Connal

James Macpherson (1736–1796) · 1760

trochaic tetrameter · 14 lines · from Fragments of Ancient Poetry

Fall indeed I may: But raise mytomb, Crimora. Some stones, a moundof earth, shall keep my memory.Though fair thou art, my love, as thelight; more pleasant than the gale ofthe hill; yet I will not stay. Raise mytomb, Crimora.

Then give me those arms of light;that sword, and that spear of steel. Ishall meet Dargo with thee, and aid mylovely Connal. Farewell, ye rocks ofArdven! ye deer! and ye streams ofthe hill!--We shall return no more.Our tombs are distant far.

Words in this poem

shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Connal is in the public domain. This text is taken from Fragments of Ancient Poetry, Project Gutenberg ebook #8161; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: James Macpherson, Connal, in Fragments of Ancient Poetry (1760), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8161, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macpherson-ossian/connal-2.html, id L09642.

Form and metre

Connal is 14 lines in 2 stanzas of 7 lines each. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 81%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.8 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 64% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 A----A- myA · mound · memory · the · of · myA · crimora
  2. 2 -AABB-- light · iA · myA · ofB · ofB · more · far
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Fall indeed I may: But raise my8·˘/·····
tomb, Crimora. Some stones, a mound8········
of earth, shall keep my memory.8·····/˘˘
Though fair thou art, my love, as the8········
light; more pleasant than the gale of8··/˘····
the hill; yet I will not stay. Raise my9·········
tomb, Crimora.4····
Then give me those arms of light;7·······
that sword, and that spear of steel. I8········
shall meet Dargo with thee, and aid my9·········
lovely Connal. Farewell, ye rocks of9/˘···/···
Ardven! ye deer! and ye streams of8········
the hill!--We shall return no more.8····˘/··
Our tombs are distant far.7/˘··/˘·

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