The Island of Pines

Various (about 750), translated by L. Cranmer-Byng · 1909

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 14 lines · from A Lute of Jade

Across the willow-lake a temple shines,Pale, through the lotus-girdled isle of pines,And twilight listens to the drip of oars --The coming of dark boats with scented storesOf orange seed; the mist leans from the hill,While palm leaves sway 'twixt wind and water chill,And waves of smoke like phantoms rise and fadeInto a trembling tangle of green jade.I dream strange dreams within my tower room,Dreams from the glimmering realms of even gloom;Until each princely guest doth, landing, raiseHis eyes, upon the full-orbed moon to gaze --The old moon-palace that in ocean standsMid clouds of thistle-down and jewelled strands.

Words in this poem

isle v. t.
To cause to become an island, or like an island; to surround or encompass; to island.
drip v. i.
To fall in drops; as, water drips from the eaves. [Akin to LG. drippen, Dan. dryppe, from a noun. See Drop.]
tangle v. t.
To unite or knit together confusedly; to interweave or interlock, as threads, so as to make it difficult to unravel the knot; to entangle; to ravel. [A frequentative fr. tang seaweed; hence, to twist like seaweed. See Tang seaweed, and cf. Tangle, n.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Island of Pines is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Lute of Jade, Project Gutenberg ebook #390, the L. Cranmer-Byng translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Various, The Island of Pines, in A Lute of Jade (1909), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #390, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/lute-of-jade/the-island-of-pines.html, id L15608.

Form and metre

The Island of Pines is 14 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%). 96% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 29% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGG shinesA · pinesA · oarsB · storesB · hillC · chillC · fadeD · jadeD · roomE · gloomE · raiseF · gazeF · standsG · strandsG
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Across the willow-lake a temple shines,10˘/·/···/˘·
Pale, through the lotus-girdled isle of pines,10···/˘/˘···
And twilight listens to the drip of oars --10·/·/˘·····
The coming of dark boats with scented stores10·/˘····/˘·
Of orange seed; the mist leans from the hill,10·/˘·······
While palm leaves sway 'twixt wind and water chill,10·······/˘·
And waves of smoke like phantoms rise and fade10·····/˘···
Into a trembling tangle of green jade.10···/˘/˘···
I dream strange dreams within my tower room,10·······/˘·
Dreams from the glimmering realms of even gloom;10···/˘˘··/·
Until each princely guest doth, landing, raise10···/˘··/˘·
His eyes, upon the full-orbed moon to gaze --10··········
The old moon-palace that in ocean stands10···/˘··/˘·
Mid clouds of thistle-down and jewelled strands.10···/˘··/˘·

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