Presentiment

Ambrose Bierce (1842–1914) · 1903

iambic tetrameter · ABBA · 20 lines · from Shapes of Clay

With saintly grace and reverent tread,She walked among the graves with me;Her every foot-fall seemed to beA benediction on the dead.

The guardian spirit of the placeShe seemed, and I some ghost forlornSurprised in the untimely mornShe made with her resplendent face.

Moved by some waywardness of will,Three paces from the path apartShe stepped and stood--my prescient heartWas stricken with a passing chill.

The folk-lore of the years agoneRemembering, I smiled and thought:"Who shudders suddenly at naught,His grave is being trod upon."

But now I know that it was moreThan idle fancy. O, my sweet,I did not think such little feetCould make a buried heart so sore!

Words in this poem

saintly a.
Like a saint; becoming a holy person.
ghost n.
The spirit; the soul of man. [OE. gast, gost, soul, spirit, AS. gast breath, spirit, soul; akin to OS. g spirit, soul, D. geest, G. geist, and prob. to E. gaze, ghastly.]
forlorn a.
Deserted abandoned; lost. [OE., p.p. of forlesen to lose utterly, AS. forleósan (p.p. forloren); pref. for- + leósan (in comp.) to lose; cf. D. verliezen to lose, G. verlieren, Sw. förlor]
morn n.
The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
prescient a.
Having knowledge of coming events; foreseeing; conscious beforehand. [L. praesciens, -entis, p. pr. of praescire to foreknow; prae before + scire to know: cf. F. prescient. See Science.]
stricken p. p.
Struck; smitten; wounded; as, the stricken deer.
folk n.
In Anglo-Saxon times, the people of a group of townships or villages; a community; a tribe. [AS. folc; akin to D. volk, OS. & OHG. folk, G. volk, Icel. f, Sw. & Dan. folk, Lith. pulkas crowd, and perh. to E. follow.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Presentiment is in the public domain. This text is taken from Shapes of Clay (1903), Project Gutenberg ebook #12658; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Ambrose Bierce, Presentiment, in Shapes of Clay (1903), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #12658, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/bierce-shapes-of-clay/presentiment.html, id L28113.

Form and metre

Presentiment is 20 lines in 5 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABBA. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%).

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBA treadA · meB · beB · deadA
  2. 2 ABBA placeA · forlornB · mornB · faceA
  3. 3 ABBA willA · apartB · heartB · chillA
  4. 4 ABBA agoneA · thoughtB · naughtB · uponA
  5. 5 ABBA moreA · sweetB · feetB · soreA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
With saintly grace and reverent tread,8·/˘··/˘·
She walked among the graves with me;8········
Her every foot-fall seemed to be8·/˘·····
A benediction on the dead.8··˘/˘···
The guardian spirit of the place8·/˘˘/···
She seemed, and I some ghost forlorn8······˘/
Surprised in the untimely morn8˘/··˘/˘·
She made with her resplendent face.8····˘/˘·
Moved by some waywardness of will,8········
Three paces from the path apart8·/˘···˘/
She stepped and stood--my prescient heart8·····/˘·
Was stricken with a passing chill.8·/˘··/˘·
The folk-lore of the years agone8······˘/
Remembering, I smiled and thought:8˘/˘˘····
"Who shudders suddenly at naught,8·/˘/˘˘··
His grave is being trod upon."8···/˘···
But now I know that it was more8········
Than idle fancy. O, my sweet,8·/˘/˘···
I did not think such little feet8·····/˘·
Could make a buried heart so sore!8···/˘···

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