The Rime of the Ancyent Marinere, in Seven Parts II
The Sun came up upon the right,Out of the Sea came he;And broad as a weft upon the leftWent down into the Sea.
And the good south wind still blew behind,But no sweet Bird did followNe any day for food or playCame to the Marinere’s hollo!
And I had done an hellish thingAnd it would work ’em woe:For all averr’d, I had kill’d the BirdThat made the Breeze to blow.
Ne dim ne red, like God’s own head,The glorious Sun uprist:Then all averr’d, I had kill’d the BirdThat brought the fog and mist.’Twas right, said they, such birds to slayThat bring the fog and mist.
The breezes blew, the white foam flew,The furrow follow’d free:We were the first that ever burstInto that silent Sea.
Down dropt the breeze, the Sails dropt down,’Twas sad as sad could beAnd we did speak only to breakThe silence of the Sea.
All in a hot and copper skyThe bloody sun at noon,Right up above the mast did stand,No bigger than the moon.
Day after day, day after day,We stuck, ne breath ne motion,As idle as a painted ShipUpon a painted Ocean.
Water, water, every whereAnd all the boards did shrink;Water, water, every where,Ne any drop to drink.
The very deeps did rot: O Christ!That ever this should be!Yea, slimy things did crawl with legsUpon the slimy Sea.
About, about, in reel and routThe Death-fires danc’d at night;The water, like a witch’s oils,Burnt green and blue and white.
And some in dreams assured wereOf the Spirit that plagued us so:Nine fathom deep he had follow’d usFrom the Land of Mist and Snow.
And every tongue thro’ utter drouthWas wither’d at the root;We could not speak no more than ifWe had been choked with soot.
Ah wel-a-day! what evil looksHad I from old and young;Instead of the Cross the AlbatrossAbout my neck was hung.
Words in this poem
- went n.
- Course; way; path; journey; direction.
- glorious a.
- Exhibiting attributes, qualities, or acts that are worthy of or receive glory; noble; praiseworthy; excellent; splendid; illustrious; inspiring admiration; as, glorious deeds. [OF. glorios, glorious, F. glorieux, fr. L. gloriosus. See Glory, n.]
- bigger a.
- , compar. of Big.
- crawl v. i.
- To move slowly by drawing the body along the ground, as a worm; to move slowly on hands and kness; to creep. [Dan. kravle, or Icel. krafla, to paw, scrabble with the hands; akin to Sw. kr to crawl; cf. LG. krabbeln, D. krabbelen to scratch.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
The Rime of the Ancyent Marinere, in Seven Parts II is in the public domain. This text is taken from Lyrical Ballads, With a Few Other Poems (1798), Project Gutenberg ebook #9622; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: William Wordsworth, The Rime of the Ancyent Marinere, in Seven Parts II, in Lyrical Ballads (1798), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #9622, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lyrical-ballads/the-rime-of-the-ancyent-marinere-in-seven-parts-ii.html, id L02843.
Form and metre
The Rime of the Ancyent Marinere, in Seven Parts II is 58 lines in 14 stanzas. The metre is common measure, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.3 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 36% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 -A-A right · heA · left · seaA
- 3 -A-A thing · woeA · bird · blowA
- 4 -A-A-A head · upristA · bird · mistA · slay · mistA
- 5 -A-A flew · freeA · burst · seaA
- 6 -A-A down · beA · break · seaA
- 7 -A-A sky · noonA · stand · moonA
- 8 -A-A day · motionA · ship · oceanA
- 9 ABAB whereA · shrinkB · whereA · drinkB
- 10 -A-A christ · beA · legs · seaA
- 11 -A-A rout · nightA · oils · whiteA
- 12 -A-A were · soA · us · snowA
- 14 -A-A looks · youngA · albatross · hungA
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against common measure. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| The Sun came up upon the right, | 8 | ········ |
| Out of the Sea came he; | 6 | ······ |
| And broad as a weft upon the left | 9 | ········· |
| Went down into the Sea. | 6 | ······ |
| And the good south wind still blew behind, | 9 | ········· |
| But no sweet Bird did follow | 7 | ·····/˘ |
| Ne any day for food or play | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Came to the Marinere’s hollo! | 8 | ······/· |
| And I had done an hellish thing | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| And it would work ’em woe: | 6 | ······ |
| For all averr’d, I had kill’d the Bird | 9 | ········· |
| That made the Breeze to blow. | 6 | ······ |
| Ne dim ne red, like God’s own head, | 8 | ········ |
| The glorious Sun uprist: | 7 | ·/˘˘·˘/ |
| Then all averr’d, I had kill’d the Bird | 9 | ········· |
| That brought the fog and mist. | 6 | ······ |
| ’Twas right, said they, such birds to slay | 8 | ········ |
| That bring the fog and mist. | 6 | ······ |
| The breezes blew, the white foam flew, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| The furrow follow’d free: | 6 | ·/˘/˘· |
| We were the first that ever burst | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Into that silent Sea. | 6 | ···/˘· |
| Down dropt the breeze, the Sails dropt down, | 8 | ········ |
| ’Twas sad as sad could be | 6 | ······ |
| And we did speak only to break | 8 | ····/˘·· |
| The silence of the Sea. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| All in a hot and copper sky | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| The bloody sun at noon, | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| Right up above the mast did stand, | 8 | ········ |
| No bigger than the moon. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| Day after day, day after day, | 8 | ········ |
| We stuck, ne breath ne motion, | 7 | ·····/˘ |
| As idle as a painted Ship | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Upon a painted Ocean. | 7 | ···/˘/˘ |
| Water, water, every where | 8 | /˘/˘/˘˘· |
| And all the boards did shrink; | 6 | ······ |
| Water, water, every where, | 8 | /˘/˘/˘˘· |
| Ne any drop to drink. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| The very deeps did rot: O Christ! | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| That ever this should be! | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Upon the slimy Sea. | 6 | ···/˘· |
| About, about, in reel and rout | 8 | ········ |
| The Death-fires danc’d at night; | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| The water, like a witch’s oils, | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Burnt green and blue and white. | 6 | ······ |
| And some in dreams assured were | 8 | ····˘/˘· |
| Of the Spirit that plagued us so: | 8 | ··/˘···· |
| Nine fathom deep he had follow’d us | 9 | ·/˘···/˘· |
| From the Land of Mist and Snow. | 7 | ······· |
| And every tongue thro’ utter drouth | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Was wither’d at the root; | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| We could not speak no more than if | 8 | ········ |
| We had been choked with soot. | 7 | ····˘·· |
| Ah wel-a-day! what evil looks | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Had I from old and young; | 6 | ······ |
| Instead of the Cross the Albatross | 9 | ˘/····/˘· |
| About my neck was hung. | 6 | ······ |
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