A Death-Scene
"O day! he cannot dieWhen thou so fair art shining!O Sun, in such a glorious sky,So tranquilly declining;
He cannot leave thee now,While fresh west winds are blowing,And all around his youthful browThy cheerful light is glowing!
Edward, awake, awake--The golden evening gleamsWarm and bright on Arden's lake--Arouse thee from thy dreams!
Beside thee, on my knee,My dearest friend, I prayThat thou, to cross the eternal sea,Wouldst yet one hour delay:
I hear its billows roar--I see them foaming high;But no glimpse of a further shoreHas blest my straining eye.
Believe not what they urgeOf Eden isles beyond;Turn back, from that tempestuous surge,To thy own native land.
It is not death, but painThat struggles in thy breast--Nay, rally, Edward, rouse again;I cannot let thee rest!"
One long look, that sore reproved meFor the woe I could not bear--One mute look of suffering moved meTo repent my useless prayer:
And, with sudden check, the heavingOf distraction passed away;Not a sign of further grievingStirred my soul that awful day.
Paled, at length, the sweet sun setting;Sunk to peace the twilight breeze:Summer dews fell softly, wettingGlen, and glade, and silent trees.
Then his eyes began to weary,Weighed beneath a mortal sleep;And their orbs grew strangely dreary,Clouded, even as they would weep.
But they wept not, but they changed not,Never moved, and never closed;Troubled still, and still they ranged not--Wandered not, nor yet reposed!
So I knew that he was dying--Stooped, and raised his languid head;Felt no breath, and heard no sighing,So I knew that he was dead.
Words in this poem
- glorious a.
- Exhibiting attributes, qualities, or acts that are worthy of or receive glory; noble; praiseworthy; excellent; splendid; illustrious; inspiring admiration; as, glorious deeds. [OF. glorios, glorious, F. glorieux, fr. L. gloriosus. See Glory, n.]
- tranquilly adv.
- In a tranquil manner; calmly.
- eden n.
- The garden where Adam and Eve first dwelt; hence, a delightful region or residence. [Heb. eden delight, pleasure; also, a place of pleasure, Eden.]
- rally v. t.
- To collect, and reduce to order, as troops dispersed or thrown into confusion; to gather again; to reunite. [OF. ralier, F. rallier, fr. L. pref. re- + ad + ligare to bind. See Ra-, and 1st Ally.]
- repent a.
- Prostrate and rooting; -- said of stems. Gray. [L. repens, -entis, creeping, p. pr. of repere to creep.]
- distraction n.
- The act of distracting; a drawing apart; separation. [L. distractio: cf. F. distraction.]
- glade n.
- An open passage through a wood; a grassy open or cleared space in a forest. [Prob. of Scand. origin, and akin to glad, a.; cf. also W. golead, goleuad, a lighting, illumination, fr. goleu light, clear, bright, goleu fwlch glade, lit., a ]
- strangely adv.
- As something foreign, or not one's own; in a manner adapted to something foreign and strange.
- dreary a.
- Sorrowful; distressful. [OE. dreori, dreri, AS. dreórig, sad; akin to G. traurig, and prob. to AS. dreósan to fall, Goth. driusan. Cf. Dross, Drear, Drizzle, Drowse.]
- reposed a.
- Composed; calm; tranquil; at rest.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
A Death-Scene is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems by Currer, Ellis, and Acton Bell, Project Gutenberg ebook #1019; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Charlotte, Emily and Anne Brontë, A Death-Scene, in Poems by Currer, Ellis, and Acton Bell (1846), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #1019, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/bronte-poems/a-death-scene.html, id L13235.
Form and metre
A Death-Scene is 52 lines in 13 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 12 of its 13 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 87%). 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.2 syllables. 12 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 23% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABAB dieA · shiningB · skyA · decliningB
- 2 ABAB nowA · blowingB · browA · glowingB
- 3 ABAB awakeA · gleamsB · lakeA · dreamsB
- 4 ABAB kneeA · prayB · seaA · delayB
- 5 ABAB roarA · highB · shoreA · eyeB
- 6 A-A- urgeA · beyond · surgeA · land
- 7 ABAB painA · breastB · againA · restB
- 8 ABAB meA · bearB · meA · prayerB
- 9 ABAB heavingA · awayB · grievingA · dayB
- 10 ABAB settingA · breezeB · wettingA · treesB
- 11 ABAB wearyA · sleepB · drearyA · weepB
- 12 ABAB notA · closedB · notA · reposedB
- 13 ABAB dyingA · headB · sighingA · deadB
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| "O day! he cannot die | 6 | ···/˘· |
| When thou so fair art shining! | 7 | ·····/˘ |
| O Sun, in such a glorious sky, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| So tranquilly declining; | 7 | ·/˘˘˘/˘ |
| He cannot leave thee now, | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| While fresh west winds are blowing, | 7 | ·····/˘ |
| And all around his youthful brow | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Thy cheerful light is glowing! | 7 | ·/˘··/˘ |
| Edward, awake, awake-- | 6 | /˘˘/˘/ |
| The golden evening gleams | 6 | ·/˘/˘· |
| Warm and bright on Arden's lake-- | 7 | ····/˘· |
| Arouse thee from thy dreams! | 6 | ˘/···· |
| Beside thee, on my knee, | 6 | ˘/···· |
| My dearest friend, I pray | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| That thou, to cross the eternal sea, | 9 | ·····˘/˘· |
| Wouldst yet one hour delay: | 7 | ···/˘˘/ |
| I hear its billows roar-- | 6 | ···/˘· |
| I see them foaming high; | 6 | ···/˘· |
| But no glimpse of a further shore | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Has blest my straining eye. | 6 | ···/˘· |
| Believe not what they urge | 6 | ˘/···· |
| Of Eden isles beyond; | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| Turn back, from that tempestuous surge, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| To thy own native land. | 6 | ···/˘· |
| It is not death, but pain | 6 | ······ |
| That struggles in thy breast-- | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| Nay, rally, Edward, rouse again; | 8 | ·/˘/˘·˘/ |
| I cannot let thee rest!" | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| One long look, that sore reproved me | 8 | ········ |
| For the woe I could not bear-- | 7 | ······· |
| One mute look of suffering moved me | 8 | ····/˘·· |
| To repent my useless prayer: | 7 | ·˘/·/˘· |
| And, with sudden check, the heaving | 8 | ··/˘··/˘ |
| Of distraction passed away; | 8 | ·˘/˘·˘˘/ |
| Not a sign of further grieving | 8 | ····/˘/˘ |
| Stirred my soul that awful day. | 8 | ·˘···/˘· |
| Paled, at length, the sweet sun setting; | 8 | ······/˘ |
| Sunk to peace the twilight breeze: | 7 | ····/·· |
| Summer dews fell softly, wetting | 8 | /˘··/˘/˘ |
| Glen, and glade, and silent trees. | 7 | ····/˘· |
| Then his eyes began to weary, | 8 | ···˘/·/˘ |
| Weighed beneath a mortal sleep; | 8 | ·˘···/˘· |
| And their orbs grew strangely dreary, | 8 | ····/˘/˘ |
| Clouded, even as they would weep. | 8 | /˘/˘···· |
| But they wept not, but they changed not, | 8 | ········ |
| Never moved, and never closed; | 8 | /˘·˘·/˘· |
| Troubled still, and still they ranged not-- | 8 | /˘······ |
| Wandered not, nor yet reposed! | 8 | /˘˘···/· |
| So I knew that he was dying-- | 8 | ······/˘ |
| Stooped, and raised his languid head; | 8 | ·˘···/˘· |
| Felt no breath, and heard no sighing, | 8 | ······/˘ |
| So I knew that he was dead. | 7 | ······· |
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