Upon a wood's dim shaded edge

William Faulkner (1897–1962) · 1924

iambic tetrameter · AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJ · 74 lines · from The Marble Faun

Upon a wood's dim shaded edgeStands a dusty hawthorn hedgeBeside a road from which I passTo cool my feet in deep rich grass.I pause to listen to the songOf a brook spilling alongBehind a patchy willow screenWhose lazy evening shadows leanTheir scattered gold upon a gladeThrough which the staring daisies wade,And the resilient poplar trees,Slowly turning in the breeze,Flash their facets to the sun,Swaying in slow unison.Here quietude folds a spellWithin a stilly shadowed dellWherein I rest, and through the leavesThe sun a soundless pattern weavesUpon the floor. The leafy gladeIs pensive in the dappled shade,While the startled sunlight dripsFrom beech and alder fingertips,And birches springing suddenlyErect in silence sleepilyClinging to their slender limbs,Whitening them as shadow dims.

As I lie here my fancy goesTo where a quiet oak bestowsIts shadow on a dreaming sceneOver which the broad boughs leanA canopy. The brook's a streamOn which long still days lie and dream,And where the lusty summer walks—Around his head are lilac stalks—In the shade beneath the treesTo let the cool stream fold his knees;While I lie in the leafy shadeUntil the nymphs troop down the glade.Their limbs that in the spring were whiteAre now burned golden by sunlight.They near the marge, and there they meetInverted selves stretched at their feet;And they kneel languorously thereTo comb and braid their short blown hairBefore they slip into the pool—Warm gold in silver liquid cool.

Evening turns and sunlight fallsIn flecks between the leafèd walls,Like golden butterflies whose wingsSlowly pulse and beat. Slow singsThe stream in a lower keyMurmuring down quietlyBetween its solemn purple stoneWith cooling ivy overgrown.

Sunset stains the western sky;Night comes soon, and now IFollow toward the evening star.A sheep bell tinkles faint and far,Then drips in silence as the sheepMove like clouds across the deepStill dusky meadows wet with dew.I stretch and roll and draw throughThe fresh sweet grass, and the airIs softer than my own soft hair.I lift up my eyes; the greenWest is a lake on which has beenCast a single lily. —See!In meadows stretching over meAre humming stars as thick as bees,And the reaching inky treesSweep the sky. I lie and hearThe voices of the fecund year,While the dark grows dim and deep,And I glide into dreamless sleep.

Words in this poem 17
patchy a.
Full of, or covered with, patches; abounding in patches.
glade n.
An open passage through a wood; a grassy open or cleared space in a forest. [Prob. of Scand. origin, and akin to glad, a.; cf. also W. golead, goleuad, a lighting, illumination, fr. goleu light, clear, bright, goleu fwlch glade, lit., a ]
wade n.
Woad. Mortimer.
resilient a.
Leaping back; rebounding; recoling. [L. resiliens, p. pr.]
quietude n.
Rest; repose; quiet; tranquillity. Shelley. [L. quietudo: cf. F. quiétude.]
stilly a.
Still; quiet; calm.
dell n.
A small, retired valley; a ravine. [AS. del, akin to E. dale; cf. D. delle, del, low ground. See Dale.]
soundless a.
Not capable of being sounded or fathomed; unfathomable.
dappled a.
Marked with spots of different shades of color; spotted; variegated; as, a dapple horse.
alder a.
Of all; -- used in composition; as, alderbest, best of all, alderwisest, wisest of all. [From ealra, alra, gen. pl. of AS. eal. The d is excrescent.]
sleepily adv.
In a sleepy manner; drowsily.
whitening n.
The act or process of making or becoming white.
marge n.
Border; margin; edge; verge. [F. marge. See Margin.]
kneel v. i.
To bend the knee; to fall or rest on the knees; -- sometimes with down. [OE. knelen, cneolien; akin to D. knielen, Dan. knæle. See Knee.]
cooling a.
Adapted to cool and refresh; allaying heat.
fecund a.
Fruitful in children; prolific. Graunt. [L. fecundus, from the root of fetus: cf. F. fécond. see Fetus.]
dreamless a.
Free from, or without, dreams. Camden.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

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Form and metre

Upon a wood's dim shaded edge is 74 lines in 4 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJ, complete in 2 of its 4 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%).

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLLMM edgeA · hedgeA · passB · grassB · songC · alongC · screenD · leanD · gladeE · wadeE · treesF · breezeF · sunG · unisonG · spellH · dellH · leavesI · weavesI · gladeJ · shadeJ · dripsK · fingertipsK · suddenlyL · sleepilyL · limbsM · dimsM
  2. 2 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJ goesA · bestowsA · sceneB · leanB · streamC · dreamC · walksD · stalksD · treesE · kneesE · shadeF · gladeF · whiteG · sunlightG · meetH · feetH · thereI · hairI · poolJ · coolJ
  3. 3 AABB--CC fallsA · wallsA · wingsB · singsB · key · quietly · stoneC · overgrownC
  4. 4 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJ skyA · iA · starB · farB · sheepC · deepC · dewD · throughD · airE · hairE · greenF · beenF · seeG · meG · beesH · treesH · hearI · yearI · deepJ · sleepJ
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Upon a wood's dim shaded edge8·····/˘·
Stands a dusty hawthorn hedge7··/˘/··
Beside a road from which I pass8˘/······
To cool my feet in deep rich grass.8········
I pause to listen to the song8···/˘···
Of a brook spilling along7···/˘˘/
Behind a patchy willow screen8···/˘/··
Whose lazy evening shadows lean8·/˘/˘/··
Their scattered gold upon a glade8·/˘·····
Through which the staring daisies wade,8···/˘/˘·
And the resilient poplar trees,8··˘/˘/˘·
Slowly turning in the breeze,7/˘/˘···
Flash their facets to the sun,7··/˘···
Swaying in slow unison.7/˘··/˘˘
Here quietude folds a spell7·/˘˘···
Within a stilly shadowed dell8···/˘/˘·
Wherein I rest, and through the leaves8········
The sun a soundless pattern weaves8···/˘/˘·
Upon the floor. The leafy glade8·····/˘·
Is pensive in the dappled shade,8·/˘···˘·
While the startled sunlight drips8··/˘˘/··
From beech and alder fingertips,8···/˘/˘·
And birches springing suddenly8·/˘/˘/˘˘
Erect in silence sleepily8˘/·/˘/˘˘
Clinging to their slender limbs,7/˘··/˘·
Whitening them as shadow dims.8/˘˘··/··
As I lie here my fancy goes8·····/˘·
To where a quiet oak bestows8···/˘·˘/
Its shadow on a dreaming scene8·/···/˘·
Over which the broad boughs lean7·······
A canopy. The brook's a stream8·/˘˘····
On which long still days lie and dream,8········
And where the lusty summer walks—8···/˘/˘·
Around his head are lilac stalks—8·····/··
In the shade beneath the trees7·······
To let the cool stream fold his knees;8········
While I lie in the leafy shade8·····/˘·
Until the nymphs troop down the glade.8········
Their limbs that in the spring were white8········
Are now burned golden by sunlight.8···/˘·/·
They near the marge, and there they meet8········
Inverted selves stretched at their feet;8˘/˘·····
And they kneel languorously there8········
To comb and braid their short blown hair8········
Before they slip into the pool—8········
Warm gold in silver liquid cool.8···/˘/˘·
Evening turns and sunlight falls7/˘··/··
In flecks between the leafèd walls,7·······
Like golden butterflies whose wings8·/˘/˘···
Slowly pulse and beat. Slow sings7/˘·····
The stream in a lower key7····/˘·
Murmuring down quietly7/˘˘·/˘˘
Between its solemn purple stone8···/˘/˘·
With cooling ivy overgrown.8·/˘/˘·˘/
Sunset stains the western sky;7/···/˘·
Night comes soon, and now I6······
Follow toward the evening star.8/˘···/˘·
A sheep bell tinkles faint and far,8···/˘···
Then drips in silence as the sheep8···/˘···
Move like clouds across the deep7···˘/··
Still dusky meadows wet with dew.8·/˘/····
I stretch and roll and draw through7·······
The fresh sweet grass, and the air7·······
Is softer than my own soft hair.8·/˘·····
I lift up my eyes; the green7·······
West is a lake on which has been8········
Cast a single lily. —See!7··/˘/˘·
In meadows stretching over me8·/·/˘···
Are humming stars as thick as bees,8·/˘·····
And the reaching inky trees7··/˘/˘·
Sweep the sky. I lie and hear7·······
The voices of the fecund year,8·/˘··/˘·
While the dark grows dim and deep,7·······
And I glide into dreamless sleep.8·····/˘·

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