What Might Have Been

Susan Coolidge (1835–1905) · 1889

iambic tetrameter · 45 lines · from A Few More Verses

SO many things there might have been,Had our dear child not died.We count them up and call them o’er,We weigh the less against the more,—The joy she never knew or shared,The bitter woes forever spared,The dangers turned aside,Heaven’s full security,—and thenPerplexed we sigh,—all might have been.

We might have seen her sweet cheeks glowWith love’s own happy bloom,Her eyes with maiden gladness full,Finding the whole world beautiful;We might have seen the joyance fail,The dear face sadden and grow pale,The smiles fade into gloom,Love’s sun grow dim and sink again,—Either of these it might have been.

We might have seen her with the crownOf wifehood on her head,A queen of home’s fair sovereignties,With little children at her knees;Or, broken-hearted and alone,Bereft and widowed of her own,Mourning beside her dead,—This thing or that, beyond our ken,It might have been, it might have been.

There is no need of question now,No doubts or risks or fears:Safe folded in the Eternal care,Grown fairer each day and more fair,With radiance in the clear young eyesWhich in cool depths of ParadiseLook without stain of tears,Reading the Lord’s intent, and thenSmiling to think what might have been.

We too will smile, O dearest child!Our dull souls may not knowThe deep things hidden from mortal sense,Which feed thy heavenly confidence.On this one sure thought can we rest,That God has chosen for thee the best,Or else it were not so;He called thee back to Heaven againBecause he knew what might have been.

Words in this poem

joyance n.
Enjoyment; gayety; festivity; joyfulness. [OF. joiance.]
sadden v. t.
To make sad. Specifically: (a) To render heavy or cohesive.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

What Might Have Been is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Few More Verses, Project Gutenberg ebook #49518; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Susan Coolidge, What Might Have Been, in A Few More Verses (1889), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #49518, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/coolidge-few-more-verses/what-might-have-been.html, id L23467.

Form and metre

What Might Have Been is 45 lines in 5 stanzas of 9 lines each. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%).

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AB--CCB-A beenA · diedB · o'er · more · sharedC · sparedC · asideB · then · beenA
  2. 2 -ABBCCA-- glow · bloomA · fullB · beautifulB · failC · paleC · gloomA · again · been
  3. 3 -ABBCCA-- crown · headA · sovereigntiesB · kneesB · aloneC · ownC · deadA · ken · been
  4. 4 -ABB--A-- now · fearsA · careB · fairB · eyes · paradise · tearsA · then · been
  5. 5 -ABBCCA-- child · knowA · senseB · confidenceB · restC · bestC · soA · again · been
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
SO many things there might have been,8·/˘·····
Had our dear child not died.7·/˘····
We count them up and call them o’er,8········
We weigh the less against the more,—8········
The joy she never knew or shared,8···/˘···
The bitter woes forever spared,8·/˘·˘/˘·
The dangers turned aside,7·/˘·˘˘/
Heaven’s full security,—and then8/˘·˘/˘··
Perplexed we sigh,—all might have been.8˘/······
We might have seen her sweet cheeks glow8········
With love’s own happy bloom,6···/˘·
Her eyes with maiden gladness full,8···/˘/˘·
Finding the whole world beautiful;8/˘···/˘˘
We might have seen the joyance fail,8·····/˘·
The dear face sadden and grow pale,8···/˘···
The smiles fade into gloom,6······
Love’s sun grow dim and sink again,—8······˘/
Either of these it might have been.8/˘······
We might have seen her with the crown8········
Of wifehood on her head,6·/˘···
A queen of home’s fair sovereignties,8·····/˘˘
With little children at her knees;8·/˘/˘···
Or, broken-hearted and alone,8·/˘/˘·˘/
Bereft and widowed of her own,8˘/·/˘···
Mourning beside her dead,—6/˘·/··
This thing or that, beyond our ken,8······/·
It might have been, it might have been.8········
There is no need of question now,8·····/˘·
No doubts or risks or fears:6······
Safe folded in the Eternal care,9·/˘··˘/˘·
Grown fairer each day and more fair,8·/˘·····
With radiance in the clear young eyes8·/˘·····
Which in cool depths of Paradise8·····/˘·
Look without stain of tears,6······
Reading the Lord’s intent, and then8/˘··˘/··
Smiling to think what might have been.8/˘······
We too will smile, O dearest child!8·····/˘·
Our dull souls may not know7/˘·····
The deep things hidden from mortal sense,9···/˘·/˘·
Which feed thy heavenly confidence.9···/˘˘/˘˘
On this one sure thought can we rest,8········
That God has chosen for thee the best,9···/˘····
Or else it were not so;6······
He called thee back to Heaven again8·····/˘/
Because he knew what might have been.8········

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