What the Angel Said

Susan Coolidge (1835–1905) · 1889

iambic tetrameter · AABBCCDEDE · 90 lines · from A Few More Verses

THEY sat in the cool of the day to rest,—Adam and Eve, and a nameless guest.The sky o’er the desert was hot and red,But the palm boughs nestled overhead,And the bubbling waters of the wellUp and down in their basin fell,And the goats and the camels browsed at ease,And the confident song birds sang and flewIn the shade of the thick mimosa trees;For fear was not when the world was new.

In the early dawning had come the guest,And whether from east or whether from westThey knew not, nor asked, as he stood and bentAt the entrance of the lowly tent:He had dipped his hand in the bowl of food,He had thanked and praised and called it good;And now between his hosts he sat,And talked of matters so deep and wiseThat Eve looked up from her braiding matWith wonderment in her beautiful eyes.

“All is not lost,” the stranger said,“Though the garden of God be forfeited;Still is there hope for the life of man,Still can he struggle and will and plan,Still can he strain toward the shining goalWhich tempts and beckons his sinewy soul;Still there is work to brace his thews,And love to sweeten the hard-won way,And the power to give, and the right to choose,—And—” He paused; and the rest he did not say.

Then silence fell, for their thoughts were fullOf the fair lost garden beautiful;A homesick silence, which neither brokeTill once again the stranger spoke:“You are strong,” he said, “with the strength of heaven,And the world and its creatures to you are given;You shall win in the fight, though many oppose.You shall tread on the young of the lion’s den,And the desert shall blossom as the rose’Neath your tendance.” And Adam asked: “And then?”

“Then, ripening with the riper age,Your sons, a goodly heritage,Like palm-trees in their stately strength,Shall win to man’s estate at length.Beside thee shall they take their stand,To do thy will, uphold thy hand,To speed thy errands with eager feet,To quit them in their lot like men,With tendance and obedience meet.”Then once more Adam said, “And then?”

“Then, as mild age draws slowly on,And faintly burns thy westering sun,When on the pulse no longer hotFalls quietude which youth knows not,When patience rules the tempered will,And strength is won by sitting still,Then shall a new-born pleasure comeInto thy heart and arms again,As children’s children fill thy home.”Eve smiled; but Adam said, “And then?”

“Then”—and the guest rose up to go—“The best, the last thing shalt thou know:This life of struggle and of fightShall vanish like a wind-blown light;And after brief eclipse shall beRe-lit, to burn more gloriously.Men by a strange, sad name shall callThe darkness, and with bated breathConfront it, but of God’s gifts allAre nothing worth compared with death.”

Even as he spoke his visage gleamedWith light unearthly, and it seemedThat radiant wings, unseen till then,Lifted and bore him from their ken.Awe-struck the solitary twoBeheld him vanish from their view.“It was the angel of the Lord,”They said. “How blind we were and dull!He did not bear the fiery sword;Surely the Lord is pitiful.”

And then? The unrelenting yearsSurged tide-like on, with hopes and fearsAnd labors full, but nevermoreBrought any angel to their door.But still his words within her heartEve kept, and pondered them apart.And when one fatal day they broughtHer Abel to her, cold and dead,She stayed her anguish with this thought:“’Tis God’s best gift, the angel said.”

Words in this poem 22
nameless a.
Without a name; not having been given a name; as, a nameless star.
mimosa n.
A genus of leguminous plants, containing many species, and including the sensitive plants (Mimosa sensitiva, and M. pudica). [NL., fr. Gr. Mime.]
braiding n.
The act of making or using braids.
wonderment n.
Surprise; astonishment; a wonderful appearance; a wonder.
homesick a.
Pining for home; in a nostalgic condition.
broke v. i.
To transact business for another. Brome. [See Broker, and cf. Brook.]
spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
tendance n.
The act of attending or waiting; attendance. [See Tend to attend, and cf. Attendance.]
goodly a.
Pleasant; agreeable; desirable. [OE. godlich, AS. g. See Good, and Like.]
heritage a.
That which is inherited, or passes from heir to heir; inheritance. [OE. heritage, eritage, OF. heritage, eritage, F. héritage, fr. hériter to inherit, LL. heriditare. See Hereditable.]
westering a.
Passing to the west.
quietude n.
Rest; repose; quiet; tranquillity. Shelley. [L. quietudo: cf. F. quiétude.]
shalt
2d per. sing. of Shall.
bated a.
Reduced; lowered; restrained; as, to speak with bated breath.
confront v. t.
To stand facing or in front of; to face; esp. to face hostilely; to oppose with firmness.
visage n.
The face, countenance, or look of a person or an animal; -- chiefly applied to the human face. [F. visage, from L. visus a seeing, a look, fr. videre, visum, to see. See Vision.]
unearthly a.
Not terrestrial; supernatural; preternatural; hence, weird; appalling; terrific; as, an unearthly sight or sound.
unseen a.
Not seen or discovered.
unrelenting a.
Not relenting; unyielding; rigid; hard; stern; cruel.
nevermore adv.
Never again; at no time hereafter. Testament of Love. Tyndale.
stayed a.
Staid; fixed; settled; sober; -- now written staid. See Staid.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

What the Angel Said is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Few More Verses, Project Gutenberg ebook #49518; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Susan Coolidge, What the Angel Said, in A Few More Verses (1889), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #49518, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/coolidge-few-more-verses/what-the-angel-said.html, id L23488.

Form and metre

What the Angel Said is 90 lines in 9 stanzas of 10 lines each. The rhyme scheme is AABBCCDEDE, complete in 5 of its 9 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 82%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDEDE restA · guestA · redB · overheadB · wellC · fellC · easeD · flewE · treesD · newE
  2. 2 AABB--CDCD guestA · westA · bentB · tentB · food · good · satC · wiseD · matC · eyesD
  3. 3 AABBCCDEDE saidA · forfeitedA · manB · planB · goalC · soulC · thewsD · wayE · chooseD · sayE
  4. 4 AABBCCDCDC fullA · beautifulA · brokeB · spokeB · heavenC · givenC · opposeD · denC · roseD · thenC
  5. 5 AABBCCDEDE ageA · heritageA · strengthB · lengthB · standC · handC · feetD · menE · meetD · thenE
  6. 6 --AABBCDCD on · sun · hotA · notA · willB · stillB · comeC · againD · homeC · thenD
  7. 7 AABB--CDCD goA · knowA · fightB · lightB · be · gloriously · callC · breathD · allC · deathD
  8. 8 AABBCCDEDE gleamedA · seemedA · thenB · kenB · twoC · viewC · lordD · dullE · swordD · pitifulE
  9. 9 AABBCCDEDE yearsA · fearsA · nevermoreB · doorB · heartC · apartC · broughtD · deadE · thoughtD · saidE
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
THEY sat in the cool of the day to rest,—10··········
Adam and Eve, and a nameless guest.9/˘····/˘·
The sky o’er the desert was hot and red,10····/˘····
But the palm boughs nestled overhead,9····/˘/˘/
And the bubbling waters of the well9··/˘/˘···
Up and down in their basin fell,8·····/˘·
And the goats and the camels browsed at ease,10·····/˘···
And the confident song birds sang and flew9··/˘·····
In the shade of the thick mimosa trees;10······˘/˘·
For fear was not when the world was new.9·········
In the early dawning had come the guest,10··/˘/˘····
And whether from east or whether from west10··········
They knew not, nor asked, as he stood and bent10··········
At the entrance of the lowly tent:9··/˘··/˘·
He had dipped his hand in the bowl of food,10··········
He had thanked and praised and called it good;9·········
And now between his hosts he sat,8········
And talked of matters so deep and wise9···/˘····
That Eve looked up from her braiding mat9······/˘·
With wonderment in her beautiful eyes.8·/˘··/˘·
“All is not lost,” the stranger said,8·····/˘·
“Though the garden of God be forfeited;9··/˘···/˘
Still is there hope for the life of man,9·········
Still can he struggle and will and plan,9···/˘····
Still can he strain toward the shining goal10·······/˘·
Which tempts and beckons his sinewy soul;9···/˘·/˘·
Still there is work to brace his thews,8········
And love to sweeten the hard-won way,9···/˘····
And the power to give, and the right to choose,—10··/·······
And—” He paused; and the rest he did not say.10··········
Then silence fell, for their thoughts were full9·/˘······
Of the fair lost garden beautiful;9····/˘/˘˘
A homesick silence, which neither broke9·/·/˘·/˘·
Till once again the stranger spoke:8··˘/·/˘·
“You are strong,” he said, “with the strength of heaven,10·········/
And the world and its creatures to you are given;11·····/˘···/
You shall win in the fight, though many oppose.10·······/˘/
You shall tread on the young of the lion’s den,11········/˘·
And the desert shall blossom as the rose10··˘/·/˘···
’Neath your tendance.” And Adam asked: “And then?”10··/˘·/˘···
“Then, ripening with the riper age,8·/˘·····
Your sons, a goodly heritage,8···/˘/˘˘
Like palm-trees in their stately strength,8·····/˘·
Shall win to man’s estate at length.8····˘/··
Beside thee shall they take their stand,8˘/······
To do thy will, uphold thy hand,8····˘/··
To speed thy errands with eager feet,9···/˘·/˘·
To quit them in their lot like men,8········
With tendance and obedience meet.”8·/˘·˘/˘·
Then once more Adam said, “And then?”8···/˘···
“Then, as mild age draws slowly on,8·····/˘·
And faintly burns thy westering sun,8·/˘··/˘·
When on the pulse no longer hot8·····/˘·
Falls quietude which youth knows not,8·/˘˘····
When patience rules the tempered will,8·/˘··/˘·
And strength is won by sitting still,8·····/˘·
Then shall a new-born pleasure come8·····/˘·
Into thy heart and arms again,8······˘/
As children’s children fill thy home.”8·/˘/˘···
Eve smiled; but Adam said, “And then?”8···/˘···
“Then”—and the guest rose up to go—8········
“The best, the last thing shalt thou know:8········
This life of struggle and of fight8···/˘···
Shall vanish like a wind-blown light;8·/˘·····
And after brief eclipse shall be8····˘/··
Re-lit, to burn more gloriously.9·····/˘˘˘
Men by a strange, sad name shall call8········
The darkness, and with bated breath8·/˘··/˘·
Confront it, but of God’s gifts all8˘/······
Are nothing worth compared with death.”8·/˘·˘/··
Even as he spoke his visage gleamed8/····/˘·
With light unearthly, and it seemed8··˘/˘···
That radiant wings, unseen till then,8·/˘·˘/··
Lifted and bore him from their ken.8/˘······
Awe-struck the solitary two8···/˘·˘·
Beheld him vanish from their view.8˘/·/˘···
“It was the angel of the Lord,”8···/˘···
They said. “How blind we were and dull!8········
He did not bear the fiery sword;8·····/˘·
Surely the Lord is pitiful.”8/˘···/˘˘
And then? The unrelenting years8····˘/˘·
Surged tide-like on, with hopes and fears8········
And labors full, but nevermore8·/˘··/˘·
Brought any angel to their door.8·/˘/˘···
But still his words within her heart8········
Eve kept, and pondered them apart.8···/˘·˘/
And when one fatal day they brought8···/˘···
Her Abel to her, cold and dead,8·/˘·····
She stayed her anguish with this thought:8···/˘···
“’Tis God’s best gift, the angel said.”8·····/˘·

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