Advice to a River Steam-Boat

Maxwell Bodenheim (1893–1954) · 1920

iambic tetrameter · 11 lines · from Advice: A Book of Poems

The brass band plays upon your decks,Like a sturdy harlot aping mirth,And people in starched shieldsStuff their passions with sweet words,Life is swishing in the air,Like a tipsy, unseen bridegroom.

O humbly grunting river boat,Take the churning water and the sunLike one who plays with his own chainsAnd flings their turmoil to the sky.Only a voice can leap above high walls.

Words in this poem

starched a.
Stiffened with starch.
unseen a.
Not seen or discovered.
bridegroom n.
A man newly married, or just about to be married. [OE. bridegome, brudgume, AS. br (akin to OS. br, D. bruidegom, bruigom, OHG. pr, MHG. briutegome, G. bräutigam); AS. br bride + guma man, akin to Goth. guma, Ic]
humbly adv.
With humility; lowly.
churning n.
The act of one who churns.
turmoil v. t.
To harass with commotion; to disquiet; to worry.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Advice to a River Steam-Boat is in the public domain. This text is taken from Advice: A Book of Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #60252; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Advice to a River Steam-Boat is 11 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%).

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Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The brass band plays upon your decks,8········
Like a sturdy harlot aping mirth,9··/˘/˘/˘·
And people in starched shields7·/˘··˘·
Stuff their passions with sweet words,7··/˘···
Life is swishing in the air,7··/˘···
Like a tipsy, unseen bridegroom.8··/˘˘//·
O humbly grunting river boat,8·/˘/˘/˘·
Take the churning water and the sun9··/˘/˘···
Like one who plays with his own chains8········
And flings their turmoil to the sky.8···/····
Only a voice can leap above high walls.10/˘········

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