Poem VI
Son of the noble Fingal, Oscian,Prince of men! what tears run downthe cheeks of age? what shades thymighty soul?
Memory, son of Alpin, memorywounds the aged. Of former times aremy thoughts; my thoughts are of thenoble Fingal. The race of the king returninto my mind, and wound me withremembrance.
One day, returned from the sport ofthe mountains, from pursuing the sonsof the hill, we covered this heath withour youth. Fingal the mighty was here,and Oscur, my son, great in war. Fairon our sight from the sea, at once, avirgin came. Her breast was like thesnow of one night. Her cheek like thebud of the rose. Mild was her bluerolling eye: but sorrow was big in herheart.
Fingal renowned in war! she cries,sons of the king, preserve me! Speak secure,replies the king, daughter of beauty,speak: our ear is open to all: ourswords redress the injured. I fly fromUllin, she cries, from Ullin famous inwar. I fly from the embrace of himwho would debase my blood. Cremor,the friend of men, was my father; Cremorthe Prince of Inverne.
Fingal's younger sons arose; Carrylexpert in the bow; Fillan beloved ofthe fair; and Fergus first in the race.--Who from the farthest Lochlyn?who to the seas of Molochasquir? whodares hurt the maid whom the sons ofFingal guard? Daughter of beauty, restsecure; rest in peace, thou fairest of women.
Far in the blue distance of the deep,some spot appeared like the back of theridge-wave. But soon the ship increasedon our sight. The hand of Ullin drewher to land. The mountains trembledas he moved. The hills shook at hissteps. Dire rattled his armour aroundhim. Death and destruction were in hiseyes. His stature like the roe of Morven.He moved in the lightning ofsteel.
Our warriors fell before him,like the field before the reapers. Fingal'sthree sons he bound. He plungedhis sword into the fair-one's breast.She fell as a wreath of snow before thesun in spring. Her bosom heaved indeath; her soul came forth in blood.Oscur my son came down; themighty in battle descended. His armourrattled as thunder; and the lightning ofhis eyes was terrible. There, was theclashing of swords; there, was the voiceof steel. They struck and they thrust;they digged for death with their swords.But death was distant far, and delayedto come. The sun began to decline;and the cow-herd thought of home.Then Oscur's keen steel found the heartof Ullin. He fell like a mountain-oakcovered over with glittering frost: Heshone like a rock on the plain.--Herethe daughter of beauty lieth; andhere the bravest of men. Here oneday ended the fair and the valiant.Here rest the pursuer and the pursued.
Son of Alpin! the woes of the agedare many: their tears are for the past.This raised my sorrow, warriour; memoryawaked my grief. Oscur myson was brave; but Oscur is now nomore. Thou hast heard my grief, Oson of Alpin; forgive the tears of theaged.
Words in this poem
- cremor n.
- Cream; a substance resembling cream; yeast; scum. [L. CF. Cream.]
- shook v. t.
- To pack, as staves, in a shook.
- dire a.
- Ill-boding; portentous; as, dire omens. [L. dirus; of uncertain origin.]
- armour n.
- Defensive arms for the body; any clothing or covering worn to protect one's person in battle. [OE. armure, fr. F. armure, OF. armeure, fr. L. armatura. See Armature.]
- valiant a.
- Vigorous in body; strong; powerful; as, a valiant fencer. [OE. valiant, F. vaillant, OF. vaillant, valant, originally p. pr. of OF. & F. valoir to be worth, L. valere to be strong. See Wield, and cf. Avail, Convalesce, ]
- warriour n.
- A man engaged or experienced in war, or in the military life; a soldier; a champion. [OE. werreour, OF. werreour, guerreor, from guerre, werre, war. See War, and Warray.]
- hast
- , 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Poem VI is in the public domain. This text is taken from Fragments of Ancient Poetry, Project Gutenberg ebook #8161; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: James Macpherson, Poem VI, in Fragments of Ancient Poetry (1760), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8161, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macpherson-ossian/poem-vi.html, id L09644.
Form and metre
Poem VI is 83 lines in 8 stanzas. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 74%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.3 syllables. 12 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 68% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in trochaic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 3 ---AABBB--- of · sons · with · hereA · fairA · aB · theB · theB · blue · her · heart
- 4 -------AA- cries · secure · beauty · our · from · in · him · cremorA · cremorA · inverne
- 5 -A---A-- carryl · ofA · race · lochlyn · who · ofA · rest · women
- 6 -----A-A--- deep · the · increased · drew · trembled · hisA · around · hisA · morven · of · steel
- 7 ----A--A--A--------A----- him · fingal's · plunged · breast · theA · in · blood · theA · armour · of · theA · voice · thrust · swords · delayed · decline · home · heart · oak · heA · here · and · one · valiant · pursued
- 8 A---BB-A agedA · past · memory · my · noB · oB · the · agedA
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Son of the noble Fingal, Oscian, | 9 | ···/˘···· |
| Prince of men! what tears run down | 7 | ······· |
| the cheeks of age? what shades thy | 7 | ······· |
| mighty soul? | 3 | /˘· |
| Memory, son of Alpin, memory | 10 | /˘˘··˘//˘˘ |
| wounds the aged. Of former times are | 8 | ····/˘·· |
| my thoughts; my thoughts are of the | 7 | ······· |
| noble Fingal. The race of the king return | 11 | /˘·······˘/ |
| into my mind, and wound me with | 8 | ········ |
| remembrance. | 3 | ˘/˘ |
| One day, returned from the sport of | 8 | ··˘/···· |
| the mountains, from pursuing the sons | 9 | ·/˘·˘/˘·· |
| of the hill, we covered this heath with | 9 | ····/˘··· |
| our youth. Fingal the mighty was here, | 10 | /˘····/˘·· |
| and Oscur, my son, great in war. Fair | 9 | ········· |
| on our sight from the sea, at once, a | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| virgin came. Her breast was like the | 8 | /˘······ |
| snow of one night. Her cheek like the | 8 | ········ |
| bud of the rose. Mild was her blue | 8 | ········ |
| rolling eye: but sorrow was big in her | 10 | /˘··/˘···· |
| heart. | 1 | · |
| Fingal renowned in war! she cries, | 8 | ··˘/···· |
| sons of the king, preserve me! Speak secure, | 10 | ····˘/··˘/ |
| replies the king, daughter of beauty, | 9 | ˘/··/˘·/˘ |
| speak: our ear is open to all: our | 11 | ·/˘··/˘··/˘ |
| swords redress the injured. I fly from | 9 | ·˘/·/˘··· |
| Ullin, she cries, from Ullin famous in | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| war. I fly from the embrace of him | 9 | ·····˘/·· |
| who would debase my blood. Cremor, | 8 | ··˘/··/˘ |
| the friend of men, was my father; Cremor | 10 | ······/˘/˘ |
| the Prince of Inverne. | 5 | ····· |
| Fingal's younger sons arose; Carryl | 9 | ··/˘·˘/·· |
| expert in the bow; Fillan beloved of | 10 | /˘·····˘/· |
| the fair; and Fergus first in the race. | 9 | ···/˘···· |
| --Who from the farthest Lochlyn? | 7 | ···/˘·· |
| who to the seas of Molochasquir? who | 10 | ·········· |
| dares hurt the maid whom the sons of | 8 | ········ |
| Fingal guard? Daughter of beauty, rest | 9 | ···/˘·/˘· |
| secure; rest in peace, thou fairest of women. | 11 | ˘/····/˘·/˘ |
| Far in the blue distance of the deep, | 9 | ····/˘··· |
| some spot appeared like the back of the | 9 | ··˘/····· |
| ridge-wave. But soon the ship increased | 8 | ······˘/ |
| on our sight. The hand of Ullin drew | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| her to land. The mountains trembled | 8 | ····/˘/˘ |
| as he moved. The hills shook at his | 8 | ········ |
| steps. Dire rattled his armour around | 9 | ··/˘·/˘·· |
| him. Death and destruction were in his | 9 | ···˘/˘··· |
| eyes. His stature like the roe of Morven. | 10 | ··/˘····/˘ |
| He moved in the lightning of | 7 | ····/˘· |
| steel. | 1 | · |
| Our warriors fell before him, | 9 | /˘/˘˘···· |
| like the field before the reapers. Fingal's | 10 | ······/˘·· |
| three sons he bound. He plunged | 6 | ······ |
| his sword into the fair-one's breast. | 8 | ········ |
| She fell as a wreath of snow before the | 10 | ·········· |
| sun in spring. Her bosom heaved in | 8 | ····/˘·· |
| death; her soul came forth in blood. | 7 | ······· |
| Oscur my son came down; the | 7 | ······· |
| mighty in battle descended. His armour | 11 | /˘·/˘˘/˘·/˘ |
| rattled as thunder; and the lightning of | 10 | /˘·/˘··/˘· |
| his eyes was terrible. There, was the | 9 | ···/˘˘··· |
| clashing of swords; there, was the voice | 8 | /˘······ |
| of steel. They struck and they thrust; | 7 | ······· |
| they digged for death with their swords. | 7 | ······· |
| But death was distant far, and delayed | 9 | ···/˘··˘/ |
| to come. The sun began to decline; | 9 | ····˘/·˘/ |
| and the cow-herd thought of home. | 7 | ······· |
| Then Oscur's keen steel found the heart | 8 | ········ |
| of Ullin. He fell like a mountain-oak | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| covered over with glittering frost: He | 10 | /˘···/˘˘·· |
| shone like a rock on the plain.--Here | 8 | ········ |
| the daughter of beauty lieth; and | 8 | ·/˘·/˘·· |
| here the bravest of men. Here one | 8 | ··/˘···· |
| day ended the fair and the valiant. | 9 | ·/˘····/˘ |
| Here rest the pursuer and the pursued. | 10 | ···˘/˘··˘/ |
| Son of Alpin! the woes of the aged | 9 | ··˘/····· |
| are many: their tears are for the past. | 9 | ·/˘······ |
| This raised my sorrow, warriour; memory | 11 | ···/˘/˘˘/˘˘ |
| awaked my grief. Oscur my | 7 | ˘/····· |
| son was brave; but Oscur is now no | 9 | ········· |
| more. Thou hast heard my grief, O | 7 | ······· |
| son of Alpin; forgive the tears of the | 10 | ··˘/˘/···· |
| aged. | 1 | · |
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