The Rime of the Ancyent Marinere, in Seven Parts III
I saw a something in the SkyNo bigger than my fist;At first it seem’d a little speckAnd then it seem’d a mist:It mov’d and mov’d, and took at lastA certain shape, I wist.
A speck, a mist, a shape, I wist!And still it ner’d and ner’d;And, an it dodg’d a water-sprite,It plung’d and tack’d and veer’d.
With throat unslack’d, with black lips bak’dNe could we laugh, ne wail:Then while thro’ drouth all dumb they stoodI bit my arm and suck’d the bloodAnd cry’d, A sail! a sail!
With throat unslack’d, with black lips bak’dAgape they hear’d me call:Gramercy! they for joy did grinAnd all at once their breath drew inAs they were drinking all.
She doth not tack from side to side--Hither to work us wealWithouten wind, withouten tideShe steddies with upright keel.
The western wave was all a flame,The day was well nigh done!Almost upon the western waveRested the broad bright Sun;When that strange shape drove suddenlyBetwixt us and the Sun.
And strait the Sun was fleck’d with bars(Heaven’s mother send us grace)As if thro’ a dungeon grate he peer’dWith broad and burning face.
Alas! (thought I, and my heart beat loud)How fast she neres and neres!Are those her Sails that glance in the SunLike restless gossameres?
Are these her naked ribs, which fleck’dThe sun that did behind them peer?And are these two all, all the crew,That woman and her fleshless Pheere?
His bones were black with many a crack,All black and bare, I ween;Jet-black and bare, save where with rustOf mouldy damps and charnel crustThey’re patch’d with purple and green.
Her lips are red, her looks are free,Her locks are yellow as gold:Her skin is as white as leprosy,And she is far liker Death than he;Her flesh makes the still air cold.
The naked Hulk alongside cameAnd the Twain were playing dice;“The Game is done! I’ve won, I’ve won!”Quoth she, and whistled thrice.
A gust of wind sterte up behindAnd whistled thro’ his bones;Thro’ the holes of his eyes and the hole of his mouthHalf-whistles and half-groans.
With never a whisper in the SeaOff darts the Spectre-ship;While clombe above the Eastern barThe horned Moon, with one bright StarAlmost atween the tips.
One after one by the horned Moon(Listen, O Stranger! to me)Each turn’d his face with a ghastly pangAnd curs’d me with his ee.
Four times fifty living men,With never a sigh or groan,With heavy thump, a lifeless lumpThey dropp’d down one by one.
Their souls did from their bodies fly,--They fled to bliss or woe;And every soul it pass’d me by,Like the whiz of my Cross-bow.
Words in this poem 15
- bigger a.
- , compar. of Big.
- agape adv.
- Gaping, as with wonder, expectation, or eager attention. [Pref. a- + gape.]
- gramercy interj.
- A word formerly used to express thankfulness, with surprise; many thanks. [F. grand-merci. See Grand, and Mercy.]
- grin n.
- A snare; a gin. [AS. grin.]
- drove n.
- A collection of cattle driven, or cattle collected for driving; a number of animals, as oxen, sheep, or swine, driven in a body. [AS. draf, fr. drifan to drive. See Drive.]
- betwixt prep.
- In the space which separates; between. [OE. betwix, bitwix, rarely bitwixt, AS. betweox, betweohs, betweoh, betwih; pref. be- by + a form fr. AS. twa two. See Between.]
- dungeon n.
- A close, dark prison, commondonjon or keep of a castle, these being used as prisons. [OE. donjoun highest tower of a castle, tower, prison, F. donjon tower or platform in the midst of a castle, turret, or closet on the top of a house, a keep of a]
- fleshless a.
- Destitute of flesh; lean. Carlyle.
- ween v. i.
- To think; to imagine; to fancy. [OE. wenen, AS. w, fr. w hope, expectation, opinion; akin to D. waan, OFries. w, OS. & OHG. wan, G. wahn delusion, Icel. van hope, expectation, Goth. w, and D. w]
- mouldy a.
- Overgrown with, or containing, mold; as, moldy cheese or bread. [From Mold the growth of fungi.]
- hulk n.
- The body of a ship or decked vessel of any kind; esp., the body of an old vessel laid by as unfit for service. [OE. hulke a heavy ship, AS. hulc a light, swift ship; akin to D. hulk a ship of burden, G. holk, OHG. holcho; perh. fr. LL. holcas, Gr. Wolf, Holcad.]
- twain a.
- Two;- nearly obsolete in common discourse, but used in poetry and burlesque. [OE. twein, tweien, tweyne, AS. twegen, masc. See Two.]
- quoth v. t.
- Said; spoke; uttered; -- used only in the first and third persons in the past tenses, and always followed by its nominative, the word or words said being the object; as, quoth I. quoth he. [AS.cweedhan, imp cwæedh, pl. cwædon; akin to OS. queedhan, OHG. quethan, quedan, Icel. kveedha, Goth. qiþan. sq. root22. Cf. Bequeath.]
- atween adv.
- Between. Spenser. [See Atwain, and cf. Between.]
- whiz v. i.
- To make a humming or hissing sound, like an arrow or ball flying through the air; to fly or move swiftly with a sharp hissing or whistling sound. [Of imitative origin. Whistle, and Hiss.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Form and metre
The Rime of the Ancyent Marinere, in Seven Parts III is 77 lines in 17 stanzas. The metre is common measure, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 96% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.4 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 36% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 -A-A-A sky · fistA · speck · mistA · last · wistA
- 3 -ABBA bak'd · wailA · stoodB · bloodB · sailA
- 4 -ABBA bak'd · callA · grinB · inB · allA
- 5 ABAB sideA · wealB · tideA · keelB
- 6 -A-A-A flame · doneA · wave · sunA · suddenly · sunA
- 7 -A-A bars · graceA · peer'd · faceA
- 9 -A-A fleck'd · peerA · crew · pheereA
- 10 -ABBA crack · weenA · rustB · crustB · greenA
- 11 AB-AB freeA · goldB · leprosy · heA · coldB
- 12 -A-A came · diceA · won · thriceA
- 13 -A-A behind · bonesA · mouth · groansA
- 14 --AA- sea · ship · barA · starA · tips
- 15 -A-A moon · meA · pang · eeA
- 17 ABAB flyA · woeB · byA · bowB
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against common measure. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| I saw a something in the Sky | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| No bigger than my fist; | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| At first it seem’d a little speck | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| And then it seem’d a mist: | 6 | ······ |
| It mov’d and mov’d, and took at last | 8 | ········ |
| A certain shape, I wist. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| A speck, a mist, a shape, I wist! | 8 | ········ |
| And still it ner’d and ner’d; | 6 | ······ |
| And, an it dodg’d a water-sprite, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| It plung’d and tack’d and veer’d. | 6 | ······ |
| With throat unslack’d, with black lips bak’d | 8 | ········ |
| Ne could we laugh, ne wail: | 6 | ······ |
| Then while thro’ drouth all dumb they stood | 8 | ········ |
| I bit my arm and suck’d the blood | 8 | ········ |
| And cry’d, A sail! a sail! | 6 | ······ |
| With throat unslack’d, with black lips bak’d | 8 | ········ |
| Agape they hear’d me call: | 6 | ˘/···· |
| Gramercy! they for joy did grin | 8 | ˘/˘····· |
| And all at once their breath drew in | 8 | ········ |
| As they were drinking all. | 6 | ···/˘· |
| She doth not tack from side to side-- | 8 | ········ |
| Hither to work us weal | 6 | /˘···· |
| Withouten wind, withouten tide | 8 | ˘/˘·˘/˘· |
| She steddies with upright keel. | 6 | ···˘/· |
| The western wave was all a flame, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| The day was well nigh done! | 6 | ······ |
| Almost upon the western wave | 8 | /····/˘· |
| Rested the broad bright Sun; | 6 | /˘···· |
| When that strange shape drove suddenly | 8 | ·····/˘˘ |
| Betwixt us and the Sun. | 6 | ˘/···· |
| And strait the Sun was fleck’d with bars | 8 | ········ |
| (Heaven’s mother send us grace) | 7 | /˘/˘··· |
| As if thro’ a dungeon grate he peer’d | 9 | ····/˘··· |
| With broad and burning face. | 6 | ···/˘· |
| Alas! (thought I, and my heart beat loud) | 9 | ˘/······· |
| How fast she neres and neres! | 6 | ······ |
| Are those her Sails that glance in the Sun | 9 | ········· |
| Like restless gossameres? | 6 | ·/˘/˘˘ |
| Are these her naked ribs, which fleck’d | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| The sun that did behind them peer? | 8 | ········ |
| And are these two all, all the crew, | 8 | ········ |
| That woman and her fleshless Pheere? | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| His bones were black with many a crack, | 8 | ·····/·· |
| All black and bare, I ween; | 6 | ······ |
| Jet-black and bare, save where with rust | 8 | ········ |
| Of mouldy damps and charnel crust | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| They’re patch’d with purple and green. | 7 | ···/˘·· |
| Her lips are red, her looks are free, | 8 | ········ |
| Her locks are yellow as gold: | 7 | ···/˘·· |
| Her skin is as white as leprosy, | 9 | ······/˘˘ |
| And she is far liker Death than he; | 9 | ········· |
| Her flesh makes the still air cold. | 7 | ······· |
| The naked Hulk alongside came | 8 | ·/˘·˘//· |
| And the Twain were playing dice; | 7 | ····/˘· |
| “The Game is done! I’ve won, I’ve won!” | 8 | ········ |
| Quoth she, and whistled thrice. | 7 | ···/˘˘· |
| A gust of wind sterte up behind | 9 | ····/˘··· |
| And whistled thro’ his bones; | 7 | ·/˘˘··· |
| Thro’ the holes of his eyes and the hole of his mouth | 12 | ············ |
| Half-whistles and half-groans. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| With never a whisper in the Sea | 8 | ·/·/˘··· |
| Off darts the Spectre-ship; | 6 | ···/˘· |
| While clombe above the Eastern bar | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| The horned Moon, with one bright Star | 8 | ··˘····· |
| Almost atween the tips. | 6 | /·˘/·· |
| One after one by the horned Moon | 8 | ········ |
| (Listen, O Stranger! to me) | 7 | /˘·/˘·· |
| Each turn’d his face with a ghastly pang | 9 | ······/˘· |
| And curs’d me with his ee. | 6 | ······ |
| Four times fifty living men, | 7 | ··/˘/˘· |
| With never a sigh or groan, | 7 | ·/˘···· |
| With heavy thump, a lifeless lump | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| They dropp’d down one by one. | 6 | ······ |
| Their souls did from their bodies fly,-- | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| They fled to bliss or woe; | 6 | ······ |
| And every soul it pass’d me by, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Like the whiz of my Cross-bow. | 7 | ······· |
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