The ringèd moon sits eerily

William Faulkner (1897–1962) · 1924

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 36 lines · from The Marble Faun

The ringèd moon sits eerilyLike a mad woman in the sky,Dropping flat hands to caressThe far world's shaggy flanks and breast,Plunging white hands in the gladeElbow deep in leafy shadeWhere birds sleep in each silent brakeSilverly, there to wakeThe quivering loud nightingalesWhose cries like scattered silver sailsSpread across the azure sea.Her hands also caress me:My keen heart also does she dare;While turning always through the skiesHer white feet mirrored in my eyesWeave a snare about my brainUnbreakable by surge or strain,For the moon is mad, for she is old,And many's the bead of a life she's told;And many's the fair one she's seen wither:They pass, they pass, and know not whither.

The hushèd earth, so calm, so old,Dreams beneath its heath and wold—And heavy scent from thorny hedgePaused and snowy on the edgeOf some dark ravine, from whereMists as soft and thick as hairFloat silver in the moon.

Stars sweep down—or are they stars?—Against the pines' dark etchèd bars.Along a brooding moon-wet hillDogwood shines so cool and still,Like hands that, palm up, rigid lieIn invocation to the skyAs they spread there, frozen white,Upon the velvet of the night.

Words in this poem

eerily adv.
In a strange, unearthly way.
caress n.
An act of endearment; any act or expression of affection; an embracing, or touching, with tenderness. [F. caresse, It. carezza, LL. caritia dearness, fr. L. carus dear. See Charity.]
glade n.
An open passage through a wood; a grassy open or cleared space in a forest. [Prob. of Scand. origin, and akin to glad, a.; cf. also W. golead, goleuad, a lighting, illumination, fr. goleu light, clear, bright, goleu fwlch glade, lit., a ]
silverly adv.
Like silver in appearance or in sound.
whither adv.
To what place; -- used interrogatively; as, whither goest thou [OE. whider. AS. hwider; akin to E. where, who; cf. Goth. hvadre whither. See Who, and cf. Hither, Thither.]
wold n.
A wood; a forest. [OE. wold, wald, AS. weald, wald, a wood, forest; akin to OFries. & OS. wald, D. woud, G. wald, Icel. völlr, a field, and probably to Gr. va a garden, inclosure.]
snowy a.
White like snow.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

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Form and metre

The ringèd moon sits eerily is 36 lines in 3 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 61% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 86%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ----AABBCCDD-EEFFGGHH eerily · sky · caress · breast · gladeA · shadeA · brakeB · wakeB · nightingalesC · sailsC · seaD · meD · dare · skiesE · eyesE · brainF · strainF · oldG · toldG · witherH · whitherH
  2. 2 AABBCC- oldA · woldA · hedgeB · edgeB · whereC · hairC · moon
  3. 3 AABBCCDD starsA · barsA · hillB · stillB · lieC · skyC · whiteD · nightD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The ringèd moon sits eerily7····/˘˘
Like a mad woman in the sky,8···/˘···
Dropping flat hands to caress7/˘···˘/
The far world's shaggy flanks and breast,8···/˘···
Plunging white hands in the glade7/˘·····
Elbow deep in leafy shade7/···/˘·
Where birds sleep in each silent brake8·····/˘·
Silverly, there to wake6/˘˘···
The quivering loud nightingales8·/˘˘·/˘˘
Whose cries like scattered silver sails8···/˘/˘·
Spread across the azure sea.7·˘/·/˘·
Her hands also caress me:7··/˘˘/·
My keen heart also does she dare;8···/˘···
While turning always through the skies8·/˘/····
Her white feet mirrored in my eyes8···/˘···
Weave a snare about my brain7·······
Unbreakable by surge or strain,8˘/˘˘····
For the moon is mad, for she is old,9·········
And many's the bead of a life she's told;10·/˘·······
And many's the fair one she's seen wither:10·/˘·····/˘
They pass, they pass, and know not whither.9·······/˘
The hushèd earth, so calm, so old,8········
Dreams beneath its heath and wold—7·······
And heavy scent from thorny hedge8·/˘··/˘·
Paused and snowy on the edge8·˘·/˘···
Of some dark ravine, from where7···˘/··
Mists as soft and thick as hair7·······
Float silver in the moon.6·/˘···
Stars sweep down—or are they stars?—7·······
Against the pines' dark etchèd bars.7·······
Along a brooding moon-wet hill8˘/·/˘···
Dogwood shines so cool and still,7/······
Like hands that, palm up, rigid lie8·····/˘·
In invocation to the sky8··˘/˘···
As they spread there, frozen white,7····/˘·
Upon the velvet of the night.8···/˘···

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