A Snowy Night

William Barnes (1801–1886) · 1844–1862

iambic tetrameter · ABABCDCD · 24 lines · from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect

'Twer at night, an' a keen win' did blowVrom the east under peaele-twinklen stars,All a-zweepen along the white snow;On the groun', on the trees, on the bars,Vrom the hedge where the win' russled drough,There a light-russlen snow-doust did vall;An' noo pleaece wer a-vound that wer lew,But the shed, or the ivy-hung wall.

Then I knock'd at the wold passage doorWi' the win'-driven snow on my locks;Till, a-comen along the cwold vloor,There my Jenny soon answer'd my knocks.Then the wind, by the door a-swung wide,Flung some snow in her clear-bloomen feaece,An' she blink'd wi' her head all a-zide,An' a-chucklen, went back to her pleaece.

An' in there, as we zot roun' the brands,Though the talkers wer mainly the men,Bloomen Jeaene, wi' her work in her hands,Did put in a good word now an' then.An' when I took my leave, though so bleaekWer the weather, she went to the door,Wi' a smile, an' a blush on the cheaekThat the snow had a-smitten avore.

Words in this poem

wold n.
A wood; a forest. [OE. wold, wald, AS. weald, wald, a wood, forest; akin to OFries. & OS. wald, D. woud, G. wald, Icel. völlr, a field, and probably to Gr. va a garden, inclosure.]
jenny n.
A familiar or pet form of the proper name Jane.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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A Snowy Night is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect, Project Gutenberg ebook #21785; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

A Snowy Night is 24 lines in 3 stanzas of 8 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABCDCD, complete in 2 of its 3 stanzas. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic tetrameter. 96% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.0 syllables. 17% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB---- blowA · starsB · snowA · barsB · drough · vall · lew · wall
  2. 2 ABABCDCD doorA · locksB · vloorA · knocksB · wideC · feaeceD · zideC · pleaeceD
  3. 3 ABABCDCD brandsA · menB · handsA · thenB · bleaekC · doorD · cheaekC · avoreD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
'Twer at night, an' a keen win' did blow9·········
Vrom the east under peaele-twinklen stars,10··········
All a-zweepen along the white snow;9····˘/···
On the groun', on the trees, on the bars,9·········
Vrom the hedge where the win' russled drough,8········
There a light-russlen snow-doust did vall;9·········
An' noo pleaece wer a-vound that wer lew,9·········
But the shed, or the ivy-hung wall.9·····/˘··
Then I knock'd at the wold passage door9······/˘·
Wi' the win'-driven snow on my locks;8···/····
Till, a-comen along the cwold vloor,9····˘/···
There my Jenny soon answer'd my knocks.9··/˘·/˘··
Then the wind, by the door a-swung wide,9·········
Flung some snow in her clear-bloomen feaece,9·········
An' she blink'd wi' her head all a-zide,9·········
An' a-chucklen, went back to her pleaece.9·········
An' in there, as we zot roun' the brands,9·········
Though the talkers wer mainly the men,9··/˘·/˘··
Bloomen Jeaene, wi' her work in her hands,9·········
Did put in a good word now an' then.9·········
An' when I took my leave, though so bleaek9·········
Wer the weather, she went to the door,9··/˘·····
Wi' a smile, an' a blush on the cheaek9·········
That the snow had a-smitten avore.9·····/˘··

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