The Fanatic

Hilaire Belloc (1870–1953) · 1923

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 74 lines · from Sonnets and Verse

Last night in Compton Street, Soho,A man whom many of you knowGave up the ghost at half past nine.That evening he had been to dineAt Gressington’s--an act unwise,But not the cause of his demise.The doctors all agree that heWas touched with cardiac atrophyAccelerated (more or less)By lack of proper food, distress,Uncleanliness, and loss of sleep.He was a man that could not keepHis money (when he had the same)Because of creditors who cameAnd took it from him; and he gaveSo freely that he could not save.But all the while a sort of whimPersistently remained with him,Half admirable, half absurd:To keep his word, to keep his word....By which he did not mean what youAnd I would mean (of payments dueOr punctual rental of the Flat--He was a deal too mad for that)But--as he put it with a fineAbandon, foolish or divine--But “That great word which every manGave God before his life began.”It was a sacred word, he said,Which comforted the pathless deadAnd made God smile when it was shownUnforfeited, before the Throne.And this (he said) he meant to holdIn spite of debt, and hate, and cold;And this (he said) he meant to showAs passport to the Wards below.He boasted of it and gave praiseTo his own self through all his days.He wrote a record to preserveHow steadfastly he did not swerveFrom keeping it; how stiff he stoodIts guardian, and maintained it good.He had two witnesses to swearHe kept it once in Berkeley Square.(Where hardly anything survives)And, through the loneliest of livesHe kept it clean, he kept it still,Down to the last extremes of ill.So when he died, of many friendsWho came in crowds from all the endsOf London, that it might be knownThey knew the man who died alone,Some, who had thought his mood sublimeAnd sent him soup from time to time,Said, “Well, you cannot make them fitThe world, and there’s an end of it!”But others, wondering at him, said:“The man that kept his word is dead!”Then angrily, a certain thirdCried, “Gentlemen, he kept his word.And as a man whom beasts surroundTumultuous, on a little moundStands Archer, for one dreadful hour,Because a Man is born to Power--And still, to daunt the pack below,Twangs the clear purpose of his bow,Till overwhelmed he dares to fall:So stood this bulwark of us all.He kept his word as none but heCould keep it, and as did not we.And round him as he kept his wordTo-day’s diseased and faithless herd,A moment loud, a moment strong,But foul forever, rolled along.”

Words in this poem

soho interj.
Ho; -- a word used in calling from a distant place; a sportsman's halloo.
ghost n.
The spirit; the soul of man. [OE. gast, gost, soul, spirit, AS. gast breath, spirit, soul; akin to OS. g spirit, soul, D. geest, G. geist, and prob. to E. gaze, ghastly.]
dine v. i.
To eat the principal regular meal of the day; to take dinner. [F. dîner, OF. disner, LL. disnare, contr. fr. an assumed disjunare; dis- + an assumed junare (OF. juner) to fast, for L. jejunare, fr. jejunus fasting. See Jeju]
admirable a.
Fitted to excite wonder; wonderful; marvelous. [L. admirabilis: cf. F. admirable.]
punctual a.
Consisting in a point; limited to a point; unextended. [F. ponctuel (cf. Sp.puntual, It. puntuale), from L. punctum point. See Point.]
rental n.
A schedule, account, or list of rents, with the names of the tenants, etc.; a rent roll. [LL. rentale, fr. renta. See Rent income.]
pathless a.
Having no beaten path or way; untrodden; impenetrable; as, pathless woods.
passport n.
Permission to pass; a document given by the competent officer of a state, permitting the person therein named to pass or travel from place to place, without molestation, by land or by water. [F. passeport, orig., a permission to leave a port or to sail into it; passer to pass + port a port, harbor. See Pass, and Port a harbor.]
wrote v. i.
To root with the snout. See 1st Root. [OE. wroten. See 1st Root.]
steadfastly adv.
In a steadfast manner; firmly.
dreadful a.
Full of dread or terror; fearful.
daunt v. t.
To overcome; to conquer. [OF. danter, F. dompter to tame, subdue, fr. L. domitare, v. intens. of domare to tame. See Tame.]
bulwark n.
A rampart; a fortification; a bastion or outwork. [Akin to D. bolwerk, G. bollwerk, Sw. bolwerk, Dan. bolvärk, bulvärk, rampart; akin to G. bohle plank, and werk work, defense. See Bole stem, and Work, n., and c]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Fanatic is in the public domain. This text is taken from Sonnets and Verse, Project Gutenberg ebook #60663; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The Fanatic is 74 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 89% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 87%).

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 --AABB--CCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLLMMNNOOPPQQRRSSTT--UUVVWWXXYYZZaabbcc--ddeeffgg soho · know · nineA · dineA · unwiseB · demiseB · he · atrophy · lessC · distressC · sleepD · keepD · sameE · cameE · gaveF · saveF · whimG · himG · absurdH · wordH · youI · dueI · flatJ · thatJ · fineK · divineK · manL · beganL · saidM · deadM · shownN · throneN · holdO · coldO · showP · belowP · praiseQ · daysQ · preserveR · swerveR · stoodS · goodS · swearT · squareT · survives · lives · stillU · illU · friendsV · endsV · knownW · aloneW · sublimeX · timeX · fitY · itY · saidZ · deadZ · thirda · worda · surroundb · moundb · hourc · powerc · below · bow · falld · alld · hee · wee · wordf · herdf · strongg · alongg
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Last night in Compton Street, Soho,8···/˘·/˘
A man whom many of you know8···/˘···
Gave up the ghost at half past nine.8········
That evening he had been to dine8·/˘·····
At Gressington’s--an act unwise,8······˘/
But not the cause of his demise.8······˘/
The doctors all agree that he8·/˘·˘/··
Was touched with cardiac atrophy9···/˘·/˘˘
Accelerated (more or less)8˘/˘·˘···
By lack of proper food, distress,8···/˘·˘/
Uncleanliness, and loss of sleep.8········
He was a man that could not keep8········
His money (when he had the same)8·/˘·····
Because of creditors who came8···/˘˘··
And took it from him; and he gave8········
So freely that he could not save.8·/˘·····
But all the while a sort of whim8········
Persistently remained with him,8˘/˘˘˘/··
Half admirable, half absurd:8·/˘˘˘·˘/
To keep his word, to keep his word....8········
By which he did not mean what you8········
And I would mean (of payments due8·····/˘·
Or punctual rental of the Flat--8·/˘/˘···
He was a deal too mad for that)8········
But--as he put it with a fine8········
Abandon, foolish or divine--8˘/˘/˘·˘/
But “That great word which every man8·····/˘·
Gave God before his life began.”8······˘/
It was a sacred word, he said,8···/˘···
Which comforted the pathless dead8·/˘˘·/˘·
And made God smile when it was shown8········
Unforfeited, before the Throne.8········
And this (he said) he meant to hold8········
In spite of debt, and hate, and cold;8········
And this (he said) he meant to show8········
As passport to the Wards below.8·/······
He boasted of it and gave praise8·/˘·····
To his own self through all his days.8········
He wrote a record to preserve8···/˘·˘/
How steadfastly he did not swerve8·/·˘····
From keeping it; how stiff he stood8·/˘·····
Its guardian, and maintained it good.8·/˘·˘/··
He had two witnesses to swear8···/˘˘··
He kept it once in Berkeley Square.8·····/˘·
(Where hardly anything survives)8·/˘/˘·˘/
And, through the loneliest of lives8········
He kept it clean, he kept it still,8········
Down to the last extremes of ill.8····˘/··
So when he died, of many friends8·····/˘·
Who came in crowds from all the ends8········
Of London, that it might be known8·/˘·····
They knew the man who died alone,8······˘/
Some, who had thought his mood sublime8······˘/
And sent him soup from time to time,8········
Said, “Well, you cannot make them fit8···/˘···
The world, and there’s an end of it!”8········
But others, wondering at him, said:8·/˘/˘···
“The man that kept his word is dead!”8········
Then angrily, a certain third8·/˘˘·/˘·
Cried, “Gentlemen, he kept his word.8·/˘˘····
And as a man whom beasts surround8······˘/
Tumultuous, on a little mound8·/˘··/˘·
Stands Archer, for one dreadful hour,9·/˘··/˘/˘
Because a Man is born to Power--9·······/˘
And still, to daunt the pack below,8········
Twangs the clear purpose of his bow,8···/˘···
Till overwhelmed he dares to fall:8··˘/····
So stood this bulwark of us all.8···/˘···
He kept his word as none but he8········
Could keep it, and as did not we.8········
And round him as he kept his word8········
To-day’s diseased and faithless herd,8··˘/·/˘·
A moment loud, a moment strong,8·/˘··/˘·
But foul forever, rolled along.”8··˘/˘·˘/

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