Song

George Meredith (1828–1909) · 1851–1862

trochaic tetrameter · 25 lines · from Poems, Volume I

UNDER boughs of breathing May,In the mild spring-time I lay,Lonely, for I had no love;And the sweet birds all sang for pity,Cuckoo, lark, and dove.

Tell me, cuckoo, then I cried,Dare I woo and wed a bride?I, like thee, have no home-nest;And the twin notes thus tuned their ditty,—‘Love can answer best.’

Nor, warm dove with tender coo,Have I thy soft voice to woo,Even were a damsel by;And the deep woodland crooned its ditty,—‘Love her first and try.’

Nor have I, wild lark, thy wing,That from bluest heaven can bringBliss, whatever fate befall;And the sky-lyrist trilled this ditty,—‘Love will give thee all.’

So it chanced while June was young,Wooing well with fervent song,I had won a damsel coy;And the sweet birds that sang for pity,Jubileed for joy.

Words in this poem

ditty n.
A saying or utterance; especially, one that is short and frequently repeated; a theme. [OE. dite, OF. ditié, fr. L. dictatum, p. p. neut. of dictare to say often, dictate, compose. See Dictate, v. t.]
damsel n.
A young person, either male or female, of noble or gentle extraction; as, Damsel Pepin; Damsel Richard, Prince of Wales. [OE. damosel, damesel, damisel, damsel, fr. OF. damoisele, damisele, gentlewoman, F. demoiselle young lady; cf. OF. damoisel young nobleman, F. damoiseau; fr. LL]
fervent a.
Hot; glowing; boiling; burning; as, a fervent summer. [F. fervent, L. fervens, -entis. p.pr. of fervere o the boiling hot, to boil, glow.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Song is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems — Volume 1, Project Gutenberg ebook #1381; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: George Meredith, Song, in Poems, Volume I (1851–1862), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #1381, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/meredith-poems/song-4.html, id L13150.

Form and metre

Song is 25 lines in 5 stanzas of 5 lines each. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%). 96% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.2 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending.

See other poems in trochaic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABCB mayA · layA · loveB · pityC · doveB
  2. 2 DDECE criedD · brideD · nestE · dittyC · bestE
  3. 3 FFG-G cooF · wooF · byG · ditty · tryG
  4. 4 HHIJI wingH · bringH · befallI · dittyJ · allI
  5. 5 --KJK young · song · coyK · pityJ · joyK
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
UNDER boughs of breathing May,7····/˘·
In the mild spring-time I lay,7·······
Lonely, for I had no love;7/˘·····
And the sweet birds all sang for pity,9·······/˘
Cuckoo, lark, and dove.5/····
Tell me, cuckoo, then I cried,7··/····
Dare I woo and wed a bride?7·······
I, like thee, have no home-nest;7·······
And the twin notes thus tuned their ditty,—10······˘·/˘
‘Love can answer best.’5··/˘·
Nor, warm dove with tender coo,7····/˘·
Have I thy soft voice to woo,7·······
Even were a damsel by;7/˘··/˘·
And the deep woodland crooned its ditty,—10···/˘·˘·/˘
‘Love her first and try.’5·····
Nor have I, wild lark, thy wing,7·······
That from bluest heaven can bring8··/˘/˘··
Bliss, whatever fate befall;7··/˘·˘/
And the sky-lyrist trilled this ditty,—10···/˘·˘·/˘
‘Love will give thee all.’5·····
So it chanced while June was young,7·······
Wooing well with fervent song,7/˘··/˘·
I had won a damsel coy;7····/˘·
And the sweet birds that sang for pity,9·······/˘
Jubileed for joy.5/˘···

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