At Dawn of Day

Susan Coolidge (1835–1905) · 1889

iambic tetrameter · 32 lines · from A Few More Verses

THE yellow lighthouse star is quenchedAcross the lonely sea;The mountains rend their misty veils,The wind of dawn blows free;The waves beat with a gladder thrill,Pulsing in lines of spray,And fast and far chime on the bar—God bless my Dear to-day!

A thousand leagues may lie betweenA world of distance dim;But speeding with the speeding lightMy heart goes forth to him.Faster than wind or wave it flies,As love and longing may,And undenied stands by his side—God bless my Dear to-day!

God bless him if he wake to smiles,Or if he wake to sighs;Temper his will to bear all fate,And keep him true and wise;Be to him all I fain would beWho am so far away,—Light, counsel, consolation, cheer—God bless my Dear to-day!

The gradual light has grown full fain,And streameth far abroad.The urgence of my voiceless pleaIs gathered up by God.Take some sweet thing which else were mine,Inly I dare to pray,And with it brim his cup of joy—God bless my Dear to-day!

Words in this poem

gladder n.
One who makes glad.
chime n.
The harmonious sound of bells, or of musical instruments. [OE. chimbe, prop., cymbal, OF. cymbe, cymble, in a dialectic form, chymble, F. cymbale, L. cymbalum, fr. Gr. Cymbal.]
fain v. t.
To be glad ; to wish or desire.
voiceless a.
Having no voice, utterance, or vote; silent; mute; dumb.
inly a.
Internal; interior; secret. [OE. inlich, AS. inlic. See In.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

At Dawn of Day is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Few More Verses, Project Gutenberg ebook #49518; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Susan Coolidge, At Dawn of Day, in A Few More Verses (1889), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #49518, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/coolidge-few-more-verses/at-dawn-of-day.html, id L23466.

Form and metre

At Dawn of Day is 32 lines in 4 stanzas of 8 lines each. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A-B-B quenched · seaA · veils · freeA · thrill · sprayB · bar · dayB
  2. 2 -A-A-B-B between · dimA · light · himA · flies · mayB · side · dayB
  3. 3 -A-A-B-B smiles · sighsA · fate · wiseA · be · awayB · cheer · dayB
  4. 4 -----A-A fain · abroad · plea · god · mine · prayA · joy · dayA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
THE yellow lighthouse star is quenched8·/˘/····
Across the lonely sea;6˘/·/˘·
The mountains rend their misty veils,8·/˘··/˘·
The wind of dawn blows free;6······
The waves beat with a gladder thrill,8·····/˘·
Pulsing in lines of spray,6/˘····
And fast and far chime on the bar—8········
God bless my Dear to-day!6······
A thousand leagues may lie between8·/˘·····
A world of distance dim;6···/˘·
But speeding with the speeding light8·/˘··/˘·
My heart goes forth to him.6······
Faster than wind or wave it flies,8/˘······
As love and longing may,6···/˘·
And undenied stands by his side—7·······
God bless my Dear to-day!6······
God bless him if he wake to smiles,8········
Or if he wake to sighs;6······
Temper his will to bear all fate,8/˘······
And keep him true and wise;6······
Be to him all I fain would be8········
Who am so far away,—6····˘/
Light, counsel, consolation, cheer—8·/˘·˘/˘·
God bless my Dear to-day!6······
The gradual light has grown full fain,8·/˘·····
And streameth far abroad.6·/˘·˘/
The urgence of my voiceless plea8·/˘··/˘·
Is gathered up by God.6·/˘···
Take some sweet thing which else were mine,8········
Inly I dare to pray,6/˘····
And with it brim his cup of joy—8········
God bless my Dear to-day!6······

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