The Two Bald Men

Phaedrus · 1765

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 12 lines · from The Fables of Phaedrus

As on his way a Bald-pate went,He found a comb by accident;Another, with a head as bare,Pursued, and hollow'd for a share.The first produced the prize, and cried,"Good Providence was on our side;But by the strange caprice of Fate,We're to no purpose fortunate;And, as the proverb says, have foundA hobnail, for a hundred pound."They by this tale may be relievedWhose sanguine hopes have been deceived.

Words in this poem

pate n.
A pie. See Patty. [F. pâté.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
hobnail n.
A short, sharp-pointed, large-headed nail, -- used in shoeing houses and for studding the soles of heavy shoes. [1st hob + nail.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Two Bald Men is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Fables of Phædrus Literally translated into English prose with notes, Project Gutenberg ebook #25512; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Phaedrus, The Two Bald Men, in The Fables of Phaedrus (1765), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #25512, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/phaedrus-fables/the-two-bald-men.html, id L21321.

Form and metre

The Two Bald Men is 12 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%).

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFF wentA · accidentA · bareB · shareB · criedC · sideC · fateD · fortunateD · foundE · poundE · relievedF · deceivedF
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
As on his way a Bald-pate went,8········
He found a comb by accident;8·····/˘˘
Another, with a head as bare,8˘/˘·····
Pursued, and hollow'd for a share.8˘/·/˘···
The first produced the prize, and cried,8··˘/····
"Good Providence was on our side;8·/˘˘··/·
But by the strange caprice of Fate,8····˘/··
We're to no purpose fortunate;8···/˘/˘˘
And, as the proverb says, have found8···/˘···
A hobnail, for a hundred pound."8·/···/˘·
They by this tale may be relieved8······˘/
Whose sanguine hopes have been deceived.8·/˘···˘/

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