The Early Morning

Hilaire Belloc (1870–1953) · 1923

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 4 lines · from Sonnets and Verse

The moon on the one hand, the dawn on the other:The moon is my sister, the dawn is my brother.The moon on my left and the dawn on my right.My brother, good morning: my sister, good night.

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The Early Morning is in the public domain. This text is taken from Sonnets and Verse, Project Gutenberg ebook #60663; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Hilaire Belloc, The Early Morning, in Sonnets and Verse (1923), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #60663, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/belloc-sonnets-verse/the-early-morning.html, id L21650.

Form and metre

The Early Morning is 4 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets: octosyllabic couplets. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic tetrameter.

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB otherA · brotherA · rightB · nightB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The moon on the one hand, the dawn on the other:12··········/˘
The moon is my sister, the dawn is my brother.12····/˘····/˘
The moon on my left and the dawn on my right.11···········
My brother, good morning: my sister, good night.11·/˘·/˘·/˘··

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