Poem V
Autumn is dark on the mountains;grey mist rests on the hills. Thewhirlwind is heard on the heath. Darkrolls the river through the narrow plain.A tree stands alone on the hill, andmarks the grave of Connal. The leaveswhirl round with the wind, and strewthe grave of the dead. At times areseen here the ghosts of the deceased,when the musing hunter alone stalksslowly over the heath.
Who can reach the source of thyrace, O Connal? and who recount thyFathers? Thy family grew like an oakon the mountain, which meeteth thewind with its lofty head. But now itis torn from the earth. Who shall supplythe place of Connal?
Here was the din of arms; andhere the groans of the dying. Mournfulare the wars of Fingal! O Connal!it was here thou didst fall. Thine armwas like a storm; thy sword, a beamof the sky; thy height, a rock on theplain; thine eyes, a furnace of fire.Louder than a storm was thy voice,when thou confoundedst the field. Warriorsfell by thy sword, as the thistle bythe staff of a boy.
Dargo the mighty came on, like acloud of thunder. His brows were contractedand dark. His eyes like twocaves in a rock. Bright rose theirswords on each side; dire was the clangof their steel.
The daughter of Rinval was near;Crimora, bright in the armour of man;her hair loose behind, her bow in herhand. She followed the youth to thewar, Connal her much beloved. Shedrew the string on Dargo; but erringpierced her Connal. He falls like anoak on the plain; like a rock from theshaggy hill. What shall she do, haplessmaid!--He bleeds; her Connal dies.All the night long she cries, and all theday, O Connal, my love, and myfriend! With grief the sad mournerdied.
Earth here incloseth the loveliestpair on the hill. The grass grows betweenthe stones of their tomb; I sit inthe mournful shade. The wind sighsthrough the grass; and their memoryrushes on my mind. Undisturbed younow sleep together; in the tomb of themountain you rest alone.
Words in this poem
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- didst
- , the 2d pers. sing. imp. of Do.
- dire a.
- Ill-boding; portentous; as, dire omens. [L. dirus; of uncertain origin.]
- clang v. t.
- To strike together so as to produce a ringing metallic sound. [L. clangere; akin to Gr. clank.]
- armour n.
- Defensive arms for the body; any clothing or covering worn to protect one's person in battle. [OE. armure, fr. F. armure, OF. armeure, fr. L. armatura. See Armature.]
- hapless a.
- Without hap or luck; luckless; unfortunate; unlucky; unhappy; as, hapless youth; hapless maid.
- mourner n.
- One who mourns or is grieved at any misfortune, as the death of a friend.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Poem V is in the public domain. This text is taken from Fragments of Ancient Poetry, Project Gutenberg ebook #8161; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: James Macpherson, Poem V, in Fragments of Ancient Poetry (1760), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8161, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macpherson-ossian/poem-v.html, id L09643.
Form and metre
Poem V is 57 lines in 6 stanzas. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 76%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.0 syllables. 9 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 74% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in trochaic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 2 AA---A- thyA · thyA · oak · the · it · supplyA · connal
- 5 -A-BB-AB--B--- near · manA · her · theB · sheB · erring · anA · theB · hapless · dies · theB · my · mourner · died
- 6 -AA----- loveliest · betweenA · inA · sighs · memory · you · the · alone
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Autumn is dark on the mountains; | 8 | /˘····/˘ |
| grey mist rests on the hills. The | 7 | ······· |
| whirlwind is heard on the heath. Dark | 8 | /······· |
| rolls the river through the narrow plain. | 9 | ··/˘··/˘· |
| A tree stands alone on the hill, and | 9 | ···˘/···· |
| marks the grave of Connal. The leaves | 8 | ········ |
| whirl round with the wind, and strew | 7 | ······· |
| the grave of the dead. At times are | 8 | ········ |
| seen here the ghosts of the deceased, | 8 | ······˘/ |
| when the musing hunter alone stalks | 9 | ··/˘/˘˘/· |
| slowly over the heath. | 6 | /˘···· |
| Who can reach the source of thy | 7 | ······· |
| race, O Connal? and who recount thy | 9 | ······˘/· |
| Fathers? Thy family grew like an oak | 10 | /˘·/˘˘···· |
| on the mountain, which meeteth the | 8 | ··/˘·/˘· |
| wind with its lofty head. But now it | 9 | ···/˘···· |
| is torn from the earth. Who shall supply | 9 | ·······˘/ |
| the place of Connal? | 5 | ····· |
| Here was the din of arms; and | 7 | ······· |
| here the groans of the dying. Mournful | 9 | ·····/˘/˘ |
| are the wars of Fingal! O Connal! | 9 | ········· |
| it was here thou didst fall. Thine arm | 8 | ········ |
| was like a storm; thy sword, a beam | 8 | ········ |
| of the sky; thy height, a rock on the | 9 | ········· |
| plain; thine eyes, a furnace of fire. | 9 | ····/˘·/˘ |
| Louder than a storm was thy voice, | 8 | /˘······ |
| when thou confoundedst the field. Warriors | 10 | ·······/˘˘ |
| fell by thy sword, as the thistle by | 9 | ······/˘· |
| the staff of a boy. | 5 | ····· |
| Dargo the mighty came on, like a | 9 | ···/˘···· |
| cloud of thunder. His brows were contracted | 10 | ··/˘···/˘˘ |
| and dark. His eyes like two | 6 | ······ |
| caves in a rock. Bright rose their | 7 | ······· |
| swords on each side; dire was the clang | 8 | ········ |
| of their steel. | 3 | ··· |
| The daughter of Rinval was near; | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Crimora, bright in the armour of man; | 10 | ······/˘·· |
| her hair loose behind, her bow in her | 9 | ········· |
| hand. She followed the youth to the | 8 | ··/˘···· |
| war, Connal her much beloved. She | 8 | ·····˘/· |
| drew the string on Dargo; but erring | 9 | ·······/˘ |
| pierced her Connal. He falls like an | 8 | ········ |
| oak on the plain; like a rock from the | 9 | ········· |
| shaggy hill. What shall she do, hapless | 9 | /˘·····/˘ |
| maid!--He bleeds; her Connal dies. | 7 | ······· |
| All the night long she cries, and all the | 9 | ········· |
| day, O Connal, my love, and my | 8 | ········ |
| friend! With grief the sad mourner | 7 | ·····/˘ |
| died. | 1 | · |
| Earth here incloseth the loveliest | 9 | ········· |
| pair on the hill. The grass grows between | 9 | ········· |
| the stones of their tomb; I sit in | 8 | ········ |
| the mournful shade. The wind sighs | 7 | ·/˘···· |
| through the grass; and their memory | 8 | ·····/˘˘ |
| rushes on my mind. Undisturbed you | 9 | /˘····˘/· |
| now sleep together; in the tomb of the | 10 | ··˘/˘····· |
| mountain you rest alone. | 6 | /˘··˘/ |
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