Canto Fourth: The Prophecy II

Walter Scott (1771–1832) · 1810

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 22 lines · from The Lady of the Lake

Such fond conceit, half said, half sung,Love prompted to the bridegroom's tongue.All while he stripped the wild-rose spray,His axe and bow beside him lay,For on a pass 'twixt lake and woodA wakeful sentinel he stood.Hark!--on the rock a footstep rung,And instant to his arms he sprung.'Stand, or thou diest!--What, Malise?--soonArt thou returned from Braes of Doune.By thy keen step and glance I know,Thou bring'st us tidings of the foe.'--For while the Fiery Cross tried on,On distant scout had Malise gone.--'Where sleeps the Chief?' the henchman said.'Apart, in yonder misty glade;To his lone couch I'll be your guide.'--Then called a slumberer by his side,And stirred him with his slackened bow,--'Up, up, Glentarkin! rouse thee, ho!We seek the Chieftain; on the trackKeep eagle watch till I come back.'

Words in this poem

wakeful a.
Not sleeping; indisposed to sleep; watchful; vigilant.
rung n.
A floor timber in a ship. [OE. ronge, AS. hrung, a staff, rod, pole; akin to G. runge a short, thick piece of iron or wood, OD. ronghe a prop, support, Icel. röng a rib in a ship, Goth. H]
henchman n.
An attendant; a servant; a follower. Now chiefly used as a political cant term. [OE. hencheman, henxman; prob. fr. OE. & AS. hengest horse + E. man, and meaning, a groom. AS. hengest is akin to D. & G. hengst stallion, OHG. hengist horse, ge]
yonder adv.
At a distance, but within view. [OE. yonder, ýonder; cf. OD. ginder, Goth. jaindr there. Yond, adv.]
glade n.
An open passage through a wood; a grassy open or cleared space in a forest. [Prob. of Scand. origin, and akin to glad, a.; cf. also W. golead, goleuad, a lighting, illumination, fr. goleu light, clear, bright, goleu fwlch glade, lit., a ]
lone n.
A lane. See Loanin.
slumberer n.
One who slumbers; a sleeper.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Canto Fourth: The Prophecy II is 22 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 91% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 98% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.1 syllables. 14% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCAADDEEFF--GGEEHH sungA · tongueA · sprayB · layB · woodC · stoodC · rungA · sprungA · soonD · douneD · knowE · foeE · onF · goneF · said · glade · guideG · sideG · bowE · hoE · trackH · backH
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Such fond conceit, half said, half sung,8··˘/····
Love prompted to the bridegroom's tongue.8·/˘··/··
All while he stripped the wild-rose spray,8········
His axe and bow beside him lay,8····˘/··
For on a pass 'twixt lake and wood8········
A wakeful sentinel he stood.8·/˘/˘˘··
Hark!--on the rock a footstep rung,8·····/··
And instant to his arms he sprung.8·/˘·····
'Stand, or thou diest!--What, Malise?--soon8········
Art thou returned from Braes of Doune.8··˘/····
By thy keen step and glance I know,8········
Thou bring'st us tidings of the foe.'--8···/˘···
For while the Fiery Cross tried on,8···/˘···
On distant scout had Malise gone.--8·/˘·····
'Where sleeps the Chief?' the henchman said.8·····/˘·
'Apart, in yonder misty glade;8˘/·/˘/˘·
To his lone couch I'll be your guide.'--8········
Then called a slumberer by his side,9···/˘˘···
And stirred him with his slackened bow,--8·····/˘·
'Up, up, Glentarkin! rouse thee, ho!8········
We seek the Chieftain; on the track8···/˘···
Keep eagle watch till I come back.'8·/˘·····

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