The Candle

Katherine Mansfield (1888–1923) · 1923

30 lines · from Poems

By my bed, on a little round tableThe Grandmother placed a candle.She gave me three kisses telling me they were three dreamsAnd tucked me in just where I loved being tucked.Then she went out of the room and the door was shut.I lay still, waiting for my three dreams to talk;But they were silent.Suddenly I remembered giving her three kisses back.Perhaps, by mistake, I had given my three little dreams.I sat up in bed.The room grew big, oh, bigger far than a church.The wardrobe, quite by itself, as big as a house.And the jug on the washstand smiled at me:It was not a friendly smile.I looked at the basket-chair where my clothes lay folded:The chair gave a creak as though it were listening for something.Perhaps it was coming alive and going to dress in my clothes.But the awful thing was the window:I could not think what was outside.No tree to be seen, I was sure,No nice little plant or friendly pebbly path.Why did she pull the blind down every night?It was better to know.I crunched my teeth and crept out of bed,I peeped through a slit of the blind.There was nothing at all to be seen.But hundreds of friendly candles all over the skyIn remembrance of frightened children.I went back to bed ...The three dreams started singing a little song.

Words in this poem

went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
bigger a.
, compar. of Big.
wardrobe n.
A room or apartment where clothes are kept, or wearing apparel is stored; a portable closet for hanging up clothes. [OE. warderobe, OF. warderobe, F. garderobe; of German origin. See Ward, v. t., and Robe.]
washstand n.
A piece of furniture holding the ewer or pitcher, basin, and other requisites for washing the person.
creak v. i.
To make a prolonged sharp grating or ssqueaking sound, as by the friction of hard substances; as, shoes creak. [OE. creken, prob. of imitative origin; cf. E. crack, and. D. kreiken to crackle, chirp.]
pebbly a.
Full of pebbles; pebbled.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Candle is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #59276; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Katherine Mansfield, The Candle, in Poems (1923), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #59276, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/mansfield-poems/the-candle.html, id L27571.

Form and metre

The Candle is 30 lines in a single stanza.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 --A-----AB----C---C----B-D-DB- table · candle · dreamsA · tucked · shut · talk · silent · back · dreamsA · bedB · church · house · me · smile · foldedC · something · clothes · window · outsideC · sure · path · night · know · bedB · blind · seenD · sky · childrenD · bedB · song
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
By my bed, on a little round table10·····/˘·/˘
The Grandmother placed a candle.8·/·˘··/˘
She gave me three kisses telling me they were three dreams13····/˘/˘·····
And tucked me in just where I loved being tucked.10········/·
Then she went out of the room and the door was shut.12············
I lay still, waiting for my three dreams to talk;11···/˘······
But they were silent.5···/˘
Suddenly I remembered giving her three kisses back.13/˘·˘/˘/˘··/˘·
Perhaps, by mistake, I had given my three little dreams.13˘/·˘/··/··/˘·
I sat up in bed.5·····
The room grew big, oh, bigger far than a church.11·····/˘····
The wardrobe, quite by itself, as big as a house.12·/···˘/·····
And the jug on the washstand smiled at me:10·····/˘···
It was not a friendly smile.7····/˘·
I looked at the basket-chair where my clothes lay folded:13····/˘·····/˘
The chair gave a creak as though it were listening for something.14·········/˘·/˘
Perhaps it was coming alive and going to dress in my clothes.15˘/··/˘˘/·/·····
But the awful thing was the window:9··/˘···/˘
I could not think what was outside.8······//
No tree to be seen, I was sure,8········
No nice little plant or friendly pebbly path.11··/˘··/˘/˘·
Why did she pull the blind down every night?10·······/˘·
It was better to know.6··/˘··
I crunched my teeth and crept out of bed,9·········
I peeped through a slit of the blind.8········
There was nothing at all to be seen.9··/˘·····
But hundreds of friendly candles all over the sky12·/˘·/˘/˘····
In remembrance of frightened children.9·˘/˘·/˘/˘
I went back to bed ...5·····
The three dreams started singing a little song.11···/˘/˘·/˘·

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