Shooting Stars

Victor Hugo (1802–1885), translated by various hands · 1888

trochaic tetrameter · 16 lines · from Poems

See the scintillating shower!Like a burst from golden mine--Incandescent coals that pourFrom the incense-bowl divine,And around us dewdrops, shaken,Mirror each a twinkling ray'Twixt the flowers that awakenIn this glory great as day.Mists and fogs all vanish fleetly;And the birds begin to sing,Whilst the rain is murm'ring sweetlyAs if angels echoing.And, methinks, to show she's gratefulFor this seed from heaven come,Earth is holding up a platefulOf the birds and buds a-bloom!

Words in this poem

twinkling n.
The act of one who, or of that which, twinkles; a quick movement of the eye; a wink; a twinkle. Holland.
fleetly adv.
In a fleet manner; rapidly.
methinks v.
It seems to me; I think. See Me. [AS. þyncan to seem, me þynceedh, me þuhte, OE. me thinketh, me thoughte; akin to G. dünken to seem, denken to think, and E. think. See Me, and Think.]
plateful n.
Enough to fill a plate; as much as a plate will hold.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Shooting Stars is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #8775, the various hands translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Victor Hugo, Shooting Stars, in Poems (1888), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8775, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hugo-poems/shooting-stars.html, id L26834.

Form and metre

Shooting Stars is 16 lines in a single stanza. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).

See other poems in trochaic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-ABCBCDEDEF-F- shower · mineA · pour · divineA · shakenB · rayC · awakenB · dayC · fleetlyD · singE · sweetlyD · echoingE · gratefulF · come · platefulF · bloom
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
See the scintillating shower!8······/˘
Like a burst from golden mine--7····/˘·
Incandescent coals that pour7·˘/˘···
From the incense-bowl divine,7··/··˘/
And around us dewdrops, shaken,8······/˘
Mirror each a twinkling ray8/˘··/˘˘·
'Twixt the flowers that awaken8··/˘·˘/˘
In this glory great as day.7··/˘···
Mists and fogs all vanish fleetly;8····/˘/˘
And the birds begin to sing,7···˘/··
Whilst the rain is murm'ring sweetly8······/˘
As if angels echoing.7··/˘/˘˘
And, methinks, to show she's grateful8·˘/···/˘
For this seed from heaven come,7····/˘·
Earth is holding up a plateful8··/˘··/˘
Of the birds and buds a-bloom!7·······

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