Madelaine

Victor Hugo (1802–1885), translated by various hands · 1888

trochaic tetrameter · AABCCB · 48 lines · from Poems

List to me, O Madelaine!Now the snows have left the plain,Which they warmly cloaked.Come into the forest groves,Where the notes that Echo lovesAre from horns evoked.

Come! where Springtide, Madelaine,Brings a sultry breath from Spain,Giving buds their hue;And, last night, to glad your eye,Laid the floral marquetry,Red and gold and blue.

Would I were, O Madelaine,As the lamb whose wool you trainThrough your tender hands.Would I were the bird that whirlsRound, and comes to peck your curls,Happy in such bands.

Were I e'en, O Madelaine,Hermit whom the herd disdainIn his pious cell,When your purest lips unfoldSins which might to all be told,As to him you tell.

Would I were, O Madelaine,Moth that murmurs 'gainst your pane,Peering at your rest,As, so like its woolly wing,Ceasing scarce its fluttering,Heaves and sinks your breast.

If you seek it, Madelaine,You may wish, and not in vain,For a serving host,And your splendid hall of stateShall be envied by the great,O'er the Jew-King's boast.

If you name it, Madelaine,Round your head no more you'll trainSimple marguerites,No! the coronet of peers,Whom the queen herself oft fears,And the monarch greets.

If you wish, O Madelaine!Where you gaze you long shall reign--For I'm ruler here!I'm the lord who asks your handIf you do not bid me standLoving shepherd here!

Words in this poem

warmly adv.
In a warm manner; ardently.
springtide n.
The time of spring; springtime. Thomson.
marquetry n.
Inlaid work; work inlaid with pieces of wood, shells, ivory, and the like, of several colors. [F. marqueterie, from marqueter to checker, inlay, fr. marque mark, sign; of German origin. See Mark a sign.]
pane n.
The narrow edge of a hammer head. See Peen. [F. panne.]
scarce a.
Not plentiful or abundant; in small quantity in proportion to the demand; not easily to be procured; rare; uncommon. [OE. scars, OF. escars, eschars, LL. scarpsus, for L. excerptus, p. p. of excerpere to pick out, and hence to contract, to shorten; ex (see Ex-) + carpere. See C]
heaves n.
A disease of horses, characterized by difficult breathing, with heaving of the flank, wheezing, flatulency, and a peculiar cough; broken wind.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Madelaine is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #8775, the various hands translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Victor Hugo, Madelaine, in Poems (1888), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #8775, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/hugo-poems/madelaine.html, id L26713.

Form and metre

Madelaine is 48 lines in 8 stanzas of 6 lines each. Every stanza rhymes AABCCB. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 94%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABCCB madelaineA · plainA · cloakedB · grovesC · lovesC · evokedB
  2. 2 AABCCB madelaineA · spainA · hueB · eyeC · marquetryC · blueB
  3. 3 AABCCB madelaineA · trainA · handsB · whirlsC · curlsC · bandsB
  4. 4 AABCCB madelaineA · disdainA · cellB · unfoldC · toldC · tellB
  5. 5 AABCCB madelaineA · paneA · restB · wingC · flutteringC · breastB
  6. 6 AABCCB madelaineA · vainA · hostB · stateC · greatC · boastB
  7. 7 AABCCB madelaineA · trainA · margueritesB · peersC · fearsC · greetsB
  8. 8 AABCCB madelaineA · reignA · hereB · handC · standC · hereB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
List to me, O Madelaine!7····/˘˘
Now the snows have left the plain,7·······
Which they warmly cloaked.5··/˘·
Come into the forest groves,7····/˘·
Where the notes that Echo loves7····/˘·
Are from horns evoked.5···˘/
Come! where Springtide, Madelaine,7··/˘/˘˘
Brings a sultry breath from Spain,7··/˘···
Giving buds their hue;5/˘···
And, last night, to glad your eye,7·······
Laid the floral marquetry,7··/˘/˘˘
Red and gold and blue.5·····
Would I were, O Madelaine,7····/˘˘
As the lamb whose wool you train7·······
Through your tender hands.5··/˘·
Would I were the bird that whirls7·······
Round, and comes to peck your curls,7·······
Happy in such bands.5/˘···
Were I e'en, O Madelaine,7····/˘˘
Hermit whom the herd disdain7/˘···˘/
In his pious cell,5··/˘·
When your purest lips unfold7··/˘·˘/
Sins which might to all be told,7·······
As to him you tell.5·····
Would I were, O Madelaine,7····/˘˘
Moth that murmurs 'gainst your pane,7··/˘···
Peering at your rest,5/˘···
As, so like its woolly wing,7····/˘·
Ceasing scarce its fluttering,7/˘··/˘˘
Heaves and sinks your breast.5·····
If you seek it, Madelaine,7····/˘˘
You may wish, and not in vain,7·······
For a serving host,5··/˘·
And your splendid hall of state7··/˘···
Shall be envied by the great,7··/˘···
O'er the Jew-King's boast.5·····
If you name it, Madelaine,7····/˘˘
Round your head no more you'll train7·······
Simple marguerites,5/˘·˘/
No! the coronet of peers,7··/˘/··
Whom the queen herself oft fears,7···˘/··
And the monarch greets.5··/··
If you wish, O Madelaine!7····/˘˘
Where you gaze you long shall reign--7·······
For I'm ruler here!5··/˘·
I'm the lord who asks your hand7·······
If you do not bid me stand7·······
Loving shepherd here!5/˘/˘·

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