A Cloud

Robert Bridges (1844–1930) · 1873–1912

iambic tetrameter · 219 lines · from Poetical Works

But were I thou, O ocean,I would not chafe and fretAs thou, because a limitTo thy desires is set.

I would be blue, and gentle,Patient, and calm, and seeIf my smiles might not tempt her,My love, to come to me.

I'd make my depths transparent,And still, that she should leanO'er the boat's edge to ponderThe sights that swam between.

I would command strange creatures,Of bright hue and quick fin,To stir the water near her,And tempt her bare arm in.

I'd teach her spend the summerWith me: and I can tell,That, were I thou, O ocean,My love should love me well.

But on the mad cloud scudded,The breeze it blew so stiff;And the sad ocean bellowed,And pounded at the cliff.

I heard a linnet courtingHis lady in the spring:His mates were idly sporting,Nor stayed to hear him singHis song of love.--I fear my speech distortingHis tender love.

The phrases of his pleadingWere full of young delight;And she that gave him heedingInterpreted arightHis gay, sweet notes,--So sadly marred in the reading,--His tender notes.

And when he ceased, the hearerAwaited the refrain,Till swiftly perching nearerHe sang his song again,His pretty song:--Would that my verse spake clearerHis tender song!

Ye happy, airy creatures!That in the merry springThink not of what misfeaturesOr cares the year may bring;But unto loveResign your simple natures,To tender love.

Dear lady, when thou frownest,And my true love despisest,And all thy vows disownestThat sealed my venture wisest;I think thy pride's displeasureNeglects a matchless treasureExceeding price and measure.

But when again thou smilest,And love for love returnest,And fear with joy beguilest,And takest truth in earnest;Then, though I sheer adore thee,The sum of my love for theeSeems poor, scant, and unworthy.

I will not let thee go.Ends all our month-long love in this?Can it be summed up so,Quit in a single kiss?I will not let thee go.

I will not let thee go.If thy words' breath could scare thy deeds,As the soft south can blowAnd toss the feathered seeds,Then might I let thee go.

I will not let thee go.Had not the great sun seen, I might;Or were he reckoned slowTo bring the false to light,Then might I let thee go.

I will not let thee go.The stars that crowd the summer skiesHave watched us so belowWith all their million eyes,I dare not let thee go.

I will not let thee go.Have we not chid the changeful moon,Now rising late, and nowBecause she set too soon,And shall I let thee go?

I will not let thee go.Have not the young flowers been content,Plucked ere their buds could blow,To seal our sacrament?I cannot let thee go.

I will not let thee go.I hold thee by too many bands:Thou sayest farewell, and lo!I have thee by the hands,And will not let thee go.

I found to-day out walkingThe flower my love loves best.What, when I stooped to pluck it,Could dare my hand arrest?

Was it a snake lay curlingAbout the root's thick crown?Or did some hidden brambleTear my hand reaching down?

There was no snake uncurling,And no thorn wounded me;'Twas my heart checked me, sighingShe is beyond the sea.

A poppy grows upon the shore,Bursts her twin cup in summer late:Her leaves are glaucous-green and hoar,Her petals yellow, delicate.

Oft to her cousins turns her thought,In wonder if they care that sheIs fed with spray for dew, and caughtBy every gale that sweeps the sea.

She has no lovers like the red,That dances with the noble corn:Her blossoms on the waves are shed,Where she stands shivering and forlorn.

Sometimes when my lady sits by meMy rapture's so great, that I tearMy mind from the thought that she's nigh me,And strive to forget that she's there.And sometimes when she is awayHer absence so sorely does try me,That I shut to my eyes, and assayTo think she is there sitting by me.

Long are the hours the sun is above,But when evening comes I go home to my love.

I'm away the daylight hours and more,Yet she comes not down to open the door.

She does not meet me upon the stair,--She sits in my chamber and waits for me there.

As I enter the room she does not move:I always walk straight up to my love;

And she lets me take my wonted placeAt her side, and gaze in her dear dear face.

There as I sit, from her head thrown backHer hair falls straight in a shadow black.

Aching and hot as my tired eyes be,She is all that I wish to see.

And in my wearied and toil-dinned ear,She says all things that I wish to hear.

Dusky and duskier grows the room,Yet I see her best in the darker gloom.

When the winter eves are early and cold,The firelight hours are a dream of gold.

And so I sit here night by night,In rest and enjoyment of love's delight.

But a knock at the door, a step on the stairWill startle, alas, my love from her chair.

If a stranger comes she will not stay:At the first alarm she is off and away.

And he wonders, my guest, usurping her throne,That I sit so much by myself alone.

Who has not walked upon the shore,And who does not the morning know,The day the angry gale is o'er,The hour the wind has ceased to blow?

The horses of the strong south-westAre pastured round his tropic tent,Careless how long the ocean's breastSob on and sigh for passion spent.

The frightened birds, that fled inlandTo house in rock and tower and tree,Are gathering on the peaceful strand,To tempt again the sunny sea;

Whereon the timid ships steal outAnd laugh to find their foe asleep,That lately scattered them about,And drave them to the fold like sheep.

The snow-white clouds he northward chasedBreak into phalanx, line, and band:All one way to the south they haste,The south, their pleasant fatherland.

From distant hills their shadows creep,Arrive in turn and mount the lea,And flit across the downs, and leapSheer off the cliff upon the sea;

And sail and sail far out of sight.But still I watch their fleecy trains,That piling all the south with light,Dapple in France the fertile plains.

I made another song,In likeness of my love:And sang it all day long,Around, beneath, above;I told my secret out,That none might be in doubt.

I sang it to the sky,That veiled his face to hearHow far her azure eyeOutdoes his splendid sphere;But at her eyelids' nameHis white clouds fled for shame.

I told it to the trees,And to the flowers confest,And said not one of theseIs like my lily drest;Nor spathe nor petal daredVie with her body bared.

I shouted to the sea,That set his waves a-prance;Her floating hair is free,Free are her feet to dance;And for thy wrath, I swearHer frown is more to fear.

And as in happy moodI walked and sang alone,At eve beside the woodI met my love, my own:And sang to her the songI had sung all day long.

Words in this poem 26
stayed a.
Staid; fixed; settled; sober; -- now written staid. See Staid.
aright adv.
Rightly; correctly; in a right way or form; without mistake or crime; as, to worship God aright. [Pref. a- + right.]
sadly adv.
Wearily; heavily; firmly.
clearer n.
One who, or that which, clears.
adore v. t.
To worship with profound reverence; to pay divine honors to; to honor as deity or as divine. [OE. aouren, anouren, adoren, OF. aorer, adorer, F. adorer, fr. L. adorare; ad + orare to speak, pray, os, oris, mouth. In OE. confused with honor, the French pr]
scare v. t.
To frighten; to strike with sudden fear; to alarm. [OE. skerren, skeren, Icel. skirra to bar, prevent, skirrask to shun , shrink from; or fr. OE. skerre, adj., scared, Icel. skjarr; both perhaps akin to E. sheer ]
changeful a.
Full of change; mutable; inconstant; fickle; uncertain.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
sacrament n.
The oath of allegiance taken by Roman soldiers; hence, a sacred ceremony used to impress an obligation; a solemn oath-taking; an oath. [L. sacramentum an oath, a sacred thing, a mystery, a sacrament, fr. sacrare to declare as sacred, sacer sacred: cf. F. sacrament. See Sacred.]
bramble n.
Any plant of the genus Rubus, including the raspberry and blackberry. Hence: Any rough, prickly shrub. [OE. brembil, AS.brbramal), fr. the same root as E. broom, As. br. See Broom.]
hoar v. t.
To become moldy or musty. [AS. harian to grow gray.]
forlorn a.
Deserted abandoned; lost. [OE., p.p. of forlesen to lose utterly, AS. forleósan (p.p. forloren); pref. for- + leósan (in comp.) to lose; cf. D. verliezen to lose, G. verlieren, Sw. förlor]
sorely adv.
In a sore manner; grievously; painfully; as, to be sorely afflicted.
daylight n.
The light of day as opposed to the darkness of night; the light of the sun, as opposed to that of the moon or to artificial light.
wonted a.
Accustomed; customary; usual.
aching a.
That aches; continuously painful. See Ache.
angry a.
Troublesome; vexatious; rigorous. [See Anger.]
sunny a.
Of or pertaining to the sun; proceeding from, or resembling the sun; hence, shining; bright; brilliant; radiant.
whereon adv.
On which; -- used relatively; as, the earth whereon we live.
drave
, old imp. of Drive.
northward a.
Toward the north; nearer to the north than to the east or west point. [AS. noredhweard.]
fatherland n.
One's native land; the native land of one's fathers or ancestors. [Imitated fr. D. vaderland. See Father, and Land.]
flit a.
Nimble; quick; swift. See Fleet.
fleecy a.
Covered with, made of, or resembling, a fleece.
dapple n.
One of the spots on a dappled animal. [Cf. Icel. depill a spot, a dot, a dog with spots over the eyes, dapi a pool, and E. dimple.]
veiled a.
Covered by, or as by, a veil; hidden.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

A Cloud is 219 lines in 52 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 98% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.2 syllables. 41 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 25% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -AAA ocean · fretA · limitA · setA
  2. 2 -A-A gentle · seeA · her · meA
  3. 3 -A-A transparent · leanA · ponder · betweenA
  4. 4 -A-A creatures · finA · her · inA
  5. 5 -A-A summer · tellA · ocean · wellA
  6. 6 -A-A scudded · stiffA · bellowed · cliffA
  7. 7 ABABCAC courtingA · springB · sportingA · singB · loveC · distortingA · loveC
  8. 8 ABABCAC pleadingA · delightB · heedingA · arightB · notesC · readingA · notesC
  9. 9 ABABCAC hearerA · refrainB · nearerA · againB · songC · clearerA · songC
  10. 10 ABABC-C creaturesA · springB · misfeaturesA · bringB · loveC · natures · loveC
  11. 11 ----AAA frownest · despisest · disownest · wisest · displeasureA · treasureA · measureA
  12. 12 ABABCC- smilestA · returnestB · beguilestA · earnestB · theeC · theeC · unworthy
  13. 13 ABABA goA · thisB · soA · kissB · goA
  14. 14 ABABA goA · deedsB · blowA · seedsB · goA
  15. 15 ABABA goA · mightB · slowA · lightB · goA
  16. 16 ABABA goA · skiesB · belowA · eyesB · goA
  17. 17 AB-BA goA · moonB · now · soonB · goA
  18. 18 A-A-A goA · content · blowA · sacrament · goA
  19. 19 ABABA goA · bandsB · loA · handsB · goA
  20. 20 -A-A walking · bestA · it · arrestA
  21. 21 -A-A curling · crownA · bramble · downA
  22. 22 ABAB uncurlingA · meB · sighingA · seaB
  23. 23 ABAB shoreA · lateB · hoarA · delicateB
  24. 24 ABAB thoughtA · sheB · caughtA · seaB
  25. 25 ABAB redA · cornB · shedA · forlornB
  26. 26 ABAB-A-A meA · tearB · meA · thereB · away · meA · assay · meA
  27. 27 AA aboveA · loveA
  28. 28 AA moreA · doorA
  29. 29 AA stairA · thereA
  30. 30 AA moveA · loveA
  31. 31 AA placeA · faceA
  32. 32 AA backA · blackA
  33. 33 AA beA · seeA
  34. 34 AA earA · hearA
  35. 35 AA roomA · gloomA
  36. 36 AA coldA · goldA
  37. 37 AA nightA · delightA
  38. 38 AA stairA · chairA
  39. 39 AA stayA · awayA
  40. 40 AA throneA · aloneA
  41. 41 -A-A shore · knowA · o'er · blowA
  42. 42 ABAB westA · tentB · breastA · spentB
  43. 43 ABAB inlandA · treeB · strandA · seaB
  44. 44 ABAB outA · asleepB · aboutA · sheepB
  45. 45 ABAB chasedA · bandB · hasteA · fatherlandB
  46. 46 ABAB creepA · leaB · leapA · seaB
  47. 47 ABAB sightA · trainsB · lightA · plainsB
  48. 48 ABABCC songA · loveB · longA · aboveB · outC · doubtC
  49. 49 ABABCC skyA · hearB · eyeA · sphereB · nameC · shameC
  50. 50 ABABCC treesA · confestB · theseA · drestB · daredC · baredC
  51. 51 ABABCC seaA · pranceB · freeA · danceB · swearC · fearC
  52. 52 -A-ABB mood · aloneA · wood · ownA · songB · longB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
But were I thou, O ocean,7·····/˘
I would not chafe and fret6······
As thou, because a limit7·····/˘
To thy desires is set.7··˘/˘··
I would be blue, and gentle,7·····/˘
Patient, and calm, and see6/˘····
If my smiles might not tempt her,7·······
My love, to come to me.6······
I'd make my depths transparent,7····˘/˘
And still, that she should lean6······
O'er the boat's edge to ponder7·····/˘
The sights that swam between.6······
I would command strange creatures,7··˘/·/˘
Of bright hue and quick fin,6······
To stir the water near her,7···/˘··
And tempt her bare arm in.6······
I'd teach her spend the summer7·····/˘
With me: and I can tell,6······
That, were I thou, O ocean,7·····/˘
My love should love me well.6······
But on the mad cloud scudded,7·····/˘
The breeze it blew so stiff;6······
And the sad ocean bellowed,7···/˘/˘
And pounded at the cliff.6·/˘···
I heard a linnet courting7···/˘/˘
His lady in the spring:6·/˘···
His mates were idly sporting,7···/˘/˘
Nor stayed to hear him sing6······
His song of love.--4····
I fear my speech distorting7····˘/˘
His tender love.4·/˘·
The phrases of his pleading7·/˘··/˘
Were full of young delight;6····˘/
And she that gave him heeding7·····/˘
Interpreted aright6˘/˘˘˘/
His gay, sweet notes,--4····
So sadly marred in the reading,--9·/˘·˘··/˘
His tender notes.4·/˘·
And when he ceased, the hearer7·····/˘
Awaited the refrain,6˘/˘·˘/
Till swiftly perching nearer7·/˘/˘/˘
He sang his song again,6····˘/
His pretty song:--4·/˘·
Would that my verse spake clearer7·····/˘
His tender song!4·/˘·
Ye happy, airy creatures!7·/˘/˘/˘
That in the merry spring6···/˘·
Think not of what misfeatures7·······
Or cares the year may bring;6······
But unto love4····
Resign your simple natures,7˘/·/˘/˘
To tender love.4·/˘·
Dear lady, when thou frownest,7·/˘··/˘
And my true love despisest,7····˘/˘
And all thy vows disownest7····˘/˘
That sealed my venture wisest;7···/˘/˘
I think thy pride's displeasure7····˘/˘
Neglects a matchless treasure7˘/·/˘/˘
Exceeding price and measure.7˘/˘··/˘
But when again thou smilest,7··˘/·/˘
And love for love returnest,7····˘/˘
And fear with joy beguilest,7····˘/˘
And takest truth in earnest;7·····/˘
Then, though I sheer adore thee,7····˘/·
The sum of my love for thee7·······
Seems poor, scant, and unworthy.7····˘/˘
I will not let thee go.6······
Ends all our month-long love in this?9··/˘·····
Can it be summed up so,6······
Quit in a single kiss?6···/˘·
I will not let thee go.6······
I will not let thee go.6······
If thy words' breath could scare thy deeds,8········
As the soft south can blow6······
And toss the feathered seeds,6···/˘·
Then might I let thee go.6······
I will not let thee go.6······
Had not the great sun seen, I might;8········
Or were he reckoned slow6···/˘·
To bring the false to light,6······
Then might I let thee go.6······
I will not let thee go.6······
The stars that crowd the summer skies8·····/˘·
Have watched us so below6······
With all their million eyes,6···/˘·
I dare not let thee go.6······
I will not let thee go.6······
Have we not chid the changeful moon,8·····/˘·
Now rising late, and now6·/˘···
Because she set too soon,6······
And shall I let thee go?6······
I will not let thee go.6······
Have not the young flowers been content,9····/˘·˘/
Plucked ere their buds could blow,6······
To seal our sacrament?7··/˘/˘˘
I cannot let thee go.6·/˘···
I will not let thee go.6······
I hold thee by too many bands:8·····/˘·
Thou sayest farewell, and lo!6···/··
I have thee by the hands,6······
And will not let thee go.6······
I found to-day out walking7·····/˘
The flower my love loves best.7·/˘····
What, when I stooped to pluck it,7·······
Could dare my hand arrest?6····˘/
Was it a snake lay curling7·····/˘
About the root's thick crown?6······
Or did some hidden bramble7···/˘/˘
Tear my hand reaching down?6···/˘·
There was no snake uncurling,7·······
And no thorn wounded me;6···/˘·
'Twas my heart checked me, sighing7·····/˘
She is beyond the sea.6······
A poppy grows upon the shore,8·/˘·····
Bursts her twin cup in summer late:8·····/˘·
Her leaves are glaucous-green and hoar,8···/˘···
Her petals yellow, delicate.8·/˘/˘/˘˘
Oft to her cousins turns her thought,8···/˘···
In wonder if they care that she8·/˘·····
Is fed with spray for dew, and caught8········
By every gale that sweeps the sea.9·/˘˘·····
She has no lovers like the red,8···/˘···
That dances with the noble corn:8·/˘··/˘·
Her blossoms on the waves are shed,8·/˘·····
Where she stands shivering and forlorn.9···/˘˘·˘/
Sometimes when my lady sits by me9/···/˘···
My rapture's so great, that I tear8·/˘·····
My mind from the thought that she's nigh me,9·········
And strive to forget that she's there.8···˘/···
And sometimes when she is away8·/····˘/
Her absence so sorely does try me,9·/˘·/˘···
That I shut to my eyes, and assay9·······/˘
To think she is there sitting by me.9·····/˘··
Long are the hours the sun is above,10···/˘·····
But when evening comes I go home to my love.11··/˘·······
I'm away the daylight hours and more,10·˘/·/·/˘··
Yet she comes not down to open the door.10······/˘··
She does not meet me upon the stair,--9·········
She sits in my chamber and waits for me there.11····/˘·····
As I enter the room she does not move:10··/˘······
I always walk straight up to my love;9·/·······
And she lets me take my wonted place9······/˘·
At her side, and gaze in her dear dear face.10··········
There as I sit, from her head thrown back9·········
Her hair falls straight in a shadow black.9······/··
Aching and hot as my tired eyes be,10/˘····/˘··
She is all that I wish to see.8········
And in my wearied and toil-dinned ear,10···/˘···˘·
She says all things that I wish to hear.9·········
Dusky and duskier grows the room,8/˘······
Yet I see her best in the darker gloom.10·······/˘·
When the winter eves are early and cold,10··/˘··/˘··
The firelight hours are a dream of gold.10····/·····
And so I sit here night by night,8········
In rest and enjoyment of love's delight.10···˘/˘··˘/
But a knock at the door, a step on the stair11···········
Will startle, alas, my love from her chair.10·/˘˘/·····
If a stranger comes she will not stay:9··/˘·····
At the first alarm she is off and away.11···˘/····˘/
And he wonders, my guest, usurping her throne,11··/˘···/˘··
That I sit so much by myself alone.10·······/˘/
Who has not walked upon the shore,9····˘····
And who does not the morning know,8·····/˘·
The day the angry gale is o'er,8···/˘···
The hour the wind has ceased to blow?10·/˘····˘··
The horses of the strong south-west8·/˘·····
Are pastured round his tropic tent,9·/˘˘··/˘·
Careless how long the ocean's breast8/˘···/˘·
Sob on and sigh for passion spent.8·····/˘·
The frightened birds, that fled inland9·/˘˘···/·
To house in rock and tower and tree,9·····/˘··
Are gathering on the peaceful strand,9·/˘˘··/˘·
To tempt again the sunny sea;8··˘/·/˘·
Whereon the timid ships steal out8˘/·/˘···
And laugh to find their foe asleep,8······˘/
That lately scattered them about,9·/˘/˘˘···
And drave them to the fold like sheep.8········
The snow-white clouds he northward chased9·····/˘·˘
Break into phalanx, line, and band:8···/˘···
All one way to the south they haste,8········
The south, their pleasant fatherland.8···/˘/˘·
From distant hills their shadows creep,8·/˘··/··
Arrive in turn and mount the lea,8˘/······
And flit across the downs, and leap8··˘/····
Sheer off the cliff upon the sea;8········
And sail and sail far out of sight.8········
But still I watch their fleecy trains,8·····/˘·
That piling all the south with light,8·/˘·····
Dapple in France the fertile plains.8/˘···˘/·
I made another song,6··˘/˘·
In likeness of my love:6·/˘···
And sang it all day long,6······
Around, beneath, above;6······
I told my secret out,6···/˘·
That none might be in doubt.6······
I sang it to the sky,6······
That veiled his face to hear6······
How far her azure eye6···/˘·
Outdoes his splendid sphere;6·/·/˘·
But at her eyelids' name6···/··
His white clouds fled for shame.6······
I told it to the trees,6······
And to the flowers confest,7···/˘··
And said not one of these6······
Is like my lily drest;6···/˘·
Nor spathe nor petal dared6···/˘·
Vie with her body bared.6···/˘·
I shouted to the sea,6·/˘···
That set his waves a-prance;6······
Her floating hair is free,6·/˘···
Free are her feet to dance;6······
And for thy wrath, I swear6······
Her frown is more to fear.6······
And as in happy mood6···/˘·
I walked and sang alone,6····˘/
At eve beside the wood6··˘/··
I met my love, my own:6······
And sang to her the song6······
I had sung all day long.6······

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