The Moon’s Funeral I

Hilaire Belloc (1870–1953) · 1923

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 13 lines · from Sonnets and Verse

The Moon is dead. I saw her die.She in a drifting cloud was drest,She lay along the uncertain west,A dream to see.And very low she spake to me:“I go where none may understand,I fade into the nameless land,And there must lie perpetually.”And therefore I,And therefore loudly, loudly IAnd highAnd very piteously make cry:“The Moon is dead. I saw her die.”

Words in this poem

nameless a.
Without a name; not having been given a name; as, a nameless star.
perpetually adv.
In a perpetual manner; constantly; continually.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Moon’s Funeral I is in the public domain. This text is taken from Sonnets and Verse, Project Gutenberg ebook #60663; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Hilaire Belloc, The Moon’s Funeral I, in Sonnets and Verse (1923), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #60663, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/belloc-sonnets-verse/the-moon-s-funeral-i.html, id L21667.

Form and metre

The Moon’s Funeral I is 13 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 77% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 93%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBCCDD-AAAAA dieA · drestB · westB · seeC · meC · understandD · landD · perpetually · iA · iA · highA · cryA · dieA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The Moon is dead. I saw her die.8········
She in a drifting cloud was drest,8···/˘···
She lay along the uncertain west,9··˘/·˘/˘·
A dream to see.4····
And very low she spake to me:8·/˘·····
“I go where none may understand,8······˘/
I fade into the nameless land,8·····/˘·
And there must lie perpetually.”9····˘/˘˘˘
And therefore I,4····
And therefore loudly, loudly I8···/˘/˘·
And high2··
And very piteously make cry:8·/˘·····
“The Moon is dead. I saw her die.”8········

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