Ballata I

Petrarch (1304–1374), translated by various hands · 1859

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 17 lines · from The Sonnets, Triumphs and Other Poems

When hope was in its bloomy prime,And when I vainly fancied nighThe meed of all my constancy;Then sudden she, of whom I soughtCompassion, from my sight was caught.O ruthless Death! O life severe!The one has sunk me deep in care,And darken'd cruelly my day,That shone with hope's enlivening ray:The other, adverse to my will,Doth here on earth detain me still;And interdicts me to pursueHer, who from all its scenes withdrew:Yet in my heart resides the fair,For ever, ever present there;Who well perceives the ills that waitUpon my wretched, mortal state.

Words in this poem

bloomy a.
Full of bloom; flowery; flourishing with the vigor of youth; as, a bloomy spray.
meed v. t.
To reward; to repay. Waytt.
ruthless a.
Having no ruth; cruel; pitiless.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Ballata I is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Sonnets, Triumphs and Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #17650, the various hands translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Petrarch, Ballata I, in The Sonnets, Triumphs and Other Poems (1859), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #17650, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/petrarch-sonnets/ballata-i.html, id L14935.

Form and metre

Ballata I is 17 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 82% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.0 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 24% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ---AABBCCDDEEBBFF prime · nigh · constancy · soughtA · caughtA · severeB · careB · dayC · rayC · willD · stillD · pursueE · withdrewE · fairB · thereB · waitF · stateF
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
When hope was in its bloomy prime,8·····/˘·
And when I vainly fancied nigh8···/˘/˘·
The meed of all my constancy;8·····/˘˘
Then sudden she, of whom I sought8·/˘·····
Compassion, from my sight was caught.8˘/˘·····
O ruthless Death! O life severe!8·/˘···˘/
The one has sunk me deep in care,8········
And darken'd cruelly my day,7·/˘/˘··
That shone with hope's enlivening ray:9····˘/˘˘·
The other, adverse to my will,8·/˘/····
Doth here on earth detain me still;8····˘/··
And interdicts me to pursue8·/˘···˘/
Her, who from all its scenes withdrew:8······˘/
Yet in my heart resides the fair,8····˘/··
For ever, ever present there;8·/˘/˘/˘·
Who well perceives the ills that wait8··˘/····
Upon my wretched, mortal state.8···/˘/˘·

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