Homage II

Hilaire Belloc (1870–1953) · 1923

iambic tetrameter · 6 lines · from Sonnets and Verse

For you are younger than the mornings areThat in the mountains break;When upland shepherds see their only starPale on the dawn, and makeIn his surcease the hours,The early hours of all their happy circuit take.

Words in this poem

surcease v. t.
To cause to cease; to end.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Homage II is in the public domain. This text is taken from Sonnets and Verse, Project Gutenberg ebook #60663; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Hilaire Belloc, Homage II, in Sonnets and Verse (1923), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #60663, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/belloc-sonnets-verse/homage-ii.html, id L21666.

Form and metre

Homage II is 6 lines in a single stanza. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic tetrameter.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB-B areA · breakB · starA · makeB · hours · takeB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
For you are younger than the mornings are10···/˘··/˘·
That in the mountains break;6···/˘·
When upland shepherds see their only star10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Pale on the dawn, and make6······
In his surcease the hours,7··˘/·/˘
The early hours of all their happy circuit take.12·/˘/···/˘/˘·

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