 'neath a heaven diseased, it lies,8···/˘/··
The mere alive with slimy worms,8··˘/·/˘·
With perverse terrible infamies,9·˘//˘˘/˘˘
And murders and repulsive forms8·/˘·˘/˘·
That have no name, but slide here deep,8········
Whilst I, their holder, silence keep.8···/˘/˘·

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