What Makes Summer?

George MacDonald (1824–1905) · 1893

trochaic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 132 lines · from A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems

Winter froze both brook and well;Fast and fast the snowflakes fell;Children gathered round the hearthMade a summer of their mirth;When a boy, so lately comeThat his life was yet one sumOf delights--of aimless rambles.Romps and dreams and games and gambols,Thought aloud: "I wish I knewWhat makes summer--that I do!"Father heard, and it did show himHow to write a little poem.

What makes summer, little one,Do you ask? It is the sun.Want of heat is all the harm,Summer is but winter warm.'Tis the sun--yes, that one there,Dim and gray, low in the air!Now he looks at us askance,But will lift his countenanceHigher up, and look down straighter.Rise much earlier, set much later,Till we sing out, "Hail, Well-comer,Thou hast brought our own old Summer!"

When the sun thus rises earlyAnd keeps shining all day rarely,Up he draws the larks to meet him,Earth's bird-angels, wild to greet him;Up he draws the clouds, and poursDown again their shining showers;Out he draws the grass and clover,Daisies, buttercups all over;Out he wiles all flowers to stareAt their father in the air--He all light, they how much duller,Yet son-suns of every colour!Then he draws their odours out,Sends them on the winds about.Next he draws out flying things--Out of eggs, fast-flapping wings;Out of lumps like frozen snails,Butterflies with splendid sails;Draws the blossoms from the trees,From their hives the buzzy bees,Golden things from muddy cracks--Beetles with their burnished backs;Laughter draws he from the riverGleaming back to the gleam-giver;Light he sends to every nookThat no creature be forsook;Draws from gloom and pain and sadness,Hope and blessing, peace and gladness,Making man's heart sing and shineWith his brilliancy divine:Summer, thus it is he makes it,And the little child he takes it.

Day's work done, adown the westLingering he goes to rest;Like a child, who, blissful yet,Is unwilling to forget,And, though sleepy, heels and head,Thinks he cannot go to bed.Even when down behind the hillBack his bright look shineth still,Whose keen glory with the nightMakes the lovely gray twilight--Drawing out the downy owl,With his musical bird-howl;Drawing out the leathery bats--Mice they are, turned airy cats--Noiseless, sly, and slippery thingsSwimming through the air on wings;Drawing out the feathery moth,Lazy, drowsy, very loath;Drawing children to the doorFor one goodnight-frolic more;Drawing from the glow-worms' tailsGlimmers green in grassy dales;Making ocean's phosphor-flashesGlow as if they were sun-ashes.

Then the moon comes up the hill,Wide awake, but dreaming still,Soft and slow, as if in fearLest her path should not be clear.Like a timid lady sheLooks around her daintily,Begs the clouds to come about her,Tells the stars to shine without her,Then unveils, and, bolder grown,Climbs the steps of her blue throne:Stately in a calm delight,Mistress of a whole fair night,Lonely but for stars a few,There she sits in silence blue,And the world before her liesFaint, a round shade in the skies!

But what fun is all aboutWhen the humans are shut out!Shadowy to the moon, the earthIs a very world of mirth!Night is then a dream opaqueFull of creatures wide awake!Noiseless then, on feet or wings,Out they come, all moon-eyed things!In and out they pop and play,Have it all their own wild way,Fly and frolic, scamper, glow;Treat the moon, for all her show,State, and opal diadem,Like a nursemaid watching them.And the nightingale doth snareAll the merry tumult rare,All the music and the magic,All the comic and the tragic,All the wisdom and the riotOf the midnight moonlight diet,In a diamond hoop of song,Which he trundles all night long.

What doth make the sun, you ask,Able for such mighty task?He is not a lamp hung highSliding up and down the sky,He is carried in a hand:That's what makes him strong and grand!From that hand comes all his power;If it set him down one hour,Yea, one moment set him by,In that moment he would die,And the winter, ice, and snowCome on us, and never go.

Need I tell you whose the handBears him high o'er sea and land?

Words in this poem 16
aimless a.
Without aim or purpose; as, an aimless life.
aloud adv.
With a loud voice, or great noise; loudly; audibly. [Pref. a- + loud.]
askance adv.
Sideways; obliquely; with a side glance; with disdain, envy, or suspicion. [Cf. D. schuin, schuins, sideways, schuiven to shove, schuinte slope. Cf. Asquint.]
comer n.
One who comes, or who has come; one who has arrived, and is present. All comers, all who come, or offer, to take part in a matter, especially in a contest or controversy.
hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
duller n.
One who, or that which, dulls.
backs n.
Among leather dealers, the thickest and stoutest tanned hides.
giver n.
One who gives; a donor; a bestower; a grantor; one who imparts or distributes.
nook n.
A narrow place formed by an angle in bodies or between bodies; a corner; a recess; a secluded retreat. [OE. nok; cf. Gael. & Ir. niuc.]
sadness n.
Heaviness; firmness.
adown adv.
From a higher to a lower situation; downward; down, to or on the ground. [OE. adun, adoun, adune. AS. of dune off the hill. See Down.]
blissful a.
Full of, characterized by, or causing, joy and felicity; happy in the highest degree.
loath a.
Hateful; odious; disliked. [OE. looth, loth, AS. la hostile, odious; akin to OS. l, G. leid, Icel. lei, Sw. led, G. leiden to suffer, OHG. lidan to suffer, go, cf. AS. li to go, Goth. leip]
daintily adv.
In a dainty manner; nicely; scrupulously; fastidiously; deliciously; prettily.
scamper v. i.
To run with speed; to run or move in a quick, hurried manner; to hasten away. [OF. escamper to escape, to save one's self; L. ex from + campus the field (sc. of battle). See Camp, and cf. Decamp, Scamp, n., Shamble, v. t.]
nursemaid n.
A girl employed to attend children.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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What Makes Summer? is in the public domain. This text is taken from The poetical works of George MacDonald in two volumes — Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #9984; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

What Makes Summer? is 132 lines in 8 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 88% of the lines. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AA--BBCCDDEE wellA · fellA · hearth · mirth · comeB · sumB · ramblesC · gambolsC · knewD · doD · himE · poemE
  2. 2 AA--BBCCDDEE oneA · sunA · harm · warm · thereB · airB · askanceC · countenanceC · straighterD · laterD · comerE · summerE
  3. 3 ------AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLL-- early · rarely · him · him · pours · showers · cloverA · overA · stareB · airB · dullerC · colourC · outD · aboutD · thingsE · wingsE · snailsF · sailsF · treesG · beesG · cracksH · backsH · riverI · giverI · nookJ · forsookJ · sadnessK · gladnessK · shineL · divineL · it · it
  4. 4 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHH--IIJJKK westA · restA · yetB · forgetB · headC · bedC · hillD · stillD · nightE · twilightE · owlF · howlF · batsG · catsG · thingsH · wingsH · moth · loath · doorI · moreI · tailsJ · dalesJ · flashesK · ashesK
  5. 5 AABB--CCDDEEFFGG hillA · stillA · fearB · clearB · she · daintily · herC · herC · grownD · throneD · delightE · nightE · fewF · blueF · liesG · skiesG
  6. 6 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKK aboutA · outA · earthB · mirthB · opaqueC · awakeC · wingsD · thingsD · playE · wayE · glowF · showF · diademG · themG · snareH · rareH · magicI · tragicI · riotJ · dietJ · songK · longK
  7. 7 AABBCCDDBBEE askA · taskA · highB · skyB · handC · grandC · powerD · hourD · byB · dieB · snowE · goE
  8. 8 AA handA · landA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Winter froze both brook and well;7/˘·····
Fast and fast the snowflakes fell;7····/··
Children gathered round the hearth7/˘/˘···
Made a summer of their mirth;7··/˘···
When a boy, so lately come7····/˘·
That his life was yet one sum7·······
Of delights--of aimless rambles.8·˘/·/˘/˘
Romps and dreams and games and gambols,8········
Thought aloud: "I wish I knew7·˘/····
What makes summer--that I do!"7··/˘···
Father heard, and it did show him8/˘······
How to write a little poem.8····/˘/˘
What makes summer, little one,7··/˘/˘·
Do you ask? It is the sun.7·······
Want of heat is all the harm,7·······
Summer is but winter warm.7/˘··/˘·
'Tis the sun--yes, that one there,7·······
Dim and gray, low in the air!7·······
Now he looks at us askance,7·····˘/
But will lift his countenance7····/˘˘
Higher up, and look down straighter.8/˘····/˘
Rise much earlier, set much later,8··/˘··/˘
Till we sing out, "Hail, Well-comer,8······/˘
Thou hast brought our own old Summer!"8···/··/˘
When the sun thus rises early8····/˘/˘
And keeps shining all day rarely,8··/˘··/˘
Up he draws the larks to meet him,8········
Earth's bird-angels, wild to greet him;8··/˘····
Up he draws the clouds, and pours7·······
Down again their shining showers;8·˘/·/˘/˘
Out he draws the grass and clover,8······/˘
Daisies, buttercups all over;7/˘/˘···
Out he wiles all flowers to stare7····/··
At their father in the air--7··/˘···
He all light, they how much duller,8······/˘
Yet son-suns of every colour!8····/˘/˘
Then he draws their odours out,7····/˘·
Sends them on the winds about.7·······
Next he draws out flying things--7····/˘·
Out of eggs, fast-flapping wings;7····/˘·
Out of lumps like frozen snails,7····/˘·
Butterflies with splendid sails;7/˘··/˘·
Draws the blossoms from the trees,7··/˘···
From their hives the buzzy bees,7····/˘·
Golden things from muddy cracks--7/˘··/˘·
Beetles with their burnished backs;7/˘··/˘·
Laughter draws he from the river8/˘····/˘
Gleaming back to the gleam-giver;8/˘····/˘
Light he sends to every nook7····/˘·
That no creature be forsook;7··/˘·˘/
Draws from gloom and pain and sadness,8······/˘
Hope and blessing, peace and gladness,8··/˘··/˘
Making man's heart sing and shine7/˘·····
With his brilliancy divine:7··/˘˘˘/
Summer, thus it is he makes it,8/˘······
And the little child he takes it.8··/˘····
Day's work done, adown the west7···˘/··
Lingering he goes to rest;7/˘˘····
Like a child, who, blissful yet,7····/˘·
Is unwilling to forget,7·˘/˘·˘/
And, though sleepy, heels and head,7··/˘···
Thinks he cannot go to bed.7··/˘···
Even when down behind the hill7/······
Back his bright look shineth still,7····/˘·
Whose keen glory with the night7··/˘···
Makes the lovely gray twilight--7··/˘·/·
Drawing out the downy owl,7/˘··/˘·
With his musical bird-howl;7··/˘˘··
Drawing out the leathery bats--7/˘··/˘·
Mice they are, turned airy cats--7····/˘·
Noiseless, sly, and slippery things7/˘··/˘·
Swimming through the air on wings;7/˘·····
Drawing out the feathery moth,7/˘··/˘·
Lazy, drowsy, very loath;7/˘/˘/˘·
Drawing children to the door7/˘/˘···
For one goodnight-frolic more;7··/·/˘·
Drawing from the glow-worms' tails7/˘·····
Glimmers green in grassy dales;7/˘··/˘·
Making ocean's phosphor-flashes8/˘/˘/·/˘
Glow as if they were sun-ashes.8······/˘
Then the moon comes up the hill,7·······
Wide awake, but dreaming still,7·˘/·/˘·
Soft and slow, as if in fear7·······
Lest her path should not be clear.7·······
Like a timid lady she7··/˘/˘·
Looks around her daintily,7····/˘˘
Begs the clouds to come about her,8········
Tells the stars to shine without her,8········
Then unveils, and, bolder grown,7·˘/·/˘·
Climbs the steps of her blue throne:7·······
Stately in a calm delight,7/˘···˘/
Mistress of a whole fair night,7/˘·····
Lonely but for stars a few,7/˘·····
There she sits in silence blue,7····/˘·
And the world before her lies7·······
Faint, a round shade in the skies!7·······
But what fun is all about7·······
When the humans are shut out!7··/˘···
Shadowy to the moon, the earth7/˘·····
Is a very world of mirth!7··/˘···
Night is then a dream opaque7·····˘/
Full of creatures wide awake!7··/˘·˘/
Noiseless then, on feet or wings,7/˘·····
Out they come, all moon-eyed things!7·······
In and out they pop and play,7·······
Have it all their own wild way,7·······
Fly and frolic, scamper, glow;7··/˘/˘·
Treat the moon, for all her show,7·······
State, and opal diadem,7··/˘/˘·
Like a nursemaid watching them.7··/˘/˘·
And the nightingale doth snare7··/˘˘··
All the merry tumult rare,7··/˘/˘·
All the music and the magic,8··/˘··/˘
All the comic and the tragic,8··/˘··/˘
All the wisdom and the riot8··/˘··/˘
Of the midnight moonlight diet,8··/·/·/˘
In a diamond hoop of song,7··/˘···
Which he trundles all night long.7··/˘···
What doth make the sun, you ask,7·······
Able for such mighty task?7/˘··/˘·
He is not a lamp hung high7·······
Sliding up and down the sky,7/˘·····
He is carried in a hand:7··/˘···
That's what makes him strong and grand!7·······
From that hand comes all his power;8······/˘
If it set him down one hour,8······/˘
Yea, one moment set him by,7··/˘···
In that moment he would die,7··/˘···
And the winter, ice, and snow7··/˘···
Come on us, and never go.7····/˘·
Need I tell you whose the hand7·······
Bears him high o'er sea and land?7·······

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