The Obliterate Tomb

Thomas Hardy (1840–1928) · 1914

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 144 lines · from Satires of Circumstance, Lyrics and Reveries

“MORE than half my life longDid they weigh me falsely, to my bitter wrong,But they all have shrunk away into the silenceLike a lost song.

“And the day has dawned and comeFor forgiveness, when the past may hold it dumbOn the once reverberate words of hatred utteredHalf in delirium . . .

“With folded lips and handsThey lie and wait what next the Will commands,And doubtless think, if think they can: ‘Let discordSink with Life’s sands!’

“By these late years their names,Their virtues, their hereditary claims,May be as near defacement at their grave-placeAs are their fames.”

—Such thoughts bechanced to seizeA traveller’s mind—a man of memories—As he set foot within the western cityWhere had died these

Who in their lifetime deemedHim their chief enemy—one whose brain had schemedTo get their dingy greatness deeplier dingiedAnd disesteemed.

So, sojourning in their town,He mused on them and on their once renown,And said, “I’ll seek their resting-place to-morrowEre I lie down,

“And end, lest I forget,Those ires of many years that I regret,Renew their names, that men may see some liegenessIs left them yet.”

Duly next day he wentAnd sought the church he had known them to frequent,And wandered in the precincts, set on eyeingWhere they lay pent,

Till by remembrance ledHe stood at length beside their slighted bed,Above which, truly, scarce a line or letterCould now be read.

“Thus years obliterateTheir graven worth, their chronicle, their date!At once I’ll garnish and revive the recordOf their past state,

“That still the sage may sayIn pensive progress here where they decay,‘This stone records a luminous line whose talentsTold in their day.’”

While speaking thus he turned,For a form shadowed where they lay inurned,And he beheld a stranger in foreign vesture,And tropic-burned.

“Sir, I am right pleased to viewThat ancestors of mine should interest you,For I have come of purpose here to trace them . . .They are time-worn, true,

“But that’s a fault, at most,Sculptors can cure. On the Pacific coastI have vowed for long that relics of my forbearsI’d trace ere lost,

“And hitherward I come,Before this same old Time shall strike me numb,To carry it out.”—“Strange, this is!” said the other;“What mind shall plumb

“Coincident design!Though these my father’s enemies were and mine,I nourished a like purpose—to restore themEach letter and line.”

“Such magnanimityIs now not needed, sir; for you will seeThat since I am here, a thing like this is, plainly,Best done by me.”

The other bowed, and left,Crestfallen in sentiment, as one bereftOf some fair object he had been moved to cherish,By hands more deft.

And as he slept that nightThe phantoms of the ensepulchred stood up-rightBefore him, trembling that he had set him seekingTheir charnel-site.

And, as unknowing his ruth,Asked as with terrors founded not on truthWhy he should want them. “Ha,” they hollowly hackered,“You come, forsooth,

“By stealth to obliterateOur graven worth, our chronicle, our date,That our descendant may not gild the recordOf our past state,

“And that no sage may sayIn pensive progress near where we decay:‘This stone records a luminous line whose talentsTold in their day.’”

Upon the morrow he wentAnd to that town and churchyard never bentHis ageing footsteps till, some twelvemonths onward,An accident

Once more detained him there;And, stirred by hauntings, he must needs repairTo where the tomb was. Lo, it stood still wastingIn no man’s care.

“The travelled man you metThe last time,” said the sexton, “has not yetAppeared again, though wealth he had in plenty.—Can he forget?

“The architect was hiredAnd came here on smart summons as desired,But never the descendant came to tell himWhat he required.”

And so the tomb remainedUntouched, untended, crumbling, weather-stained,And though the one-time foe was fain to right itHe still refrained.

“I’ll set about it whenI am sure he’ll come no more. Best wait till then.”But so it was that never the stranger enteredThat city again.

And the well-meaner diedWhile waiting tremulously unsatisfiedThat no return of the family’s foreign scionWould still betide.

And many years slid by,And active church-restorers cast their eyeUpon the ancient garth and hoary buildingThe tomb stood nigh.

And when they had scraped each wall,Pulled out the stately pews, and smartened all,“It will be well,” declared the spruce church-warden,“To overhaul

“And broaden this path where shown;Nothing prevents it but an old tombstonePertaining to a family forgotten,Of deeds unknown.

“Their names can scarce be read,Depend on’t, all who care for them are dead.”So went the tomb, whose shards were as path-pavingDistributed.

Over it and aboutMen’s footsteps beat, and wind and water-spout,Until the names, aforetime gnawed by weathers,Were quite worn out.

So that no sage can sayIn pensive progress near where they decay,“This stone records a luminous line whose talentsTold in their day.”

Words in this poem 27
doubtless a.
Free from fear or suspicion.
defacement n.
The act of defacing, or the condition of being defaced; injury to the surface or exterior; obliteration.
lifetime n.
The time that life continues.
sojourning n.
The act or state of one who sojourns.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
pent p. p.
Penned or shut up; confined; -- often with up. [From Pen, v. t.]
scarce a.
Not plentiful or abundant; in small quantity in proportion to the demand; not easily to be procured; rare; uncommon. [OE. scars, OF. escars, eschars, LL. scarpsus, for L. excerptus, p. p. of excerpere to pick out, and hence to contract, to shorten; ex (see Ex-) + carpere. See C]
graven p. p.
Carved. Graven image, an idol; an object of worship carved from wood, stone, etc.
garnish v. t.
To decorate with ornamental appendages; to set off; to adorn; to embellish. [OE. garnischen, garnissen, OF. garnir to provide, strengthen, prepare, garnish, warn, F. garnir to provide, furnish, garnish, -- of German origin; cf. OHG. warn]
hitherward adv.
Toward this place; hither. [AS. hiderweard.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
crestfallen a.
With hanging head; hence, dispirited; dejected; cowed.
deft a.
Apt; fit; dexterous; clever; handy; spruce; neat. [OE. daft, deft, becoming, mild, gentle, stupid (cf. OE. daffe, deffe, fool, coward), AS. dæft (in derivatives only) mild, gentle, fitting, seasonable; akin to d]
ruth n.
Sorrow for the misery of another; pity; tenderness. [From Rue, v.: cf. Icel. hryggedh, hrygedh.]
hollowly adv.
Insincerely; deceitfully.
forsooth v. t.
To address respectfully with the term forsooth.
stealth n.
The act of stealing; theft. [OE. staple. See Steal, v. t.]
churchyard n.
The ground adjoining a church, in which the dead are buried; a cemetery.
needs adv.
Of necessity; necessarily; indispensably; -- often with must, and equivalent to of need. [Orig. gen. of need, used as an adverb. Cf. - wards.]
wealth n.
Weal; welfare; prosperity; good. [OE. welthe, from wele; cf. D. weelde luxury. See Weal prosperity.]
fain v. t.
To be glad ; to wish or desire.
betide v. t.
To happen to; to befall; to come to ; as, woe betide the wanderer. [OE. bitiden; pref. bi-, be- + tiden, fr. AS. tidan, to happen, fr. tid time. See Tide.]
hoary a.
White or whitish."The hoary willows."
overhaul v. t.
To haul or drag over; hence, to turn over for examination; to inspect; to examine thoroughly with a view to corrections or repairs.
broaden v. t.
To grow broad; to become broader or wider. [From Broad, a.]
tombstone n.
A stone erected over a grave, to preserve the memory of the deceased.
aforetime adv.
In time past; formerly.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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The Obliterate Tomb is in the public domain. This text is taken from Satires of Circumstance, Lyrics and Reveries, with Miscellaneous Pieces, Project Gutenberg ebook #2863; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The Obliterate Tomb is 144 lines in 36 stanzas of 4 lines each. It is in rhyming couplets, 50% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic tetrameter.

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AA-A longA · wrongA · silence · songA
  2. 2 AA-A comeA · dumbA · uttered · deliriumA
  3. 3 AA-A handsA · commandsA · discord · sandsA
  4. 4 AA-A namesA · claimsA · place · famesA
  5. 5 AA-A seizeA · memoriesA · city · theseA
  6. 6 AA-A deemedA · schemedA · dingied · disesteemedA
  7. 7 AA-A townA · renownA · morrow · downA
  8. 8 AA-A forgetA · regretA · liegeness · yetA
  9. 9 AA-A wentA · frequentA · eyeing · pentA
  10. 10 AA-A ledA · bedA · letter · readA
  11. 11 AA-A obliterateA · dateA · record · stateA
  12. 12 AA-A sayA · decayA · talents · dayA
  13. 13 AA-A turnedA · inurnedA · vesture · burnedA
  14. 14 AA-A viewA · youA · them · trueA
  15. 15 AA-- mostA · coastA · forbears · lost
  16. 16 AA-A comeA · numbA · other · plumbA
  17. 17 AA-A designA · mineA · them · lineA
  18. 18 -A-A magnanimity · seeA · plainly · meA
  19. 19 AA-A leftA · bereftA · cherish · deftA
  20. 20 AA-A nightA · rightA · seeking · siteA
  21. 21 AA-A ruthA · truthA · hackered · forsoothA
  22. 22 AA-A obliterateA · dateA · record · stateA
  23. 23 AA-A sayA · decayA · talents · dayA
  24. 24 AA-A wentA · bentA · onward · accidentA
  25. 25 AA-A thereA · repairA · wasting · careA
  26. 26 AA-A metA · yetA · plenty · forgetA
  27. 27 AA-A hiredA · desiredA · him · requiredA
  28. 28 AA-A remainedA · stainedA · it · refrainedA
  29. 29 AA-A whenA · thenA · entered · againA
  30. 30 AA-A diedA · unsatisfiedA · scion · betideA
  31. 31 AA-A byA · eyeA · building · nighA
  32. 32 AA-A wallA · allA · warden · overhaulA
  33. 33 AAAA shownA · tombstoneA · forgottenA · unknownA
  34. 34 AA-A readA · deadA · paving · distributedA
  35. 35 AA-A aboutA · spoutA · weathers · outA
  36. 36 AA-A sayA · decayA · talents · dayA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
“MORE than half my life long6······
Did they weigh me falsely, to my bitter wrong,11····/˘··/˘·
But they all have shrunk away into the silence12·····˘/···/˘
Like a lost song.4····
“And the day has dawned and come8·····˘··
For forgiveness, when the past may hold it dumb11·˘/˘·······
On the once reverberate words of hatred uttered12···˘/˘··/˘/˘
Half in delirium . . .6··˘/˘˘
“With folded lips and hands6·/˘···
They lie and wait what next the Will commands,10········˘/
And doubtless think, if think they can: ‘Let discord11·/˘······/˘
Sink with Life’s sands!’4····
“By these late years their names,6······
Their virtues, their hereditary claims,10·/˘·˘/˘·˘·
May be as near defacement at their grave-place11····˘/˘····
As are their fames.”4····
—Such thoughts bechanced to seize7····˘··
A traveller’s mind—a man of memories—9·/˘····/˘
As he set foot within the western city11·······/˘/˘
Where had died these4····
Who in their lifetime deemed7···/··˘
Him their chief enemy—one whose brain had schemed10···/˘·····
To get their dingy greatness deeplier dingied10···/˘/˘···
And disesteemed.4····
So, sojourning in their town,7·/˘˘···
He mused on them and on their once renown,10········˘/
And said, “I’ll seek their resting-place to-morrow11·····/˘··/˘
Ere I lie down,4····
“And end, lest I forget,6····˘/
Those ires of many years that I regret,9···/···˘/
Renew their names, that men may see some liegeness12˘/··········
Is left them yet.”4····
Duly next day he went6/˘····
And sought the church he had known them to frequent,11·········/˘
And wandered in the precincts, set on eyeing11·/˘··/···/˘
Where they lay pent,4····
Till by remembrance led6··˘/˘·
He stood at length beside their slighted bed,10····˘/·/˘·
Above which, truly, scarce a line or letter11···/˘····/˘
Could now be read.4····
“Thus years obliterate6··˘/˘·
Their graven worth, their chronicle, their date!9·/˘··/˘··
At once I’ll garnish and revive the record11···/˘·˘/·/˘
Of their past state,4····
“That still the sage may say6······
In pensive progress here where they decay,10·/˘/····˘/
‘This stone records a luminous line whose talents11··˘/·/˘··/˘
Told in their day.’”4····
While speaking thus he turned,7·/˘···˘
For a form shadowed where they lay inurned,10···/˘·····
And he beheld a stranger in foreign vesture,12··˘/·/˘·/˘/˘
And tropic-burned.4·/˘·
“Sir, I am right pleased to view8·····˘··
That ancestors of mine should interest you,10·/·˘···/˘·
For I have come of purpose here to trace them . . .11·····/˘····
They are time-worn, true,5·····
“But that’s a fault, at most,6······
Sculptors can cure. On the Pacific coast10/˘····˘/˘·
I have vowed for long that relics of my forbears12······/˘····
I’d trace ere lost,4····
“And hitherward I come,6·/˘˘··
Before this same old Time shall strike me numb,10··········
To carry it out.”—“Strange, this is!” said the other;12·/˘·······/˘
“What mind shall plumb4····
“Coincident design!6˘/˘˘˘/
Though these my father’s enemies were and mine,10···/˘/˘···
I nourished a like purpose—to restore them11·/˘··/˘·˘/·
Each letter and line.”5·/˘··
“Such magnanimity6······
Is now not needed, sir; for you will see10···/˘·····
That since I am here, a thing like this is, plainly,12··········/˘
Best done by me.”4····
The other bowed, and left,7·/˘·˘··
Crestfallen in sentiment, as one bereft10/·˘·/˘··˘/
Of some fair object he had been moved to cherish,12···˘/·····/˘
By hands more deft.4····
And as he slept that night6······
The phantoms of the ensepulchred stood up-right11·/˘········
Before him, trembling that he had set him seeking12···/˘·····/˘
Their charnel-site.4·/˘·
And, as unknowing his ruth,7··˘/˘··
Asked as with terrors founded not on truth10···/˘/˘···
Why he should want them. “Ha,” they hollowly hackered,12·······/˘˘/˘
“You come, forsooth,4··˘/
“By stealth to obliterate7···˘/˘·
Our graven worth, our chronicle, our date,9//˘·//˘/·
That our descendant may not gild the record11·/˘/˘····/˘
Of our past state,5·/˘··
“And that no sage may say6······
In pensive progress near where we decay:10·/˘/····˘/
‘This stone records a luminous line whose talents11··˘/·/˘··/˘
Told in their day.’”4····
Upon the morrow he went7···/˘··
And to that town and churchyard never bent9·····/·/·
His ageing footsteps till, some twelvemonths onward,12···/······/˘
An accident4·/˘˘
Once more detained him there;7··˘/˘··
And, stirred by hauntings, he must needs repair10···/˘···˘/
To where the tomb was. Lo, it stood still wasting11·········/˘
In no man’s care.4····
“The travelled man you met7·/˘˘···
The last time,” said the sexton, “has not yet10·····/˘···
Appeared again, though wealth he had in plenty.11˘/˘/·····/˘
—Can he forget?4··˘/
“The architect was hired8·/˘··/˘˘
And came here on smart summons as desired,10·····/˘·˘/
But never the descendant came to tell him10·/·˘/˘····
What he required.”5··˘/˘
And so the tomb remained7····˘/˘
Untouched, untended, crumbling, weather-stained,10˘/···/˘/˘·
And though the one-time foe was fain to right it11···········
He still refrained.4··˘/
“I’ll set about it when6······
I am sure he’ll come no more. Best wait till then.”11···········
But so it was that never the stranger entered11·····/·/˘/˘
That city again.5·/˘˘/
And the well-meaner died6···/˘·
While waiting tremulously unsatisfied9·/˘/˘˘/˘·
That no return of the family’s foreign scion12··˘/··/˘/˘/˘
Would still betide.4··˘/
And many years slid by,6·/˘···
And active church-restorers cast their eye10·/˘·˘/˘···
Upon the ancient garth and hoary building11···/˘··/˘/˘
The tomb stood nigh.4····
And when they had scraped each wall,8·····˘··
Pulled out the stately pews, and smartened all,10···/˘··/˘·
“It will be well,” declared the spruce church-warden,11····˘/···/˘
“To overhaul4·/˘·
“And broaden this path where shown;7·/˘····
Nothing prevents it but an old tombstone10/˘˘/····/·
Pertaining to a family forgotten,10˘/˘··/˘˘/˘
Of deeds unknown.4··˘/
“Their names can scarce be read,6······
Depend on’t, all who care for them are dead.”10˘/········
So went the tomb, whose shards were as path-paving11·········/˘
Distributed.4˘/˘˘
Over it and about6······
Men’s footsteps beat, and wind and water-spout,10·/·····/˘·
Until the names, aforetime gnawed by weathers,11····˘/˘··/˘
Were quite worn out.4····
So that no sage can say6······
In pensive progress near where they decay,10·/˘/····˘/
“This stone records a luminous line whose talents11··˘/·/˘··/˘
Told in their day.”4····

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