Rustic Fishing

John Clare (1793–1864) · 1820–1835

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 80 lines · from Poems

On Sunday mornings, freed from hard employ,How oft I mark the mischievous young boyWith anxious haste his pole and lines provide,For make-shifts oft crook’d pins to thread were tied;And delve his knife with wishes ever warmIn rotten dunghills for the grub and worm,The harmless treachery of his hooks to bait;Tracking the dewy grass with many a mate,To seek the brook that down the meadows glides,Where the grey willow shadows by its sides,Where flag and reed in wild disorder spread,And bending bulrush bows its taper head;And, just above the surface of the floods,Where water-lilies mount their snowy buds,On whose broad swimming leaves of glossy greenThe shining dragon-fly is often seen:Where hanging thorns, with roots wash’d bare, appear,That shield the moor-hen’s nest from year to year;While crowding osiers mingling wild amongProve snug asylums to her brood when young,Who, when surpris’d by foes approaching near,Plunge ’neath the weeping boughs and disappear.There far from terrors that the parson brings,Or church bell hearing when its summons rings,Half hid in meadow-sweet and keck’s high flowers,In lonely sport they spend the Sunday hours.Though ill supplied for fishing seem the brook,That breaks the mead in many a stinted crook,Oft choak’d in weeds, and foil’d to find a road,The choice retirement of the snake and toad,Then lost in shallows dimpling restlessly,In fluttering struggles murmuring to be free,--O’er gravel stones its depth can scarcely hideIt runs remnant of its broken tide,Till, seemly weary of each choak’d control,It rests collected in some gulled holeScoop’d by the sudden floods when winter’s snowMelts in confusion by a hasty thaw;There bent in hopeful musings on the brinkThey watch their floating corks that seldom sink,Save when a wary roach or silver breamNibbles the worm as passing up the stream,Just urging expectation’s hopes to stayTo view the dodging cork, then slink away;Still hopes keep burning with untir’d delight,Still wobbling curves keep wavering like a bite:If but the breezy wind their floats should spring,And move the water with a troubling ring,A captive fish still fills the anxious eyesAnd willow-wicks lie ready for the prize;Till evening gales awaken damp and chill,And nip the hopes that morning suns instil;And resting flies have tired their gauzy wing,Nor longer tempt the watching fish to spring,Who at the worm no nibbles more repeat,But lunge from night in sheltering flag-retreat.Then disappointed in their day’s employ,They seek amusement in a feebler joy.Short is the sigh for fancies prov’d untrue:With humbler hopes still pleasure they pursueWhere the rude oak-bridge scales the narrow passHalf hid in rustling reeds and scrambling grass,Or stepping stones stride o’er the narrow sloughsWhich maidens daily cross to milk their cows;There they in artless glee for minnows run,And wade and dabble past the setting sun;Chasing the struttle o’er the shallow tide,And flat stones turning up where gudgeons hide.All former hopes their ill success delay’d,In this new change they fancy well repaid.And thus they wade, and chatter o’er their joysTill night, unlook’d-for, young success destroys,Drives home the sons of solitude and streams,And stops uncloy’d hope’s ever-fresh’ning dreams.They then, like school-boys that at truant play,In sloomy fear lounge on their homeward way,And inly tremble, as they gain the town,Where chastisement awaits with many a frown,And hazel twigs, in readiness prepar’d,For their long absence brings a meet reward.

Words in this poem 19
bulrush n.
A kind of large rush, growing in wet land or in water. [OE. bulrysche, bolroysche; of uncertain origin, perh. fr. bole stem + rush.]
snowy a.
White like snow.
thaw v. i.
To melt, dissolve, or become fluid; to soften; -- said of that which is frozen; as, the ice thaws.
hopeful a.
Full of hope, or agreeable expectation; inclined to hope; expectant.
brink n.
The edge, margin, or border of a steep place, as of a precipice; a bank or edge, as of a river or pit; a verge; a border; as, the brink of a chasm. Also Fig. [Dan. brink edge, verge; akin to Sw. brink declivity, hill, Icel. brekka; cf. LG. brink a grassy hill, W. bryn hill, bryncyn hillock.]
roach v. t.
To cause to arch.
slink v. t.
To creep away meanly; to steal away; to sneak. [AS. slincan; probably akin to G. schleichen, E. sleek. See Sleek, a.]
breezy a.
Characterized by, or having, breezes; airy.
gauzy a.
Pertaining to, or resembling, gauze; thin and slight as gauze.
disappointed a.
Defeated of expectation or hope; balked; as, a disappointed person or hope.
amusement n.
Deep thought; muse. [Cf. F. amusement.]
humbler n.
One who, or that which, humbles some one.
scrambling a.
Confused and irregular; awkward; scambling.
stride v. t.
To walk with long steps, especially in a measured or pompous manner. [AS. stridan to stride, to strive; akin to LG. striden, OFries. strida to strive, D. strijden to strive, to contend, G. streiten, OHG. stritan; of uncertain orig]
glee n.
Music; minstrelsy; entertainment.
wade n.
Woad. Mortimer.
sloomy a.
Sluggish; slow.
homeward a.
Being in the direction of home; as, the homeward way.
inly a.
Internal; interior; secret. [OE. inlich, AS. inlic. See In.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Rustic Fishing is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #52601; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: John Clare, Rustic Fishing, in Poems (1820–1835), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #52601, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/clare-poems/rustic-fishing.html, id L06672.

Form and metre

Rustic Fishing is 80 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 88% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 19% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB--CCDDEEFFGGHHIIHHJJKKLLMM--NNOO--PPQQRRSSTTUUVVWWXXYYZZaa--bbccddeeffgghh-- employA · boyA · provideB · tiedB · warm · worm · baitC · mateC · glidesD · sidesD · spreadE · headE · floodsF · budsF · greenG · seenG · appearH · yearH · amongI · youngI · nearH · disappearH · bringsJ · ringsJ · flowersK · hoursK · brookL · crookL · roadM · toadM · restlessly · free · hideN · tideN · controlO · holeO · snow · thaw · brinkP · sinkP · breamQ · streamQ · stayR · awayR · delightS · biteS · springT · ringT · eyesU · prizeU · chillV · instilV · wingW · springW · repeatX · retreatX · employY · joyY · untrueZ · pursueZ · passa · grassa · sloughs · cows · runb · sunb · tidec · hidec · delay'dd · repaidd · joyse · destroyse · streamsf · dreamsf · playg · wayg · townh · frownh · prepar'd · reward
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
On Sunday mornings, freed from hard employ,10·/·/˘···˘/
How oft I mark the mischievous young boy10·····/˘˘··
With anxious haste his pole and lines provide,10·/˘·····˘/
For make-shifts oft crook’d pins to thread were tied;11····/˘·····
And delve his knife with wishes ever warm10·····/˘/˘·
In rotten dunghills for the grub and worm,10·/˘·······
The harmless treachery of his hooks to bait;10·/˘/˘·····
Tracking the dewy grass with many a mate,10/˘·/˘··/··
To seek the brook that down the meadows glides,10·······/··
Where the grey willow shadows by its sides,10···/·/····
Where flag and reed in wild disorder spread,10······˘/˘·
And bending bulrush bows its taper head;10·/˘/˘··/˘·
And, just above the surface of the floods,10·····/˘···
Where water-lilies mount their snowy buds,10·/˘/˘··/˘·
On whose broad swimming leaves of glossy green10···/˘··/˘·
The shining dragon-fly is often seen:10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Where hanging thorns, with roots wash’d bare, appear,10·/˘·····˘/
That shield the moor-hen’s nest from year to year;10··········
While crowding osiers mingling wild among10·/˘··/˘···
Prove snug asylums to her brood when young,10··˘/˘·····
Who, when surpris’d by foes approaching near,10··˘/··˘/˘·
Plunge ’neath the weeping boughs and disappear.10···/˘···˘/
There far from terrors that the parson brings,10···/˘··/˘·
Or church bell hearing when its summons rings,10···/˘··/˘·
Half hid in meadow-sweet and keck’s high flowers,11···/·····/˘
In lonely sport they spend the Sunday hours.11·/˘····/·/˘
Though ill supplied for fishing seem the brook,10··˘/·/˘···
That breaks the mead in many a stinted crook,10·····/·/˘·
Oft choak’d in weeds, and foil’d to find a road,10··········
The choice retirement of the snake and toad,10··˘/˘·····
Then lost in shallows dimpling restlessly,11···/˘/˘˘/˘˘
In fluttering struggles murmuring to be free,--10·/˘/˘/˘···
O’er gravel stones its depth can scarcely hide10·/˘····/˘·
It runs remnant of its broken tide,9··/˘··/˘·
Till, seemly weary of each choak’d control,10·/˘/˘···˘/
It rests collected in some gulled hole10··˘/˘···˘·
Scoop’d by the sudden floods when winter’s snow10···/˘··/˘·
Melts in confusion by a hasty thaw;10··˘/˘··/˘·
There bent in hopeful musings on the brink10···/˘/˘···
They watch their floating corks that seldom sink,10···/˘··/˘·
Save when a wary roach or silver bream10···/˘··/˘·
Nibbles the worm as passing up the stream,10/˘···/˘···
Just urging expectation’s hopes to stay10·/˘·˘/˘···
To view the dodging cork, then slink away;10···/˘···˘/
Still hopes keep burning with untir’d delight,10···/˘···˘/
Still wobbling curves keep wavering like a bite:10·/˘··/˘···
If but the breezy wind their floats should spring,10···/˘·····
And move the water with a troubling ring,10···/˘··/˘·
A captive fish still fills the anxious eyes10·/˘····/˘·
And willow-wicks lie ready for the prize;10·/···/˘···
Till evening gales awaken damp and chill,10·/˘·˘/˘···
And nip the hopes that morning suns instil;10·····/˘···
And resting flies have tired their gauzy wing,10·/˘··/·/˘·
Nor longer tempt the watching fish to spring,10·/˘··/˘···
Who at the worm no nibbles more repeat,10·····/˘·˘/
But lunge from night in sheltering flag-retreat.10·····/˘·˘/
Then disappointed in their day’s employ,10··˘/˘···˘/
They seek amusement in a feebler joy.10··˘/˘·····
Short is the sigh for fancies prov’d untrue:10·····/˘·˘/
With humbler hopes still pleasure they pursue10·/˘··/˘·˘/
Where the rude oak-bridge scales the narrow pass10·······/˘·
Half hid in rustling reeds and scrambling grass,10···/˘··/˘·
Or stepping stones stride o’er the narrow sloughs10·/˘····/˘·
Which maidens daily cross to milk their cows;10·/˘/˘·····
There they in artless glee for minnows run,10···/˘··/˘·
And wade and dabble past the setting sun;10···/˘··/˘·
Chasing the struttle o’er the shallow tide,10/˘·····/˘·
And flat stones turning up where gudgeons hide.10···/˘··/˘·
All former hopes their ill success delay’d,10·/˘···˘/˘/
In this new change they fancy well repaid.10·····/˘·˘/
And thus they wade, and chatter o’er their joys10·····/˘···
Till night, unlook’d-for, young success destroys,10······˘/˘/
Drives home the sons of solitude and streams,10·····/˘···
And stops uncloy’d hope’s ever-fresh’ning dreams.10·····/˘···
They then, like school-boys that at truant play,10·······/˘·
In sloomy fear lounge on their homeward way,10·/˘····/˘·
And inly tremble, as they gain the town,10·/˘/˘·····
Where chastisement awaits with many a frown,10·/˘˘˘/·/··
And hazel twigs, in readiness prepar’d,10·/˘··/˘˘˘/
For their long absence brings a meet reward.10···/˘···˘/

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