The Spell of the Rose

Thomas Hardy (1840–1928) · 1914

iambic tetrameter · 42 lines · from Satires of Circumstance, Lyrics and Reveries

“I MEAN to build a hall anon,And shape two turrets there,And a broad newelled stair,And a cool well for crystal water;Yes; I will build a hall anon,Plant roses love shall feed upon,And apple trees and pear.”

He set to build the manor-hall,And shaped the turrets there,And the broad newelled stair,And the cool well for crystal water;He built for me that manor-hall,And planted many trees withal,But no rose anywhere.

And as he planted never a roseThat bears the flower of love,Though other flowers throveA frost-wind moved our souls to severSince he had planted never a rose;And misconceits raised horrid shows,And agonies came thereof.

“I’ll mend these miseries,” then said I,And so, at dead of night,I went and, screened from sight,That nought should keep our souls in severance,I set a rose-bush. “This,” said I,“May end divisions dire and wry,And long-drawn days of blight.”

But I was called from earth—yea, calledBefore my rose-bush grew;And would that now I knewWhat feels he of the tree I planted,And whether, after I was calledTo be a ghost, he, as of old,Gave me his heart anew!

Perhaps now blooms that queen of treesI set but saw not grow,And he, beside its glow—Eyes couched of the mis-vision that blurred me—Ay, there beside that queen of treesHe sees me as I was, though seesToo late to tell me so!

Words in this poem

anon adv.
Straightway; at once. [OE. anoon, anon, anan, lit., in one (moment), fr. AS. on in + an one. See On and One.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
withal adv.
With this; with that. [With + all.]
horrid a.
Rough; rugged; bristling. [L. horridus. See Horror, and cf. Ordure.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
severance n.
The act of severing, or the state of being severed; partition; separation. Milman.
dire a.
Ill-boding; portentous; as, dire omens. [L. dirus; of uncertain origin.]
ghost n.
The spirit; the soul of man. [OE. gast, gost, soul, spirit, AS. gast breath, spirit, soul; akin to OS. g spirit, soul, D. geest, G. geist, and prob. to E. gaze, ghastly.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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The Spell of the Rose is in the public domain. This text is taken from Satires of Circumstance, Lyrics and Reveries, with Miscellaneous Pieces, Project Gutenberg ebook #2863; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The Spell of the Rose is 42 lines in 6 stanzas of 7 lines each. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 87%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABB-A-B anonA · thereB · stairB · water · anonA · upon · pearB
  2. 2 ABB-AAB hallA · thereB · stairB · water · hallA · withalA · anywhereB
  3. 3 AB--AAB roseA · loveB · throve · sever · roseA · showsA · thereofB
  4. 4 ABB-AAB iA · nightB · sightB · severance · iA · wryA · blightB
  5. 5 ABB-A-B calledA · grewB · knewB · planted · calledA · old · anewB
  6. 6 ABB-AAB treesA · growB · glowB · me · treesA · seesA · soB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
“I MEAN to build a hall anon,8······˘/
And shape two turrets there,6···/˘·
And a broad newelled stair,6···/˘·
And a cool well for crystal water;9·····/˘/˘
Yes; I will build a hall anon,8······˘/
Plant roses love shall feed upon,8·/˘·····
And apple trees and pear.”6·/˘···
He set to build the manor-hall,8·····/˘·
And shaped the turrets there,6···/˘·
And the broad newelled stair,6···/˘·
And the cool well for crystal water;9·····/˘/˘
He built for me that manor-hall,8·····/˘·
And planted many trees withal,8·/˘/˘·˘/
But no rose anywhere.6···/˘·
And as he planted never a rose8···/˘/··
That bears the flower of love,7···/˘··
Though other flowers throve6·/˘/˘·
A frost-wind moved our souls to sever9····/··/˘
Since he had planted never a rose;8···/˘/··
And misconceits raised horrid shows,8·····/˘·
And agonies came thereof.7·/˘˘···
“I’ll mend these miseries,” then said I,8···/˘···
And so, at dead of night,6······
I went and, screened from sight,6······
That nought should keep our souls in severance,9····/··/˘
I set a rose-bush. “This,” said I,8········
“May end divisions dire and wry,8··˘/˘···
And long-drawn days of blight.”6······
But I was called from earth—yea, called8········
Before my rose-bush grew;6······
And would that now I knew6······
What feels he of the tree I planted,9·······/˘
And whether, after I was called8········
To be a ghost, he, as of old,8········
Gave me his heart anew!6····˘/
Perhaps now blooms that queen of trees8˘/······
I set but saw not grow,6······
And he, beside its glow—6··˘/··
Eyes couched of the mis-vision that blurred me—10·····/˘···
Ay, there beside that queen of trees8··˘/····
He sees me as I was, though sees8········
Too late to tell me so!6······

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