From Uhland

George MacDonald (1824–1905) · 1893

iambic tetrameter · ottava rima · 112 lines · from A Microcosm in Terza Rima, and Other Poems

Hanging his head, behind each came a hound,Padding with gentle paws upon the road.Straight silent pines rose here and there around;A dull stream on the left side hardly flowed;A black snake through the sluggish waters wound.Hark, the night raven! see the crawling toad!She thinks how dark will be the moonless night,How feeblest ray is yet supernal light.

The moon's last gleam fell on dim glazed eyes,A body shrunken from its garments' fold:An aged man whose bent knees could not rise,He tottered in the maiden's tightening hold.She shivered, but too slight was the disguiseTo hide from love what never yet was old;She held him fast, with open eyes did pray,Walked through the fear, and kept the onward way.

Toward a gloomy thicket of tall firs,Dragging his inch-long steps, he turned aside.There Silence sleeps; not one green needle stirs.They enter it. A breeze begins to chideAmong the cones. It swells until it whirs,Vibrating so each sharp leaf that it sighed:The grove became a harp of mighty chords,Wing-smote by unseen creatures wild for words.

But when he turned again, toward the cleftOf a great rock, as instantly it ceased,And the tall pines stood sudden, as if reftOf a strong passion, or from pain released;Again they wove their straight, dark, motionless weftAcross the moonset-bars; and, west and east,Cloud-giants rose and marched up cloudy stairs;And like sad thoughts the bats came unawares.

'Twas a drear chamber for thy bridal night,O poor, pale, saviour bride! An earthen lampWith shaking hands he kindled, whose faint lightMooned out a tiny halo on the dampThat filled the cavern to its unseen height,Dim glimmering like death-candle in a swamp.Watching the entrance, each side lies a hound,With liquid light his red eyes gleaming round.

A heap rose grave-like from the rocky floorOf moss and leaves, by many a sunny windLong tossed and dried--with rich furs covered o'erExpectant. Up a jealous glory shinedIn her possessing heart: he should find moreIn her than in those faithless! With sweet mindShe, praying gently, did herself unclothe,And lay down by him, trusting, and not loath.

Once more a wind came, flapping overhead;The hounds pricked up their ears, their eyes flashed fire.The trembling maiden heard a sudden tread--Dull, yet plain dinted on the windy gyre,As if long, wet feet o'er smooth pavement sped--Come fiercely up, as driven by longing direTo enter; followed sounds of hurried rout:With bristling hair, the hounds stood looking out.

Then came, half querulous, a whisper old,Feeble and hollow as if shut in a chest:"Take my face on your bosom; I am cold."She bared her holy bosom's truth-white nest,And forth her two hands instant went, love-bold,And took the face, and close against her pressed:Ah, the dead chill!--Was that the feet again?--But her great heart kept beating for the twain.

She heard the wind fall, heard the following rainSwelling the silent waters till their soundWent wallowing through the night along the plain.The lamp went out, by the slow darkness drowned.Must the fair dawn a thousand years refrain?Like centuries the feeble hours went round.Eternal night entombed her with decay:To her live soul she clasped the breathless clay.

The world stood still. Her life sank down so lowThat but for wretchedness no life she knew.A charnel wind moaned out a moaning--No;From the devouring heart of earth it blew.Fair memories lost all their sunny glow:Out of the dark the forms of old friends grewBut so transparent blanched with dole and smartShe saw the pale worm lying in each heart.

And, worst of all--Oh death of keep-fled life!A voice within her woke and cried: In soothVain is all sorrow, hope, and care, and strife!Love and its beauty, its tenderness and truthAre shadows bred in hearts too fancy-rife,Which melt and pass with sure-decaying youth:Regard them, and they quiver, waver, blot;Gaze at them fixedly, and they are not.

And all the answer the poor child could makeWas in the tightened clasp of arms and hands.Hopeless she lay, like one Death would not takeBut still kept driving from his empty lands,Yet hopeless held she out for his dear sake;The darksome horror grew like drifting sandsTill nought was precious--neither God nor light,And yet she braved the false, denying night.

So dead was hope, that, when a glimmer weakStole through a fissure somewhere in the cave,Thinning the clotted darkness on his cheek,She thought her own tired eyes the glimmer gave:He moved his head; she saw his eyes, love-meek,And knew that Death was dead and filled the Grave.Old age, convicted lie, had fled away!Youth, Youth eternal, in her bosom lay!

With a low cry closer to him she creptAnd on his bosom hid a face that glowed:It was his turn to comfort--he had slept!Oh earth and sky, oh ever patient God,She had not yielded, but the truth had kept!New love, new bliss in weeping overflowed.I can no farther tell the tale begun;They are asleep, and waiting for the sun.

Words in this poem 27
padding n.
The act or process of making a pad or of inserting stuffing.
moonless a.
Being without a moon or moonlight.
supernal a.
Being in a higher place or region; locally higher; as, the supernal orbs; supernal regions. [L. supernus, from super above: cf. F. supernel. See Super-.]
unseen a.
Not seen or discovered.
reft n.
A chink; a rift. See Rift. Rom. of R.
wove
p. pr. & rare vb. n. of Weave.
moonset n.
The descent of the moon below the horizon; also, the time when the moon sets.
drear n.
Sadness; dismalness.
saviour n.
One who saves, preserves, or delivers from destruction or danger. [OE. saveour, OF. salveor, F. sauveur, fr. L. salvator to save. See Save, v.]
mooned a.
Of or resembling the moon; symbolized by the moon.
sunny a.
Of or pertaining to the sun; proceeding from, or resembling the sun; hence, shining; bright; brilliant; radiant.
unclothe v. t.
To strip of clothes or covering; to make naked. I. Watts. [1st pref. un- + clothe.]
loath a.
Hateful; odious; disliked. [OE. looth, loth, AS. la hostile, odious; akin to OS. l, G. leid, Icel. lei, Sw. led, G. leiden to suffer, OHG. lidan to suffer, go, cf. AS. li to go, Goth. leip]
gyre v. t.
To turn round; to gyrate. Bp. Hall. Drayton. [Cf. OF. gyrer, girer. See Gyrate.]
dire a.
Ill-boding; portentous; as, dire omens. [L. dirus; of uncertain origin.]
querulous a.
Given to quarreling; quarrelsome. land. [L. querulus and querulosus, fr. queri to complain. Cf. Cry, v., Quarrel a brawl, Quarrelous.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
twain a.
Two;- nearly obsolete in common discourse, but used in poetry and burlesque. [OE. twein, tweien, tweyne, AS. twegen, masc. See Two.]
breathless a.
Spent with labor or violent action; out of breath.
sooth a.
True; faithful; trustworthy. [OE. soth, AS. s, for san; akin to OS. s, OHG. sand, Icel. sannr, Sw. sann, Dan. sand, Skr. sat, sant, real, genuine, present, being; properly p. pr. from a root]
strife n.
The act of striving; earnest endeavor. [OF. estrif. See Strive.]
rife a.
Prevailing; prevalent; abounding. [AS. rif abundant, or Icel. rifr munificent; akin to OD. riff, rijve, abundant.]
waver v. i.
To play or move to and fro; to move one way and the other; hence, to totter; to reel; to swing; to flutter. [OE. waveren, from AS. wæfre wavering, restless. See Wave, v. i.]
darksome a.
Dark; gloomy; obscure; shaded; cheerless.
stole n.
A long, loose garment reaching to the feet. [AS. stole, L. stola, Gr. stall. See Stall.]
somewhere adv.
In some place unknown or not specified; in one place or another.
closer n.
One who, or that which, closes; specifically, a boot closer. See under Boot.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

From Uhland is in the public domain. This text is taken from The poetical works of George MacDonald in two volumes — Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #9984; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

From Uhland is 112 lines in 14 stanzas of 8 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABABCC, complete in 10 of its 14 stanzas; the stanza is the Ottava rima. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic tetrameter.

See other poems in ottava rima, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABABCC houndA · roadB · aroundA · flowedB · woundA · toadB · nightC · lightC
  2. 2 ABABABCC eyesA · foldB · riseA · holdB · disguiseA · oldB · prayC · wayC
  3. 3 ABABAB-- firsA · asideB · stirsA · chideB · whirsA · sighedB · chords · words
  4. 4 ABABABCC cleftA · ceasedB · reftA · releasedB · weftA · eastB · stairsC · unawaresC
  5. 5 ABABA-CC nightA · lampB · lightA · dampB · heightA · swamp · houndC · roundC
  6. 6 AB-BABCC floorA · windB · o'er · shinedB · moreA · mindB · unclotheC · loathC
  7. 7 ABABABCC overheadA · fireB · treadA · gyreB · spedA · direB · routC · outC
  8. 8 ABABABCC oldA · chestB · coldA · nestB · boldA · pressedB · againC · twainC
  9. 9 ABABABCC rainA · soundB · plainA · drownedB · refrainA · roundB · decayC · clayC
  10. 10 ABABABCC lowA · knewB · noA · blewB · glowA · grewB · smartC · heartC
  11. 11 ABABABCC lifeA · soothB · strifeA · truthB · rifeA · youthB · blotC · notC
  12. 12 ABABABCC makeA · handsB · takeA · landsB · sakeA · sandsB · lightC · nightC
  13. 13 ABABABCC weakA · caveB · cheekA · gaveB · meekA · graveB · awayC · layC
  14. 14 ABA-ABCC creptA · glowedB · sleptA · god · keptA · overflowedB · begunC · sunC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Hanging his head, behind each came a hound,10/˘········
Padding with gentle paws upon the road.10/˘·/˘·····
Straight silent pines rose here and there around;10·/˘·······
A dull stream on the left side hardly flowed;10·······/˘·
A black snake through the sluggish waters wound.10·····/˘/˘·
Hark, the night raven! see the crawling toad!10···/˘··/˘·
She thinks how dark will be the moonless night,10·······/˘·
How feeblest ray is yet supernal light.10·/˘···˘/˘·
The moon's last gleam fell on dim glazed eyes,10········˘·
A body shrunken from its garments' fold:10·/˘/˘··/˘·
An aged man whose bent knees could not rise,9·········
He tottered in the maiden's tightening hold.10·/˘··/˘/˘·
She shivered, but too slight was the disguise10·/˘·····˘/
To hide from love what never yet was old;10·····/˘···
She held him fast, with open eyes did pray,10·····/˘···
Walked through the fear, and kept the onward way.10·······/˘·
Toward a gloomy thicket of tall firs,10···/˘/˘···
Dragging his inch-long steps, he turned aside.10/˘······˘/
There Silence sleeps; not one green needle stirs.10·/˘····/˘·
They enter it. A breeze begins to chide10·/˘···˘/··
Among the cones. It swells until it whirs,10··········
Vibrating so each sharp leaf that it sighed:10/˘˘·······
The grove became a harp of mighty chords,10··˘/···/˘·
Wing-smote by unseen creatures wild for words.10···˘//˘···
But when he turned again, toward the cleft10····˘/····
Of a great rock, as instantly it ceased,10·····/˘˘··
And the tall pines stood sudden, as if reft10·····/˘···
Of a strong passion, or from pain released;10···/˘···˘/
Again they wove their straight, dark, motionless weft10˘/·····/˘·
Across the moonset-bars; and, west and east,10˘/·/˘·····
Cloud-giants rose and marched up cloudy stairs;10·/˘····/˘·
And like sad thoughts the bats came unawares.10········˘/
'Twas a drear chamber for thy bridal night,10···/˘··/˘·
O poor, pale, saviour bride! An earthen lamp10···/˘··/˘·
With shaking hands he kindled, whose faint light10·/˘··/˘···
Mooned out a tiny halo on the damp10···/˘/˘···
That filled the cavern to its unseen height,10···/˘··˘/·
Dim glimmering like death-candle in a swamp.10·/˘··/˘···
Watching the entrance, each side lies a hound,10/˘·/˘·····
With liquid light his red eyes gleaming round.10·/˘····/˘·
A heap rose grave-like from the rocky floor10·······/˘·
Of moss and leaves, by many a sunny wind10·····/·/˘·
Long tossed and dried--with rich furs covered o'er10·······/˘·
Expectant. Up a jealous glory shined10˘/˘··/˘/˘·
In her possessing heart: he should find more10··˘/˘·····
In her than in those faithless! With sweet mind10·····/˘···
She, praying gently, did herself unclothe,10·/˘/˘·˘/˘/
And lay down by him, trusting, and not loath.10·····/˘···
Once more a wind came, flapping overhead;10·····/˘/˘/
The hounds pricked up their ears, their eyes flashed fire.11·········/˘
The trembling maiden heard a sudden tread--10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Dull, yet plain dinted on the windy gyre,10···/˘··/˘·
As if long, wet feet o'er smooth pavement sped--10·······/˘·
Come fiercely up, as driven by longing dire10·/˘··/·/˘·
To enter; followed sounds of hurried rout:10·/˘/˘··/˘·
With bristling hair, the hounds stood looking out.10·/˘····/˘·
Then came, half querulous, a whisper old,10···/˘˘·/˘·
Feeble and hollow as if shut in a chest:11/˘·/˘······
"Take my face on your bosom; I am cold."10·····/˘···
She bared her holy bosom's truth-white nest,10···/˘/˘···
And forth her two hands instant went, love-bold,10·····/˘···
And took the face, and close against her pressed:10··········
Ah, the dead chill!--Was that the feet again?--10········˘/
But her great heart kept beating for the twain.10·····/˘···
She heard the wind fall, heard the following rain10·······/˘·
Swelling the silent waters till their sound10/˘·/˘/˘···
Went wallowing through the night along the plain.10·/˘···˘/··
The lamp went out, by the slow darkness drowned.10·······/˘·
Must the fair dawn a thousand years refrain?10·····/˘·˘/
Like centuries the feeble hours went round.10·/˘˘·/˘/··
Eternal night entombed her with decay:10˘/˘·˘/··˘/
To her live soul she clasped the breathless clay.10·······/˘·
The world stood still. Her life sank down so low10··········
That but for wretchedness no life she knew.10···/˘˘····
A charnel wind moaned out a moaning--No;10·/˘····/˘·
From the devouring heart of earth it blew.10··˘/˘·····
Fair memories lost all their sunny glow:10·/˘˘···/˘·
Out of the dark the forms of old friends grew10··········
But so transparent blanched with dole and smart10··˘/˘·····
She saw the pale worm lying in each heart.10·····/˘···
And, worst of all--Oh death of keep-fled life!10··········
A voice within her woke and cried: In sooth10··········
Vain is all sorrow, hope, and care, and strife!10···/˘·····
Love and its beauty, its tenderness and truth10···/˘·/˘··
Are shadows bred in hearts too fancy-rife,10·/·····/˘·
Which melt and pass with sure-decaying youth:10······˘/˘·
Regard them, and they quiver, waver, blot;10˘/···/˘/˘·
Gaze at them fixedly, and they are not.10···/˘˘····
And all the answer the poor child could make10···/˘·····
Was in the tightened clasp of arms and hands.10···/˘·····
Hopeless she lay, like one Death would not take10/˘········
But still kept driving from his empty lands,10···/˘··/˘·
Yet hopeless held she out for his dear sake;10·/˘·······
The darksome horror grew like drifting sands10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Till nought was precious--neither God nor light,10···/˘/˘···
And yet she braved the false, denying night.10······˘/˘·
So dead was hope, that, when a glimmer weak10·······/˘·
Stole through a fissure somewhere in the cave,10···/˘/····
Thinning the clotted darkness on his cheek,10/˘·/˘/˘···
She thought her own tired eyes the glimmer gave:10····/··/˘·
He moved his head; she saw his eyes, love-meek,10··········
And knew that Death was dead and filled the Grave.10··········
Old age, convicted lie, had fled away!10··˘/˘···˘/
Youth, Youth eternal, in her bosom lay!10··˘/˘··/˘·
With a low cry closer to him she crept10····/˘····
And on his bosom hid a face that glowed:10···/˘·····
It was his turn to comfort--he had slept!10·····/˘···
Oh earth and sky, oh ever patient God,10·····/˘/˘·
She had not yielded, but the truth had kept!10···/˘·····
New love, new bliss in weeping overflowed.10·····/˘·˘/
I can no farther tell the tale begun;10···/˘···˘/
They are asleep, and waiting for the sun.10··˘/·/˘···

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