Song

Alfred Noyes (1880–1958) · 1913

iambic pentameter · 130 lines · from Collected Poems, Volume One

The maidens of MiyakoDance in the sunset hours,Deep in the sunset glow,Under the cherry flowers.

With dreamy hands of pearlFloating like butterflies,Dimly the dancers whirlAs the rose-light dies;

And their floating gowns, their hairUpbound with curious pins,Fade thro' the darkening airWith the dancing mandarins.

And then, as we went, the tall thin manExplained the manners of Old Japan;If you pitied a thing, you pretended to sneer;Yet if you were glad you ran to buyA captive pigeon and let it fly;And, if you were sad, you took a spearTo wound yourself, for fear your painShould quietly grow less again.

And, again he said, if we wished to findThe mystic City that enshrinedThe stone so few on earth had found,We must be very brave; it layA hundred haunted leagues away,Past many a griffon-guarded ground,In depths of dark and curious art,Where passion-flowers enfold apartThe Temple of the Flaming Heart,The City of the Secret Wound.

About the fragrant fall of dayWe saw beside the twisted wayA blue-domed tea-house, bossed with gold;Hungry and thirsty we entered in,How should we know what Creeping SinHad breathed in that Emperor's ear who soldHis own dumb soul for an evil jewelTo the earth-gods, blind and ugly and cruel?We drank sweet tea as his tale was told,In a garden of blue chrysanthemums,While a drowsy swarming of gongs and drumsOut of the sunset dreamily rolled.

But, as the murmur nearer drew,A fat black bonze, in a robe of blue,Suddenly at the gate appeared;And close behind, with that evil grin,Was it Creeping Sin, was it Creeping Sin?The bonze looked quietly down and sneered.Our guide! Was he sleeping? We could not wake him.However we tried to pinch and shake him!

Nearer, nearer the tumult came,Till, as a glare of sound and flame,Blind from a terrible furnace doorBlares, or the mouth of a dragon, blazedThe seething gateway: deaf and dazedWith the clanging and the wild uproarWe stood; while a thousand oval eyesGapped our fear with a sick surmise.

Then, as the dead sea parted asunder,The clamour clove with a sound of thunderIn two great billows; and all was quiet.Gaunt and black was the palankeenThat came in dreadful state betweenThe frozen waves of the wild-eyed riotCurling back from the breathless trackOf the Nameless One who is never seen:The close drawn curtains were thick and black;But wizen and white was the tall thin manAs he rose in his sleep:His eyes were closed, his lips were wan,He crouched like a leopard that dares not leap.

The bearers halted: the tall thin man,Fearfully dreaming, waved his fan,With wizard fingers, to and fro;While, with a whimper of evil glee,The Nameless Emperor's mad MoonsheeStepped in front of us: dark and slowWere the words of the doom that he dared not name;But, over the ground, as he spoke there cameTiny circles of soft blue flame;Like ghosts of flowers they began to glow,And flow like a moonlit brook betweenOur feet and the terrible palankeen.

But the Moonshee wrinkled his long thin eyes,And sneered, "Have you stolen the strength of the skies?Then pour before us a stream of pearl!Give us the pearl and the gold we know,And our hearts will be softened and let you go;But these are toys for a foolish girl--These vanishing blossoms--what are they worth?They are not so heavy as dust and earth:Pour before us a stream of pearl!"

Then, with a wild strange laugh, our guideStretched his arms to the West and criedOnce, and a song came over the sea;And all the blossoms of moon-soft fireWoke and breathed as a wind-swept lyre,And the garden surged into harmony;Till it seemed that the soul of the whole world sung,And every petal became a tongueTo tell the thoughts of Eternity.

But the Moonshee lifted his painted browsAnd stared at the gold on the blue tea-house:"Can you clothe your body with dreams?" he sneered;"If you taught us the truths that we always knowOur heart might be softened and let you go:Can you tell us the length of a monkey's beard,Or the weight of the gems on the Emperor's fan,Or the number of parrots in Old Japan?"

And again, with a wild strange laugh, our guideLooked at him; and he shrunk aside,Shrivelling like a flame-touched leaf;For the red-cross blossoms of soft blue fireWere growing and fluttering higher and higher,Shaking their petals out, sheaf by sheaf,Till with disks like shields and stems like towersBurned the host of the passion-flowers... Had the Moonshee flown like a midnight thief?... Yet a thing like a monkey, shrivelled and black,Chattered and danced as they forced him back.

As the coward chatters for empty pride,In the face of a foe that he cannot but fear,It chattered and leapt from side to side,And its voice rang strangely upon the ear.As the cry of a wizard that dares not ownAnother's brighter and mightier throne;As the wrath of a fool that rails aloudOn the fire that burnt him; the brazen brayClamoured and sang o'er the gaping crowd,And flapped like a gabbling goose away.

Words in this poem 29
dreamy a.
Abounding in dreams or given to dreaming; appropriate to, or like, dreams; visionary.
dimly adv.
In a dim or obscure manner; not brightly or clearly; with imperfect sight.
curious a.
Difficult to please or satisfy; solicitous to be correct; careful; scrupulous; nice; exact. [OF. curios, curius, F. curieux, L. curiosus careful, inquisitive, fr. cura care. See Cure.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
haunted a.
Inhabited by, or subject to the visits of, apparitions; frequented by a ghost.
enfold v. t.
To infold. See Infold.
bossed a.
Embossed; also, bossy.
drank n.
Wild oats, or darnel grass. See Drake a plant. [Cf. 3d Drake.]
dreamily adv.
As if in a dream; softly; slowly; languidly.
bonze n.
A Buddhist or Fohist priest, monk, or nun. [Pg. bonzo, fr. Japan bozu a Buddhist priest: cf. F. bonze.]
grin n.
A snare; a gin. [AS. grin.]
glare v. i.
To shine with a bright, dazzling light. [OE. glaren, gloren; cf. AS. glær amber, LG. glaren to glow or burn like coals, D. gloren to glimmer; prob. akin to E. glass.]
clamour n.
A great outcry or vociferation; loud and continued shouting or exclamation. [OF. clamour, clamur, F. clameur, fr. L. clamor, fr. clamare to cry out. See Claim.]
gaunt a.
Attenuated, as with fasting or suffering; lean; meager; pinched and grim. [Cf. Norw. gand a thin pointed stick, a tall and thin man, and W. gwan weak.]
dreadful a.
Full of dread or terror; fearful.
breathless a.
Spent with labor or violent action; out of breath.
nameless a.
Without a name; not having been given a name; as, a nameless star.
wizen v. i.
To wither; to dry. [OE. wisenen, AS. wisnian akin to weornian to decay, OHG. wesan to grow dry, G. verwesen to rot, Icel. visna to wither, Sw. vissna, Dan. visne, and probably to L]
crouched a.
Marked with the sign of the cross. Crouched friar. See Crutched friar, under Crutched.
fearfully adv.
In a fearful manner.
whimper v. i.
To cry with a low, whining, broken voice; to whine; to complain; as, a child whimpers. [Cf. Scot. whimmer, G. wimmern.]
glee n.
Music; minstrelsy; entertainment.
moonshee n.
A Mohammedan professor or teacher of language. [India] [Hind. munishi, fr. Ar. munishi a writer, author, secretary, tutor.]
spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
moonlit a.
Illumined by the moon.
flown a.
Flushed, inflated.
strangely adv.
As something foreign, or not one's own; in a manner adapted to something foreign and strange.
aloud adv.
With a loud voice, or great noise; loudly; audibly. [Pref. a- + loud.]
bray v. t.
To pound, beat, rub, or grind small or fine. [OE. brayen, OF. breier, F. broyer to pound, grind, fr. OHG. brehhan to break. See Break.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

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Form and metre

Song is 130 lines in 15 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 77%).

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB miyakoA · hoursB · glowA · flowersB
  2. 2 ABAB pearlA · butterfliesB · whirlA · diesB
  3. 3 ABAB hairA · pinsB · airA · mandarinsB
  4. 4 AABCCBDD manA · japanA · sneerB · buyC · flyC · spearB · painD · againD
  5. 5 AABCCBDDDB findA · enshrinedA · foundB · layC · awayC · groundB · artD · apartD · heartD · woundB
  6. 6 AABCCBDDBEEB dayA · wayA · goldB · inC · sinC · soldB · jewelD · cruelD · toldB · chrysanthemumsE · drumsE · rolledB
  7. 7 AABCCBDD drewA · blueA · appearedB · grinC · sinC · sneeredB · himD · himD
  8. 8 AABCCBDD cameA · flameA · doorB · blazedC · dazedC · uproarB · eyesD · surmiseD
  9. 9 AABCCBDCD-E-E asunderA · thunderA · quietB · palankeenC · betweenC · riotB · trackD · seenC · blackD · man · sleepE · wan · leapE
  10. 10 AABCCBDDDBEE manA · fanA · froB · gleeC · moonsheeC · slowB · nameD · cameD · flameD · glowB · betweenE · palankeenE
  11. 11 AABCCBDDB eyesA · skiesA · pearlB · knowC · goC · girlB · worthD · earthD · pearlB
  12. 12 AA-BB-CC- guideA · criedA · sea · fireB · lyreB · harmony · sungC · tongueC · eternity
  13. 13 --ABBACC brows · house · sneeredA · knowB · goB · beardA · fanC · japanC
  14. 14 AABCCBDDBEE guideA · asideA · leafB · fireC · higherC · sheafB · towersD · flowersD · thiefB · blackE · backE
  15. 15 ABABCCDEDE prideA · fearB · sideA · earB · ownC · throneC · aloudD · brayE · crowdD · awayE
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The maidens of Miyako7·/˘·/··
Dance in the sunset hours,7···/·/˘
Deep in the sunset glow,6···/··
Under the cherry flowers.7···/˘/˘
With dreamy hands of pearl6·/˘···
Floating like butterflies,6/˘·/˘·
Dimly the dancers whirl6/˘·/˘·
As the rose-light dies;5·····
And their floating gowns, their hair7··/˘···
Upbound with curious pins,7···/˘˘·
Fade thro' the darkening air7···/˘˘·
With the dancing mandarins.7··/˘/˘˘
And then, as we went, the tall thin man9·········
Explained the manners of Old Japan;10˘/˘·/˘··˘/
If you pitied a thing, you pretended to sneer;12··/····˘/˘··
Yet if you were glad you ran to buy9·········
A captive pigeon and let it fly;9·/˘/˘····
And, if you were sad, you took a spear9·········
To wound yourself, for fear your pain8··˘/····
Should quietly grow less again.8·/˘˘··˘/
And, again he said, if we wished to find10·˘/·······
The mystic City that enshrined9·/˘/˘·˘/˘
The stone so few on earth had found,8········
We must be very brave; it lay8···/˘···
A hundred haunted leagues away,9·/˘˘/˘·˘/
Past many a griffon-guarded ground,9·/˘·/˘/˘·
In depths of dark and curious art,9·····/˘˘·
Where passion-flowers enfold apart9·/˘/˘˘/˘/
The Temple of the Flaming Heart,8·/˘··/˘·
The City of the Secret Wound.8·/˘··/˘·
About the fragrant fall of day8···/˘···
We saw beside the twisted way8··˘/·/˘·
A blue-domed tea-house, bossed with gold;10···˘···˘··
Hungry and thirsty we entered in,10/˘·/˘·/˘˘·
How should we know what Creeping Sin8·····/˘·
Had breathed in that Emperor's ear who sold10····/˘˘···
His own dumb soul for an evil jewel10······/˘/˘
To the earth-gods, blind and ugly and cruel?11······/˘·/˘
We drank sweet tea as his tale was told,9·········
In a garden of blue chrysanthemums,10··/˘··˘/˘˘
While a drowsy swarming of gongs and drums10··/˘/˘····
Out of the sunset dreamily rolled.10···/·/˘˘·˘
But, as the murmur nearer drew,8···/˘/˘·
A fat black bonze, in a robe of blue,10···/˘·····
Suddenly at the gate appeared;9/˘˘···˘/˘
And close behind, with that evil grin,9······/˘·
Was it Creeping Sin, was it Creeping Sin?10··/˘···/˘·
The bonze looked quietly down and sneered.10·/˘·/˘˘···
Our guide! Was he sleeping? We could not wake him.11/···/˘·····
However we tried to pinch and shake him!10·/˘·······
Nearer, nearer the tumult came,8/˘/˘·/˘·
Till, as a glare of sound and flame,8········
Blind from a terrible furnace door9···/˘˘/˘·
Blares, or the mouth of a dragon, blazed10······/˘·˘
The seething gateway: deaf and dazed9·/˘/····˘
With the clanging and the wild uproar9··/˘···/·
We stood; while a thousand oval eyes9····/˘/˘·
Gapped our fear with a sick surmise.10·˘/˘····˘/
Then, as the dead sea parted asunder,10·····/˘˘/˘
The clamour clove with a sound of thunder10·/˘·····/˘
In two great billows; and all was quiet.10···/˘···/˘
Gaunt and black was the palankeen8········
That came in dreadful state between8···/˘···
The frozen waves of the wild-eyed riot10·/˘·····/˘
Curling back from the breathless track8/˘···/˘·
Of the Nameless One who is never seen:10··/˘···/˘·
The close drawn curtains were thick and black;9···/˘····
But wizen and white was the tall thin man10·/˘·······
As he rose in his sleep:6······
His eyes were closed, his lips were wan,9····˘····
He crouched like a leopard that dares not leap.10····/˘····
The bearers halted: the tall thin man,9·/˘/˘····
Fearfully dreaming, waved his fan,9/˘˘/˘·˘··
With wizard fingers, to and fro;8·/˘/˘···
While, with a whimper of evil glee,9···/˘·/˘·
The Nameless Emperor's mad Moonshee9·/˘/˘˘·/˘
Stepped in front of us: dark and slow9·˘·······
Were the words of the doom that he dared not name;11···········
But, over the ground, as he spoke there came10··········
Tiny circles of soft blue flame;8/˘/˘····
Like ghosts of flowers they began to glow,10···/˘·˘/··
And flow like a moonlit brook between9····/····
Our feet and the terrible palankeen.10/···/˘˘···
But the Moonshee wrinkled his long thin eyes,10··/˘/˘····
And sneered, "Have you stolen the strength of the skies?11····/˘·····
Then pour before us a stream of pearl!9·········
Give us the pearl and the gold we know,9·········
And our hearts will be softened and let you go;11·/···/˘····
But these are toys for a foolish girl--9······/˘·
These vanishing blossoms--what are they worth?10·/˘˘/˘····
They are not so heavy as dust and earth:10····/˘····
Pour before us a stream of pearl!"8········
Then, with a wild strange laugh, our guide9······/˘·
Stretched his arms to the West and cried9·˘·······
Once, and a song came over the sea;9·········
And all the blossoms of moon-soft fire10···/˘···/˘
Woke and breathed as a wind-swept lyre,9···˘·····
And the garden surged into harmony;10··/˘···/˘˘
Till it seemed that the soul of the whole world sung,11···········
And every petal became a tongue10·/˘˘/˘˘/··
To tell the thoughts of Eternity.9·····˘/˘˘
But the Moonshee lifted his painted brows10··/˘/˘·/˘·
And stared at the gold on the blue tea-house:10··········
"Can you clothe your body with dreams?" he sneered;10····/˘····
"If you taught us the truths that we always know11········/··
Our heart might be softened and let you go:10/···/˘····
Can you tell us the length of a monkey's beard,11········/˘·
Or the weight of the gems on the Emperor's fan,11········/˘·
Or the number of parrots in Old Japan?"11··/˘·/˘··˘/
And again, with a wild strange laugh, our guide10·˘/·····/·
Looked at him; and he shrunk aside,9·˘·····˘/
Shrivelling like a flame-touched leaf;9/˘˘····˘·
For the red-cross blossoms of soft blue fire11····/˘···/˘
Were growing and fluttering higher and higher,11·/·/˘˘/˘·/˘
Shaking their petals out, sheaf by sheaf,9/˘·/˘····
Till with disks like shields and stems like towers10········/˘
Burned the host of the passion-flowers10·˘····/˘/˘
... Had the Moonshee flown like a midnight thief?10··/˘···/··
... Yet a thing like a monkey, shrivelled and black,11·····/˘/˘··
Chattered and danced as they forced him back.10/˘˘·······
As the coward chatters for empty pride,10··/˘/˘·/˘·
In the face of a foe that he cannot but fear,12········/˘··
It chattered and leapt from side to side,10·/˘˘······
And its voice rang strangely upon the ear.10····/˘····
As the cry of a wizard that dares not own11·····/˘····
Another's brighter and mightier throne;10˘/˘/˘·/˘˘·
As the wrath of a fool that rails aloud10········˘/
On the fire that burnt him; the brazen bray10··/····/˘·
Clamoured and sang o'er the gaping crowd,10/˘˘····/˘·
And flapped like a gabbling goose away.10··˘·····˘/

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