Return

Various (about 750), translated by L. Cranmer-Byng · 1909

iambic tetrameter · AABB · 12 lines · from A Lute of Jade

The days go by, and once again,Among the shadows of his pain,He lingers at the well-known placeThat holds the memory of her face.

But from the clouds of earth that lieBeneath the foot of tall Ma-weiNo signs of her dim form appear,Only the place of death is here.

Statesman's and monarch's eyes have met,And royal robes with tears are wet;Then eastward flies the frantic steedAs on to the Red Wall they speed.

Words in this poem

steed n.
A horse, especially a spirited horse for state of war; -- used chiefly in poetry or stately prose. [OE. stede, AS. steda a stud-horse, war horse, fr. stod a stud of breeding steeds; akin to G. stute a mare, Icel. stedda, sto, a stud. *163. See Stud of horses.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Return is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Lute of Jade, Project Gutenberg ebook #390, the L. Cranmer-Byng translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Return is 12 lines in 3 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is AABB, complete in 2 of its 3 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.1 syllables. 33% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB againA · painA · placeB · faceB
  2. 2 --AA lie · wei · appearA · hereA
  3. 3 AABB metA · wetA · steedB · speedB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The days go by, and once again,8······˘/
Among the shadows of his pain,8···/····
He lingers at the well-known place8·/˘·····
That holds the memory of her face.8···/˘···
But from the clouds of earth that lie8········
Beneath the foot of tall Ma-wei8········
No signs of her dim form appear,8······˘/
Only the place of death is here.8/˘······
Statesman's and monarch's eyes have met,8/˘·/····
And royal robes with tears are wet;8·/˘·····
Then eastward flies the frantic steed8·/˘··/˘·
As on to the Red Wall they speed.8········

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