Springtide

Various (about 750), translated by L. Cranmer-Byng · 1909

iambic tetrameter · ABAB · 16 lines · from A Lute of Jade

The lonely convent on the hillDraws merchants faring from the west;Almost upon the waters stillThe quiet clouds lean down and rest.

In green pavilions of warm treesThe golden builders toil and sing;While swallows dip along the leas,And dabble in the ooze of Spring.

A thousand flowers, a thousand dreams,Bright pageants in confusion pass.See yonder, where the white horse gleamsHis fetlocks deep in pliant grass.

Beside the eastern lake there callsNo laughing throng, no lover goes;But in the long embankment wallsThe willow shade invites repose.

Words in this poem

yonder adv.
At a distance, but within view. [OE. yonder, ýonder; cf. OD. ginder, Goth. jaindr there. Yond, adv.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Springtide is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Lute of Jade, Project Gutenberg ebook #390, the L. Cranmer-Byng translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Various, Springtide, in A Lute of Jade (1909), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #390, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lute-of-jade/springtide.html, id L15609.

Form and metre

Springtide is 16 lines in 4 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 96%). 96% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.1 syllables. 38% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB hillA · westB · stillA · restB
  2. 2 ABAB treesA · singB · leasA · springB
  3. 3 ABAB dreamsA · passB · gleamsA · grassB
  4. 4 ABAB callsA · goesB · wallsA · reposeB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The lonely convent on the hill8·/˘/˘···
Draws merchants faring from the west;8·/˘/˘···
Almost upon the waters still8/····/˘·
The quiet clouds lean down and rest.8·/˘·····
In green pavilions of warm trees8··˘/˘···
The golden builders toil and sing;8·/˘/˘···
While swallows dip along the leas,8·/˘·˘/··
And dabble in the ooze of Spring.8·/˘·····
A thousand flowers, a thousand dreams,8·/˘/·/˘·
Bright pageants in confusion pass.8·/˘·˘/˘·
See yonder, where the white horse gleams8·/˘·····
His fetlocks deep in pliant grass.8·····/˘·
Beside the eastern lake there calls8˘/·/˘···
No laughing throng, no lover goes;8·/˘··/˘·
But in the long embankment walls8····˘/˘·
The willow shade invites repose.8·/··˘/˘/

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