The Lost Soul
Look! look there!Send your eyes across the grayBy my finger-point awayThrough the vaporous, fumy air.Beyond the air, you see the dark?Beyond the dark, the dawning day?On its horizon, pray you, markSomething like a ruined heapOf worlds half-uncreated, that go back:Down all the grades through which they roseUp to harmonious life and law's repose,Back, slow, to the awful deepOf nothingness, mere being's lack:On its surface, lone and bare,Shapeless as a dumb despair,Formless, nameless, something lies:Can the vision in your eyesIts idea recognize?
'Tis a poor lost soul, alack!--Half he lived some ages back;But, with hardly opened eyes,Thinking him already wise,Down he sat and wrote a book;Drew his life into a nook;Out of it would not ariseTo peruse the letters dim,Graven dark on his own walls;Those, he judged, were chance-led scrawls,Or at best no use to him.A lamp was there for reading these;This he trimmed, sitting at ease,For its aid to write his book,Never at his walls to look--Trimmed and trimmed to one faint sparkWhich went out, and left him dark.--I will try if he can hearSpirit words with spirit ear!
Motionless thing! who once,Like him who cries to thee,Hadst thy place with thy shining peers,Thy changeful place in the changeless danceIssuing ever in radianceFrom the doors of the far eternity,With feet that glitter and glide and glanceTo the music-law that binds the free,And sets the captive at liberty--To the clang of the crystal spheres!O heart for love! O thirst to drinkFrom the wells that feed the sea!O hands of truth, a human link'Twixt mine and the Father's knee!O eyes to see! O soul to think!O life, the brother of me!Has Infinitude sucked back allThe individual life it gave?Boots it nothing to cry and call?Is thy form an empty grave?
It heareth not, brothers, the terrible thing!Sounds no sense to its ear will bring!Let us away, 'tis no use to tarry;Love no light to its heart will carry!Sting it with words, it will never shrink;It will not repent, it cannot think!Hath God forgotten it, alas!Lost in eternity's lumber-room?Will the wind of his breathing never passOver it through the insensate gloom?Like a frost-killed bud on a tombstone curled,Crumbling it lies on its crumbling world,Sightless and deaf, with never a cry,In the hell of its own vacuity!
See, see yon angel crossing our flightWhere the thunder vapours loom,From his upcast pinions flashing the lightOf some outbreaking doom!Up, brothers! away! a storm is nigh!Smite we the wing up a steeper sky!What matters the hail or the clashing winds,The thunder that buffets, the lightning that blinds!We know by the tempest we do not lieDead in the pits of eternity!
Words in this poem 22
- fumy a.
- Producing fumes; fumous.
- lone n.
- A lane. See Loanin.
- formless a.
- Shapeless; without a determinate form; wanting regularity of shape.
- nameless a.
- Without a name; not having been given a name; as, a nameless star.
- alack interj.
- An exclamation expressive of sorrow. [Prob. from ah! lack! OE. lak loss, failure, misfortune. See Lack.]
- wrote v. i.
- To root with the snout. See 1st Root. [OE. wroten. See 1st Root.]
- nook n.
- A narrow place formed by an angle in bodies or between bodies; a corner; a recess; a secluded retreat. [OE. nok; cf. Gael. & Ir. niuc.]
- peruse v. t.
- To observe; to examine with care. [Pref. per- + use.]
- graven p. p.
- Carved. Graven image, an idol; an object of worship carved from wood, stone, etc.
- went n.
- Course; way; path; journey; direction.
- changeful a.
- Full of change; mutable; inconstant; fickle; uncertain.
- changeless a.
- That can not be changed; constant; as, a changeless purpose.
- clang v. t.
- To strike together so as to produce a ringing metallic sound. [L. clangere; akin to Gr. clank.]
- infinitude n.
- The quality or state of being infinite, or without limits; infiniteness.
- repent a.
- Prostrate and rooting; -- said of stems. Gray. [L. repens, -entis, creeping, p. pr. of repere to creep.]
- insensate a.
- Wanting sensibility; destitute of sense; stupid; foolish. [L. insensatus. See In- not, and Sensate.]
- tombstone n.
- A stone erected over a grave, to preserve the memory of the deceased.
- sightless a.
- Wanting sight; without sight; blind.
- vacuity n.
- The quality or state of being vacuous, or not filled; emptiness; vacancy; as, vacuity of mind; vacuity of countenance. [L. vacuitas. See Vacuous.]
- upcast v. t.
- To cast or throw up; to turn upward.
- outbreaking n.
- The act of breaking out.
- steeper n.
- A vessel, vat, or cistern, in which things are steeped.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
The Lost Soul is in the public domain. This text is taken from The poetical works of George MacDonald in two volumes — Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #9984; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: George MacDonald, The Lost Soul, in A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems (1893), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #9984, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/macdonald-poems/the-lost-soul.html, id L22263.
Form and metre
The Lost Soul is 81 lines in 5 stanzas. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 77%).
See other poems in trochaic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABBACBCDEFFDEAAGGG thereA · grayB · awayB · airA · darkC · dayB · markC · heapD · backE · roseF · reposeF · deepD · lackE · bareA · despairA · liesG · eyesG · recognizeG
- 2 AABBCCBDEEDFFCCGGHH alackA · backA · eyesB · wiseB · bookC · nookC · ariseB · dimD · wallsE · scrawlsE · himD · theseF · easeF · bookC · lookC · sparkG · darkG · hearH · earH
- 3 ABCDA-DB-CEBEBEBFGFG onceA · theeB · peersC · danceD · radianceA · eternity · glanceD · freeB · liberty · spheresC · drinkE · seaB · linkE · kneeB · thinkE · meB · allF · gaveG · callF · graveG
- 4 AABBCCDEDEFF-- thingA · bringA · tarryB · carryB · shrinkC · thinkC · alasD · roomE · passD · gloomE · curledF · worldF · cry · vacuity
- 5 ABABCCDDC- flightA · loomB · lightA · doomB · nighC · skyC · windsD · blindsD · lieC · eternity
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Look! look there! | 3 | ··· |
| Send your eyes across the gray | 7 | ···˘/·· |
| By my finger-point away | 7 | ··/˘·˘/ |
| Through the vaporous, fumy air. | 8 | ··/˘˘/˘· |
| Beyond the air, you see the dark? | 8 | ········ |
| Beyond the dark, the dawning day? | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| On its horizon, pray you, mark | 8 | ··˘/˘··· |
| Something like a ruined heap | 7 | /˘··/˘· |
| Of worlds half-uncreated, that go back: | 9 | ········· |
| Down all the grades through which they rose | 8 | ········ |
| Up to harmonious life and law's repose, | 10 | ··˘/˘···˘/ |
| Back, slow, to the awful deep | 7 | ····/˘· |
| Of nothingness, mere being's lack: | 8 | ·/˘˘·/˘· |
| On its surface, lone and bare, | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| Shapeless as a dumb despair, | 7 | /˘···˘/ |
| Formless, nameless, something lies: | 7 | /˘/˘/˘· |
| Can the vision in your eyes | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| Its idea recognize? | 7 | ·˘/˘/˘· |
| 'Tis a poor lost soul, alack!-- | 7 | ·····˘/ |
| Half he lived some ages back; | 7 | ····/˘· |
| But, with hardly opened eyes, | 7 | ··/˘/˘· |
| Thinking him already wise, | 7 | /˘·˘/˘· |
| Down he sat and wrote a book; | 7 | ······· |
| Drew his life into a nook; | 7 | ······· |
| Out of it would not arise | 7 | ·····˘/ |
| To peruse the letters dim, | 7 | ·˘/·/˘· |
| Graven dark on his own walls; | 7 | /˘····· |
| Those, he judged, were chance-led scrawls, | 7 | ······· |
| Or at best no use to him. | 7 | ······· |
| A lamp was there for reading these; | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| This he trimmed, sitting at ease, | 7 | ···/˘·· |
| For its aid to write his book, | 7 | ······· |
| Never at his walls to look-- | 7 | /˘····· |
| Trimmed and trimmed to one faint spark | 7 | ······· |
| Which went out, and left him dark.-- | 7 | ······· |
| I will try if he can hear | 7 | ······· |
| Spirit words with spirit ear! | 7 | /˘··/˘· |
| Motionless thing! who once, | 6 | /˘˘··· |
| Like him who cries to thee, | 6 | ······ |
| Hadst thy place with thy shining peers, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Thy changeful place in the changeless dance | 9 | ·/˘···/˘· |
| Issuing ever in radiance | 9 | /˘˘/˘·/˘˘ |
| From the doors of the far eternity, | 10 | ······˘/˘˘ |
| With feet that glitter and glide and glance | 9 | ···/˘···· |
| To the music-law that binds the free, | 9 | ··/˘····· |
| And sets the captive at liberty-- | 9 | ···/˘·/˘˘ |
| To the clang of the crystal spheres! | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| O heart for love! O thirst to drink | 8 | ········ |
| From the wells that feed the sea! | 7 | ······· |
| O hands of truth, a human link | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| 'Twixt mine and the Father's knee! | 7 | ····/˘· |
| O eyes to see! O soul to think! | 8 | ········ |
| O life, the brother of me! | 7 | ···/˘·· |
| Has Infinitude sucked back all | 9 | ·˘/˘˘·˘·· |
| The individual life it gave? | 9 | ··˘/˘˘··· |
| Boots it nothing to cry and call? | 8 | ··/˘···· |
| Is thy form an empty grave? | 7 | ····/˘· |
| It heareth not, brothers, the terrible thing! | 10 | ·/˘·/˘·/˘· |
| Sounds no sense to its ear will bring! | 8 | ········ |
| Let us away, 'tis no use to tarry; | 10 | ··˘/····/˘ |
| Love no light to its heart will carry! | 9 | ·······/˘ |
| Sting it with words, it will never shrink; | 9 | ······/˘· |
| It will not repent, it cannot think! | 9 | ···˘/·/˘· |
| Hath God forgotten it, alas! | 8 | ··˘/˘·˘/ |
| Lost in eternity's lumber-room? | 9 | ··˘/˘˘/˘· |
| Will the wind of his breathing never pass | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| Over it through the insensate gloom? | 9 | ·····˘/˘· |
| Like a frost-killed bud on a tombstone curled, | 10 | ·······/·· |
| Crumbling it lies on its crumbling world, | 10 | /˘····/˘˘· |
| Sightless and deaf, with never a cry, | 9 | /˘···/˘·· |
| In the hell of its own vacuity! | 10 | ······˘/˘˘ |
| See, see yon angel crossing our flight | 10 | ···/˘/˘/˘· |
| Where the thunder vapours loom, | 7 | ··/˘/˘· |
| From his upcast pinions flashing the light | 10 | ··/˘/˘/˘·· |
| Of some outbreaking doom! | 6 | ··/·˘· |
| Up, brothers! away! a storm is nigh! | 9 | ·/˘˘/···· |
| Smite we the wing up a steeper sky! | 9 | ······/˘· |
| What matters the hail or the clashing winds, | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| The thunder that buffets, the lightning that blinds! | 11 | ·/˘·˘/·/˘·· |
| We know by the tempest we do not lie | 10 | ····/˘···· |
| Dead in the pits of eternity! | 9 | ·····˘/˘˘ |
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