Little Brother’s Secret

Katherine Mansfield (1888–1923) · 1923

iambic tetrameter · 12 lines · from Poems

When my birthday was comingLittle Brother had a secret:He kept it for days and daysAnd just hummed a little tune when I asked him.But one night it rainedAnd I woke up and heard him crying:Then he told me.“I planted two lumps of sugar in your gardenBecause you love it so frightfullyI thought there would be a whole sugar tree for your birthday,And now it will all be melted.”O the darling!

Words in this poem

frightfully adv.
In a frightful manner; to a frightful dagree.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Little Brother’s Secret is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #59276; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Katherine Mansfield, Little Brother’s Secret, in Poems (1923), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #59276, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/mansfield-poems/little-brother-s-secret.html, id L27572.

Form and metre

Little Brother’s Secret is 12 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 71%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
When my birthday was coming7··/··/˘
Little Brother had a secret:8/˘/˘··/˘
He kept it for days and days7·······
And just hummed a little tune when I asked him.11····/˘·····
But one night it rained5·····
And I woke up and heard him crying:9·······/˘
Then he told me.4····
“I planted two lumps of sugar in your garden12·/˘···/˘··/˘
Because you love it so frightfully9······/˘˘
I thought there would be a whole sugar tree for your birthday,14·······/˘···/·
And now it will all be melted.”8······/˘
O the darling!4··/˘

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