Maid of Athens, Ere We Part

Lord Byron (1788–1824) · 1816

trochaic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 20 lines · from The Giaour, and Other Poems

Maid of Athens, ere we part,Give, oh give me back my heart!Or, since that has left my breast,Keep it now, and take the rest!Hear my vow before I go,

By those tresses unconfined,Wooed by each AEgean wind;By those lids whose jetty fringeKiss thy soft cheeks' blooming tinge;By those wild eyes like the roe,

By that lip I long to taste;By that zone-encircled waist;By all the token-flowers that tellWhat words can never speak so well;By love's alternate joy and woe,

Maid of Athens! I am gone:Think of me, sweet! when alone.Though I fly to Istambol,Athens holds my heart and soul:Can I cease to love thee? No!

Words in this poem

jetty v. i.
To jut out; to project. Florio.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Maid of Athens, Ere We Part is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Works of Lord Byron. Vol. 3, Project Gutenberg ebook #21811; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Maid of Athens, Ere We Part is 20 lines in 4 stanzas of 5 lines each. It is in rhyming couplets, 60% of the lines. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%).

See other poems in rhyming couplets, other poems in trochaic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBC partA · heartA · breastB · restB · goC
  2. 2 DDEEC unconfinedD · windD · fringeE · tingeE · roeC
  3. 3 FFGGC tasteF · waistF · tellG · wellG · woeC
  4. 4 ----C gone · alone · istambol · soul · noC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Maid of Athens, ere we part,7··/˘···
Give, oh give me back my heart!7·······
Or, since that has left my breast,7·······
Keep it now, and take the rest!7·······
Hear my vow before I go,7·······
By those tresses unconfined,8··/˘·˘/˘
Wooed by each AEgean wind;8·˘··˘/˘·
By those lids whose jetty fringe7····/˘·
Kiss thy soft cheeks' blooming tinge;7····/˘·
By those wild eyes like the roe,7·······
By that lip I long to taste;7·······
By that zone-encircled waist;8···˘/˘˘·
By all the token-flowers that tell8···/˘/··
What words can never speak so well;8···/˘···
By love's alternate joy and woe,8··/˘····
Maid of Athens! I am gone:7··/˘···
Think of me, sweet! when alone.7·····˘/
Though I fly to Istambol,7·······
Athens holds my heart and soul:7/˘·····
Can I cease to love thee? No!7·······

On this poem

[The Maid of Athens was, it is supposed, the eldest of three sisters, daughters of Theodora Macri, the widow of a former English vice-consul. Byron and Hobhouse lodged at her house. The sisters were sought out and described by the artist, Hugh W. Williams, who visited Athens in May, 1817: "Theresa, the Maid of Athens, Catinco, and Mariana, are of middle stature.... The two eldest have black, or dark hair and eyes; their visage oval, and complexion somewhat pale, with teeth of pearly whiteness. Their cheeks are rounded, their noses straight, rather inclined to aquiline. The youngest, Mariana, is very fair, her face not so finely rounded, but has a gayer expression than her sisters', whose countenances, except when the conversation has something of mirth in it, may be said to be rather pensive. Their persons are elegant, and their manners pleasing and lady-like, such as would be fascinating in any country. They possess very considerable powers of conversation, and their minds seem to be more instructed than those of the Greek women in general."--Travels in Italy, Greece, etc., ii. 291, 292.

Other travellers, Hughes, who visited Athens in 1813, and Walsh (Narrative of a Resident in Constantinople, i. 122), who saw Theresa in 1821, found her charming and interesting, but speak of her beauty as a thing of the past. "She married an Englishman named Black, employed in H.M. Consular Service at Mesolonghi. She survived her husband and fell into great poverty.... Theresa Black died October 15, 1875, aged 80 years." (See Letters, 1898, i. 269, 270, note 1; and Life, p. 105, note.)

"Maid of Athens" is possibly the best-known of Byron's short poems, all over the English-speaking world. This is no doubt due in part to its having been set to music by about half a dozen composers--the latest of whom was Gounod.]
Notes from the edition 2

E. H. Coleridge's notes to The Works of Lord Byron, Poetry, Vol. III (John Murray, 1900; Project Gutenberg #21811). Bracketed passages are the editor's; unbracketed are Byron's own or earlier editors'. Lettered variant readings (manuscript and edition collations) are not harvested here, matching the treatment of Coleridge's Don Juan notes.

  1. Stanza 3, line 3 In the East (where ladies are not taught to write, lest they should scribble assignations), flowers, cinders, pebbles, etc., convey the sentiments of the parties, by that universal deputy of Mercury--an old woman. A cinder says, "I burn for thee;" a bunch of flowers tied with hair, "Take me and fly;" but a pebble declares--what nothing else can. [Compare The Bride of Abydos, line 295--

    "What! not receive my foolish flower?"

    See, too, Medwin's story of "one of the principal incidents in The Giaour." "I was in despair, and could hardly contrive to get a cinder, or a token-flower sent to express it."--Conversations of Lord Byron, 1824, p. 122.]
  2. Stanza 4, line 3 Constantinople. [Compare--

    "Tho' I am parted, yet my mind That's more than self still stays behind."

    Poems, by Thomas Carew, ed. 1640, p. 36.]

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