Lessons for a Child III

George MacDonald (1824–1905) · 1893

common measure · ABAB · 16 lines · from A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems

Root met root in the spongy ground,Searching each for food:Each turned aside, and away it wound.And each got something good.

Sound met sound in the wavy air--That made a little to-do!They jostled not long, but were quick and fair;Each found its path and flew.

Drop dashed on drop, as the rain-shower fell;They joined and sank below:In gathered thousands they rose a well,With a singing overflow.

Wind met wind in a garden green,They began to push and fret:A tearing whirlwind arose between:There love lies bleeding yet.

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Lessons for a Child III is in the public domain. This text is taken from The poetical works of George MacDonald in two volumes — Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #9984; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: George MacDonald, Lessons for a Child III, in A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems (1893), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #9984, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macdonald-poems/lessons-for-a-child-iii.html, id L22332.

Form and metre

Lessons for a Child III is 16 lines in 4 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 3 of its 4 stanzas. The metre is common measure, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 84%).

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 A-A- groundA · food · woundA · good
  2. 2 ABAB airA · doB · fairA · flewB
  3. 3 ABAB fellA · belowB · wellA · overflowB
  4. 4 ABAB greenA · fretB · betweenA · yetB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against common measure. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Root met root in the spongy ground,8·····/˘·
Searching each for food:5/˘···
Each turned aside, and away it wound.10··˘˘/·˘/··
And each got something good.6···/˘·
Sound met sound in the wavy air--8·····/˘·
That made a little to-do!7···/˘··
They jostled not long, but were quick and fair;10·/˘·······
Each found its path and flew.6······
Drop dashed on drop, as the rain-shower fell;10·······/˘·
They joined and sank below:6······
In gathered thousands they rose a well,10·/˘˘/˘····
With a singing overflow.7··/˘/˘·
Wind met wind in a garden green,8·····/˘·
They began to push and fret:7·˘/····
A tearing whirlwind arose between:9·/˘/·˘/··
There love lies bleeding yet.6···/˘·

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