Poem V

James Macpherson (1736–1796) · 1760

trochaic tetrameter · 57 lines · from Fragments of Ancient Poetry

Autumn is dark on the mountains;grey mist rests on the hills. Thewhirlwind is heard on the heath. Darkrolls the river through the narrow plain.A tree stands alone on the hill, andmarks the grave of Connal. The leaveswhirl round with the wind, and strewthe grave of the dead. At times areseen here the ghosts of the deceased,when the musing hunter alone stalksslowly over the heath.

Who can reach the source of thyrace, O Connal? and who recount thyFathers? Thy family grew like an oakon the mountain, which meeteth thewind with its lofty head. But now itis torn from the earth. Who shall supplythe place of Connal?

Here was the din of arms; andhere the groans of the dying. Mournfulare the wars of Fingal! O Connal!it was here thou didst fall. Thine armwas like a storm; thy sword, a beamof the sky; thy height, a rock on theplain; thine eyes, a furnace of fire.Louder than a storm was thy voice,when thou confoundedst the field. Warriorsfell by thy sword, as the thistle bythe staff of a boy.

Dargo the mighty came on, like acloud of thunder. His brows were contractedand dark. His eyes like twocaves in a rock. Bright rose theirswords on each side; dire was the clangof their steel.

The daughter of Rinval was near;Crimora, bright in the armour of man;her hair loose behind, her bow in herhand. She followed the youth to thewar, Connal her much beloved. Shedrew the string on Dargo; but erringpierced her Connal. He falls like anoak on the plain; like a rock from theshaggy hill. What shall she do, haplessmaid!--He bleeds; her Connal dies.All the night long she cries, and all theday, O Connal, my love, and myfriend! With grief the sad mournerdied.

Earth here incloseth the loveliestpair on the hill. The grass grows betweenthe stones of their tomb; I sit inthe mournful shade. The wind sighsthrough the grass; and their memoryrushes on my mind. Undisturbed younow sleep together; in the tomb of themountain you rest alone.

Words in this poem

shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
didst
, the 2d pers. sing. imp. of Do.
dire a.
Ill-boding; portentous; as, dire omens. [L. dirus; of uncertain origin.]
clang v. t.
To strike together so as to produce a ringing metallic sound. [L. clangere; akin to Gr. clank.]
armour n.
Defensive arms for the body; any clothing or covering worn to protect one's person in battle. [OE. armure, fr. F. armure, OF. armeure, fr. L. armatura. See Armature.]
hapless a.
Without hap or luck; luckless; unfortunate; unlucky; unhappy; as, hapless youth; hapless maid.
mourner n.
One who mourns or is grieved at any misfortune, as the death of a friend.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Poem V is in the public domain. This text is taken from Fragments of Ancient Poetry, Project Gutenberg ebook #8161; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: James Macpherson, Poem V, in Fragments of Ancient Poetry (1760), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8161, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macpherson-ossian/poem-v.html, id L09643.

Form and metre

Poem V is 57 lines in 6 stanzas. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 76%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.0 syllables. 9 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 74% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in trochaic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 2 AA---A- thyA · thyA · oak · the · it · supplyA · connal
  2. 5 -A-BB-AB--B--- near · manA · her · theB · sheB · erring · anA · theB · hapless · dies · theB · my · mourner · died
  3. 6 -AA----- loveliest · betweenA · inA · sighs · memory · you · the · alone
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Autumn is dark on the mountains;8/˘····/˘
grey mist rests on the hills. The7·······
whirlwind is heard on the heath. Dark8/·······
rolls the river through the narrow plain.9··/˘··/˘·
A tree stands alone on the hill, and9···˘/····
marks the grave of Connal. The leaves8········
whirl round with the wind, and strew7·······
the grave of the dead. At times are8········
seen here the ghosts of the deceased,8······˘/
when the musing hunter alone stalks9··/˘/˘˘/·
slowly over the heath.6/˘····
Who can reach the source of thy7·······
race, O Connal? and who recount thy9······˘/·
Fathers? Thy family grew like an oak10/˘·/˘˘····
on the mountain, which meeteth the8··/˘·/˘·
wind with its lofty head. But now it9···/˘····
is torn from the earth. Who shall supply9·······˘/
the place of Connal?5·····
Here was the din of arms; and7·······
here the groans of the dying. Mournful9·····/˘/˘
are the wars of Fingal! O Connal!9·········
it was here thou didst fall. Thine arm8········
was like a storm; thy sword, a beam8········
of the sky; thy height, a rock on the9·········
plain; thine eyes, a furnace of fire.9····/˘·/˘
Louder than a storm was thy voice,8/˘······
when thou confoundedst the field. Warriors10·······/˘˘
fell by thy sword, as the thistle by9······/˘·
the staff of a boy.5·····
Dargo the mighty came on, like a9···/˘····
cloud of thunder. His brows were contracted10··/˘···/˘˘
and dark. His eyes like two6······
caves in a rock. Bright rose their7·······
swords on each side; dire was the clang8········
of their steel.3···
The daughter of Rinval was near;8·/˘·····
Crimora, bright in the armour of man;10······/˘··
her hair loose behind, her bow in her9·········
hand. She followed the youth to the8··/˘····
war, Connal her much beloved. She8·····˘/·
drew the string on Dargo; but erring9·······/˘
pierced her Connal. He falls like an8········
oak on the plain; like a rock from the9·········
shaggy hill. What shall she do, hapless9/˘·····/˘
maid!--He bleeds; her Connal dies.7·······
All the night long she cries, and all the9·········
day, O Connal, my love, and my8········
friend! With grief the sad mourner7·····/˘
died.1·
Earth here incloseth the loveliest9·········
pair on the hill. The grass grows between9·········
the stones of their tomb; I sit in8········
the mournful shade. The wind sighs7·/˘····
through the grass; and their memory8·····/˘˘
rushes on my mind. Undisturbed you9/˘····˘/·
now sleep together; in the tomb of the10··˘/˘·····
mountain you rest alone.6/˘··˘/

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