Poem VI

James Macpherson (1736–1796) · 1760

trochaic tetrameter · 83 lines · from Fragments of Ancient Poetry

Son of the noble Fingal, Oscian,Prince of men! what tears run downthe cheeks of age? what shades thymighty soul?

Memory, son of Alpin, memorywounds the aged. Of former times aremy thoughts; my thoughts are of thenoble Fingal. The race of the king returninto my mind, and wound me withremembrance.

One day, returned from the sport ofthe mountains, from pursuing the sonsof the hill, we covered this heath withour youth. Fingal the mighty was here,and Oscur, my son, great in war. Fairon our sight from the sea, at once, avirgin came. Her breast was like thesnow of one night. Her cheek like thebud of the rose. Mild was her bluerolling eye: but sorrow was big in herheart.

Fingal renowned in war! she cries,sons of the king, preserve me! Speak secure,replies the king, daughter of beauty,speak: our ear is open to all: ourswords redress the injured. I fly fromUllin, she cries, from Ullin famous inwar. I fly from the embrace of himwho would debase my blood. Cremor,the friend of men, was my father; Cremorthe Prince of Inverne.

Fingal's younger sons arose; Carrylexpert in the bow; Fillan beloved ofthe fair; and Fergus first in the race.--Who from the farthest Lochlyn?who to the seas of Molochasquir? whodares hurt the maid whom the sons ofFingal guard? Daughter of beauty, restsecure; rest in peace, thou fairest of women.

Far in the blue distance of the deep,some spot appeared like the back of theridge-wave. But soon the ship increasedon our sight. The hand of Ullin drewher to land. The mountains trembledas he moved. The hills shook at hissteps. Dire rattled his armour aroundhim. Death and destruction were in hiseyes. His stature like the roe of Morven.He moved in the lightning ofsteel.

Our warriors fell before him,like the field before the reapers. Fingal'sthree sons he bound. He plungedhis sword into the fair-one's breast.She fell as a wreath of snow before thesun in spring. Her bosom heaved indeath; her soul came forth in blood.Oscur my son came down; themighty in battle descended. His armourrattled as thunder; and the lightning ofhis eyes was terrible. There, was theclashing of swords; there, was the voiceof steel. They struck and they thrust;they digged for death with their swords.But death was distant far, and delayedto come. The sun began to decline;and the cow-herd thought of home.Then Oscur's keen steel found the heartof Ullin. He fell like a mountain-oakcovered over with glittering frost: Heshone like a rock on the plain.--Herethe daughter of beauty lieth; andhere the bravest of men. Here oneday ended the fair and the valiant.Here rest the pursuer and the pursued.

Son of Alpin! the woes of the agedare many: their tears are for the past.This raised my sorrow, warriour; memoryawaked my grief. Oscur myson was brave; but Oscur is now nomore. Thou hast heard my grief, Oson of Alpin; forgive the tears of theaged.

Words in this poem

cremor n.
Cream; a substance resembling cream; yeast; scum. [L. CF. Cream.]
shook v. t.
To pack, as staves, in a shook.
dire a.
Ill-boding; portentous; as, dire omens. [L. dirus; of uncertain origin.]
armour n.
Defensive arms for the body; any clothing or covering worn to protect one's person in battle. [OE. armure, fr. F. armure, OF. armeure, fr. L. armatura. See Armature.]
valiant a.
Vigorous in body; strong; powerful; as, a valiant fencer. [OE. valiant, F. vaillant, OF. vaillant, valant, originally p. pr. of OF. & F. valoir to be worth, L. valere to be strong. See Wield, and cf. Avail, Convalesce, ]
warriour n.
A man engaged or experienced in war, or in the military life; a soldier; a champion. [OE. werreour, OF. werreour, guerreor, from guerre, werre, war. See War, and Warray.]
hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Poem VI is in the public domain. This text is taken from Fragments of Ancient Poetry, Project Gutenberg ebook #8161; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: James Macpherson, Poem VI, in Fragments of Ancient Poetry (1760), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8161, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macpherson-ossian/poem-vi.html, id L09644.

Form and metre

Poem VI is 83 lines in 8 stanzas. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 74%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.3 syllables. 12 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 68% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 3 ---AABBB--- of · sons · with · hereA · fairA · aB · theB · theB · blue · her · heart
  2. 4 -------AA- cries · secure · beauty · our · from · in · him · cremorA · cremorA · inverne
  3. 5 -A---A-- carryl · ofA · race · lochlyn · who · ofA · rest · women
  4. 6 -----A-A--- deep · the · increased · drew · trembled · hisA · around · hisA · morven · of · steel
  5. 7 ----A--A--A--------A----- him · fingal's · plunged · breast · theA · in · blood · theA · armour · of · theA · voice · thrust · swords · delayed · decline · home · heart · oak · heA · here · and · one · valiant · pursued
  6. 8 A---BB-A agedA · past · memory · my · noB · oB · the · agedA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Son of the noble Fingal, Oscian,9···/˘····
Prince of men! what tears run down7·······
the cheeks of age? what shades thy7·······
mighty soul?3/˘·
Memory, son of Alpin, memory10/˘˘··˘//˘˘
wounds the aged. Of former times are8····/˘··
my thoughts; my thoughts are of the7·······
noble Fingal. The race of the king return11/˘·······˘/
into my mind, and wound me with8········
remembrance.3˘/˘
One day, returned from the sport of8··˘/····
the mountains, from pursuing the sons9·/˘·˘/˘··
of the hill, we covered this heath with9····/˘···
our youth. Fingal the mighty was here,10/˘····/˘··
and Oscur, my son, great in war. Fair9·········
on our sight from the sea, at once, a10·/˘·······
virgin came. Her breast was like the8/˘······
snow of one night. Her cheek like the8········
bud of the rose. Mild was her blue8········
rolling eye: but sorrow was big in her10/˘··/˘····
heart.1·
Fingal renowned in war! she cries,8··˘/····
sons of the king, preserve me! Speak secure,10····˘/··˘/
replies the king, daughter of beauty,9˘/··/˘·/˘
speak: our ear is open to all: our11·/˘··/˘··/˘
swords redress the injured. I fly from9·˘/·/˘···
Ullin, she cries, from Ullin famous in10·······/˘·
war. I fly from the embrace of him9·····˘/··
who would debase my blood. Cremor,8··˘/··/˘
the friend of men, was my father; Cremor10······/˘/˘
the Prince of Inverne.5·····
Fingal's younger sons arose; Carryl9··/˘·˘/··
expert in the bow; Fillan beloved of10/˘·····˘/·
the fair; and Fergus first in the race.9···/˘····
--Who from the farthest Lochlyn?7···/˘··
who to the seas of Molochasquir? who10··········
dares hurt the maid whom the sons of8········
Fingal guard? Daughter of beauty, rest9···/˘·/˘·
secure; rest in peace, thou fairest of women.11˘/····/˘·/˘
Far in the blue distance of the deep,9····/˘···
some spot appeared like the back of the9··˘/·····
ridge-wave. But soon the ship increased8······˘/
on our sight. The hand of Ullin drew10·/˘·······
her to land. The mountains trembled8····/˘/˘
as he moved. The hills shook at his8········
steps. Dire rattled his armour around9··/˘·/˘··
him. Death and destruction were in his9···˘/˘···
eyes. His stature like the roe of Morven.10··/˘····/˘
He moved in the lightning of7····/˘·
steel.1·
Our warriors fell before him,9/˘/˘˘····
like the field before the reapers. Fingal's10······/˘··
three sons he bound. He plunged6······
his sword into the fair-one's breast.8········
She fell as a wreath of snow before the10··········
sun in spring. Her bosom heaved in8····/˘··
death; her soul came forth in blood.7·······
Oscur my son came down; the7·······
mighty in battle descended. His armour11/˘·/˘˘/˘·/˘
rattled as thunder; and the lightning of10/˘·/˘··/˘·
his eyes was terrible. There, was the9···/˘˘···
clashing of swords; there, was the voice8/˘······
of steel. They struck and they thrust;7·······
they digged for death with their swords.7·······
But death was distant far, and delayed9···/˘··˘/
to come. The sun began to decline;9····˘/·˘/
and the cow-herd thought of home.7·······
Then Oscur's keen steel found the heart8········
of Ullin. He fell like a mountain-oak10·······/˘·
covered over with glittering frost: He10/˘···/˘˘··
shone like a rock on the plain.--Here8········
the daughter of beauty lieth; and8·/˘·/˘··
here the bravest of men. Here one8··/˘····
day ended the fair and the valiant.9·/˘····/˘
Here rest the pursuer and the pursued.10···˘/˘··˘/
Son of Alpin! the woes of the aged9··˘/·····
are many: their tears are for the past.9·/˘······
This raised my sorrow, warriour; memory11···/˘/˘˘/˘˘
awaked my grief. Oscur my7˘/·····
son was brave; but Oscur is now no9·········
more. Thou hast heard my grief, O7·······
son of Alpin; forgive the tears of the10··˘/˘/····
aged.1·

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