Advice to a Butter-Cup

Maxwell Bodenheim (1893–1954) · 1920

trochaic pentameter · 11 lines · from Advice: A Book of Poems

Undistinguished butter-cupLost among myriads of others,To the red ant eyeing youYou are giant stillness.He pauses on the boulder of a clod,Baffled by your nearness to the sky.But to the black loam at your feetYou are the atom of a pent-up dream.

Undistinguished butter-cup,Take your little breath of contemplation,Undisturbed by haughty tricks of space.

Words in this poem

stillness n.
The quality or state of being still; quietness; silence; calmness; inactivity.
boulder n.
A large stone, worn smooth or rounded by the action of water; a large pebble. [Cf. Sw. bullra to roar, rattle, Dan. buldre, dial. Sw. bullersteen larger kind of pebbles; perh. akin to E. bellow.]
clod n.
A lump or mass, especially of earth, turf, or clay. [OE. clodde, latter form of clot. See Clot.]
haughty a.
High; lofty; bold. [OE. hautein, F. hautain, fr. haut high, OF. also halt, fr. L. altus. See Altitude.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Advice to a Butter-Cup is in the public domain. This text is taken from Advice: A Book of Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #60252; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Maxwell Bodenheim, Advice to a Butter-Cup, in Advice: A Book of Poems (1920), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #60252, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/bodenheim-advice/advice-to-a-butter-cup.html, id L23365.

Form and metre

Advice to a Butter-Cup is 11 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is trochaic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 83%).

See other poems in trochaic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Undistinguished butter-cup7·˘/˘/˘·
Lost among myriads of others,9···/˘˘·/˘
To the red ant eyeing you7····/˘·
You are giant stillness.6··/˘/˘
He pauses on the boulder of a clod,10·/˘··/˘···
Baffled by your nearness to the sky.9/˘··/˘···
But to the black loam at your feet8········
You are the atom of a pent-up dream.10···/˘·····
Undistinguished butter-cup,7·˘/˘/˘·
Take your little breath of contemplation,10··/˘···˘/˘
Undisturbed by haughty tricks of space.9·˘/·/˘···

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